hey guys i am very very happy with the response to this...i hope the response continues to be the same..ok guys coming back to the update, it may be a short 1 as i still have to decide how d story will proceed but this update is for all you guys who wanted me to update..so here is part 1...
part 1
A bright sunday morning...the sun rays hitting the beautiful faces of viren and jeevika who are sleeping peacefully..they r lost in their sweet sleep...just then the alarm rings..
jeevika- viren ji please aap alarm band kar dijiye na
viren- jeevika please sone do na
jeevika- viren ji please alarm band kar dijiye..is alarm k wajah se hum dono bhi nahi so payenge..please virenji(still sleepy)
viren, with no other choice left, got up and turned off the alarm...after closing the alarm, he just kept on looking at jeevika's face which was glowing because of the sun...according to viren she was the most beautiful girl on this planet..he loved her immensely...he wished that this moment should never end but unfortunately after looking at the time he forgot everything, he started waking jeevika up..
viren- jeevika utho...7.30 ho gaya hai...hume 8 baje k pehle dining table par jaana hai...
jeeevika- viren ji kya subah subah mazak kar rahe ho?
viren-are jeevika mai mazak nahi kar raha hu...sachi...please jaldi utho ..
jeevika realized what viren was saying and she woke up with a jerk...
jeevika- virenji aapne mujhe pehle kyun nahi uthaya? hum kitne late ho gaye hai...oh god...
viren( holding jeevika by her shoulders)- jeevika relax, aadha ghanta hai na...ho jayega...abhi time waste mat karo aur jao ready ho jao..
jevika- ji mai bas abhi gayi aur abhi ayi
viren- waise jeevika mai soch raha tha ki waise bhi hum late ho gaye hai toh kyu na saath me naha le?:P
jeevika(blushing)- viren jii please
vire- oh ho someoe is blushing..
jeevika- viren ji please hatiye...mai nahane jaa rahi hu AKELE...
viren- theek hai yaar jao..mai tumhe baad me dekh loonga..
jeevika- dekh lena
they both freshened up separately n went to the dining table
at the dining table
dadaji- viren
viren- ji dadaji
dadaji- woh beta hum soch rahe the ki swamini beta abhi abhi theek hui hai, toh hum sab bahar ghumne jate hai
viren- dadaji aap log jaiye waise bhi yaha kisiko toh kaam ka dhyaan rakhna padega na...toh mai yaha rukhta hu..aap log jaiye.
jeevika- aur mai bhi ruk jati hu...viren ji ka khyal rakhne k liye koi toh hona chahiye na...
dadaji- theek hai bete..tum log ruk jao..waise bhi virat aur manvi apne honeymoon k liye gaye hai...tum log ruk jao
v and j- ji dadaji
dadaji- theek hai phir hum log bas aaj hi nikalte hai...
v- theek hai..phir main aap sab ko chod k aa jaunga...
dadaji- theek hai..
they all leave for their picnic,,,,viren leaves them and comes back home...
virika in their room
viren- jeevika waise mai soch raha tha ki kyun na hum log kidhar bahar ghum k aa jaye?
jeevika- viren ji yeh aap kya keh rahe ho? aapka kaam? aur waise bhi agar aapko bahar ghumne hi jaana tha toh hum apni family k saath chale jate na..alag se kyu?
viren- are jeevika tum samajh nahi rahi ho...u know privacy?
jeevika- lekin virenji ghar pe toh waise bhi koi nahi hai toh privacy toh wise bhi ho gayi
vien- hadd hai yaar jeevs, main kabse tumhe manane ki koshish kar raha hu lekin tum ho ki manne ko hi tayaar nahi ho...dekho hamare jhagde chal rahe the aur hume ek dusre ke saath samay bitane ka mauka bhi nahi ,mila...toh plz mere liye?
jeevika- mere pyaare virenji mai toh bas mazak kar rahi thi...theek hai hum lunch k liye bahar jaate hai...mai tayaar hokar ati hu...
viren- acha ji yeh sab mujhe pareshaan karne k liye tha
jeevika- ji viren ji..
viren- chalo abh jao aur tayaar hokar aa jao...
thats it guys...do tell me ow this part was..n i atleast want 30 likes...i am sending pms to more than 50 ppl so i atleast want 30 likes n the next update wil be on page 9...so plz tart commenting liking,...silent readers please wake up n start commenting...i wont update till d above demands r met:P
precap- virika lunch date
virika are shocked to see someone..
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