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Posted: 19 years ago
excellent part
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: guli444

Arre no crying!! if u cry i cry too!!!! Our bond is that strong!!😭😭😭



i know..but..u r making me cry by not continuing soon!!!😭😭😭
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: guli444

I like how they look but i wouldnt wear them!!!!




cuz ur soooo old-fashioned....its fashion dude...get into the style/rhythm!!!😆😆.......but they are sooooo comfy!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Dhruv and Khushi: 24
Dev:20
Neha:17
Vijay and Viral:12
Divya:23
Rohan:21
Raj 17(quints)
Seema 17
Rahul 17
Radha 17
Akash 17
Megha: 23
Nisha and Amar's son: Nilesh (17)
Anjali and Rohan: Rahul (15)
Reema and Amit: (1 boy: 7 years old)
Rani and Vikram (1 girl Anita (6 years old)


Part 152

There is now tension in the house

Dk hasn't come out of his room for 2 hours now

Disha tries to go in her room

But the door is locked!!

She knocks on the door

Disha; Dk.. open the door!!!! Please!!

She knocks!!!!

Disha; Dk please open the door!!

Dk is lying on the bed!!!

Disha comes back down

Ved: What happened Dish? Where is brother?

Disha; He's not opening the door!!!

Ved: what?

Everyone is shocked!!!!

Ved tries to go but no use!!

Then Disha remembers they have a spare key.. to their door

She gets it!!

She opens the door

Dk is lying on the bed staring into space

Disha: Dk???

She goes by him!!

Disha: Dk??

She sits next to him

Disha; DK say something!!!!!!

Dk is just lost in his thoughts!!

Everyone else comes in

Megha: Dad!!!!

Dk gets out of his thoughts!!

And sees everyone….

Disha; Are you okay??

Dk: Yeah I am fine!!

He gets up and leaves!!!

Disha; Dk where are you going???

Dk: Going to take care of some business!!!

He leaves

Disha is screaming at Dk

But Dk isn't listening

Neha comes out sees what the fuss is all about!!!!

Neha; Whats going on?

M: Dad went somewhere!!!

Neha: Where?

M: Don't know!!!

Dk arrives their Neha's parents house!!!

He is standing by the door….

They are both shocked!!!!!

Dad: You here?? What are you doing here???

Dk: What did you tell Neha????

They are shocked!!!!

Dad; I didn't tell her anything!!

Dk: I asked you what did you tell Neha??

Dad: I didn't tell her anything!!!

Dk slaps him!!!!

DK: What did you tell Neha???????? Why did you lie to her??? U are making me look like the bad guy??? Why did you lie to Neha???

Dad doesn't say anything!!!

Dk: What do u think?? Putting neg things in her head… she is going to come running back to you!!!! Even if what you said was true she still wouldn't come back to you!

They are both shocked!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: U better watch it!! I am Dk Saigal I can do anything!!!!

He turns and leaves…

And right behind him is Neha standing!!!!!!!!!

Dk is shocked!!!!!!!!!

He looks at her then he turns and looks at them!!

Dk just leaves w/o saying anything!!!!!

Neha is shocked!!!

She gives them an evil look!

Neha: U can stoop this low…. I am disgusted!!!!!!!!!!! From now on.. you stay away from me!!!!!!! I don't want you near me at all!! Got it?? U better!!!

She leaves

Dk comes home

Disha: Where were you?

Dk: took care of business

He walks back into his room

Neha comes

Neha: Daddy!!!!

Dk stops

He doesn't face her!

Neha comes in front of him!!

Dk doesn't look at her

Neha; U wont look at me??

Dk doesn't

Neha; I am sorry!!!

Everyone is looking on

Neha; Daddy.. wont u say something to me!!

Dk doesn't

Neha: Look my clothes… my jeans…u "aint gonna" talk to me!!!

Dk still doesn't!!

Neha starts smiling!!!

Neha: Daddy.. I have to tell you something!! I wasn't gonna tell you this…. But…

Dk still doesn't look

Neha: I have a……um…um… Daddy look at me!!

He isn't!!

Neha: I have a bf!!!!!!

Dk quickly looks at her!!

Neha: U looked at me!!! Yes!!!! I knew you would!!!! He fell for it!! Yes!!!

Neha smiles at Dk!!

Dk cant resist so he smiles too!!!

Neha hugs him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



The End!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
very very nice
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part
i am glad that neha has found out the truth and i am also glad that everything is back to normal with dk and neha.
please write soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
yay!!!!!!!!!!!..........happiness is in the house!!!!!!!!!again!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
Dhruv and Khushi: 24
Dev:20
Neha:17
Vijay and Viral:12
Divya:23
Rohan:21
Raj 17(quints)
Seema 17
Rahul 17
Radha 17
Akash 17
Megha: 23
Nisha and Amar's son: Nilesh (17)
Anjali and Rohan: Rahul (15)
Reema and Amit: (1 boy: 7 years old)
Rani and Vikram (1 girl Anita (6 years old)



Part 153

1 week later:

Its time for Neha to leave

She has finished packing her things!!

Its time for her to leave

Everyone is out

They hug her!!!

Neha: Bhabhi.. make sure you take care of Dad!!!! And if he does anything let me know!

Dk is listening!! and is smiling a little bit!!

She hugs Dhruv and K!!

She hugs Disha

Disha cries!! and tells her to take care of herself!!

Neha: I will mom dont worry!!

She comes to Dk

Dk: Once you are gone... there will be a party!!!!!

Neha; Dad??

Dk: what?? Its a celebration!!!

Neha: no it wont!

Dk: Yes it will!!

Neha: Then u will you argue with....

Dk: Whoever comes in my way!!

Neha: Daddy!!!

SHe hugs him!!!

Dk: Take care of yourself!!

Neha: I will!!

DK; and please.. one request...

Neha: What?

Dk: Dont wear rags in class!!!

Neha; Dad?

Dk: Last one before leaving!!

She smiles!!!

She leaves!!

She says bye to everyone and she leaves!!

So now the house is back to normal

Everyone does there same old things!!

Dk is talking about getting Khushi married...

K is like i dont want to!!

Megha: Yes we have to

K: Why?

M: Becuz... i can have dad all to myself!!!!

K: No!! He's mine!!

M: Not for long he isnt!!

They all love Dk!!!

They are always fighting over him!

M: Dad... wont u happy when K leaves!

Dk: Once you think about yeah!

K: What?

DK: Just kidding!!!

But K does think about that she will have to leave this house

Even though she doesnt want

Dk was always close to her!!!

K was very attached to Dk as well!!

Dk and Disha have a guy in mind for her

They check it out

He seems like a nice guy

They want to meet K!!

Dk and Disha tell K about it

So she decides to see the guy

She likes him

The guys mom wants to talk to K alone

So they both go

His mom is telling her that.... think about accepting this proposal

K is shocked!!! thinking why?

He has a very bad temper!!!!!!!!

He gets angry easily!

No one can ever control his anger!!!

K is like whoa!!

She tells her that she doesnt want to force her to get married to him

K says that give her 2-3 days and she will decide!!!



The End!

Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 👏 👏 keep up the good work dear.....waiting.......for ur next one
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Posted: 19 years ago
great job!

guli every one likes dk!

i hope that guy is the bully from kushi and dhruv's childhood school.

please write soon!

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