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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Soha. . .u knw. . .agar tu mere saamne hoti toh,r8 nw i would have killd u. . . .
I said na. .i love ur works. . .
And ,yeh ff kab likha tune haan. . .mujhe iska pm bhi nahi mila. .
Jaa. .m not gona talk 2 u. . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
i read ur first chappy, it was amazing

rey nt in st louis nd remaining gang in clg
they doing masti nd all
krisha bonding was nice yaar
swayam lattoo on sharon n she ignore him

i m waiting for ur update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Soha. . .u knw. . .agar tu mere saamne hoti toh,r8 nw i would have killd u. . . .
I said na. .i love ur works. . .
And ,yeh ff kab likha tune haan. . .mujhe iska pm bhi nahi mila. .
Jaa. .m not gona talk 2 u. . . .




Sorry dear..
Naraz mut ho.
May b jub maine ye ff likhni start ki tub hum friends naa hon.
Thanks 4 loving my works.

Peetna mut aaj bhi update nahi kar rahi.
Net buhut slow chal raha hai meri koi ghalti nahi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Soha. . .u knw. . .agar tu mere saamne hoti toh,r8 nw i would have killd u. . . .
I said na. .i love ur works. . .
And ,yeh ff kab likha tune haan. . .mujhe iska pm bhi nahi mila. .
Jaa. .m not gona talk 2 u. . . .


U should kill her madhu iski himat kaise hui aisa bolne ki
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Hey soha amazing update yaar new style lovely
Update fast
And pm me whn u updated
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Sohad3fan


hmm. . .ok. . .net working slow. .hmm. . .thk hai,bt madam agar kal mujhe update nahi mila na. . .toh saare jhoota,chappal,sandle, even eggs and tomatoes sab phek-phek ke tujhe marungi.. . .u knw m damm serious. . . .

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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Hello People!

What should I do. Sometimes I think I should update and sometimes I shouldn't.
Confused😕
Actually my net is working really slow so I am afraid my work shouldn't be lost.
Well! Lets start writing..
Lets see what happens.
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Kriya in front of mirror.. singing a song in her melodious voice..giving herself final touches for the party. In that while her mobile rings..

Kr: Hello..
Sh: Hello ki kuch lagti kub se tera wait kar rahi hoon aur tu hai k mirror k saamne se hatne ka naam hi nahi le rahi.
Kr: Sorry my dear bus aarahi hoon naa.
Sh: Aajao warna.
Kr: Ok baba I am coming.

Kriya ended the call and rushed to Sharon who was waiting for her in the car.

Sh: Huuu ho gai khatam kriya madam ki tiarian.
Kr: Acha yaar ab bus bhi kar itna bhi time nahi lagaya. And you are the only one whom I let to show me attitude you know.
Sh: I know and you are the only one whom I show attitude because you are my dearie..
Both started laughing..
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Boy: What the hell. Where is that class. or ye college ko kia hua hai..

(The boy bumped into someone)

Girl: What the hell.. Can't you see.. People are blind.. Can't you see I am holding these bottles.
Boy: I am sorry( lifted his head up which was down gathering the girls's stuff which fall down due to thier takkar😆. He was mesmerized to see such a beauty in front of him)
Girl: Oye Mr aaise kia dekh rahe ho. Aaj se pehle koi larki nahi dekhi kia. Meri help karo ye cheezain uthane may jo tum ne girai hain.
Boy: Maine girai hain. Miss dekho maine pehle hi sorry bol diya hai warna Reyansh Singhania kisi ko sorry nahi bolta.
Girl: Oh Mr Reyaansh apna so called attitude apne pass hi rakho kiun k koi Kriya Ghai ko bhi attitude nahi dikhata.

(People started gathering there by listening the loud argument between two)
Swayam and Vicky were trying to see whats happening there but they were not able to because of the big crowed but soon Swayam found place to go in front. He was shocked to see the person in front of him.

Sw: Rey tu...
Rey: Swayam tu yahan..
Sw: You here...I mean how..😲
Rey: Question Answers baad may pehle meri iss mahrani who thinks she is a attitude girl se jaan churwao.
Kr: You...(Again was going to say something when she was cut by Sharon who was watching all this)
Sh: Kriya calm down..
Sw: Yaa kriya. He didn't did it on purpose. He is a very nice guy.
Kr: Oho ye or nice. Jaante kia ho tum iss k baare may..
Sw: Hum donon...(He was cut by Kriya)
Kr: Lets go Sharon.. We have to start our party.. Iss ko to main baad may dekh loon gi..(said pointing at Rey)

She went away looking at rey with her beautiful killer eyes holding Sharon's hand.

Rey to himself...Kia cheez hai yaar...smiling...Miss attitude...

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Here ends my update for today..
I know k KriYaansh and SwaRon romance k baghair kuch ziada achi nahi lagti koi bhi update but fiqar not wo bhi buhut jaldi aaye gaa.😉

Appreciation and criticism both welcome..😊

Lo Madhu ye update tere liye..
Ab please nooo joote, chapplain and all..

Hope you people like it..
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Soha!


Edited by Sohad3fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Amazing updte
kriyansh first meet mei hi fyt 😆
updte soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
U updated. . . . .
Good-good. . . . . .
Awsome update. . .
I lovd the Krisha bond. .
Kriyaansh met,and milte hi ladaai start ker di. . . .hehehe lovd their convo. . .
Dono ek dusre ko attitude de rahe hai. . .
So,swayum knws reys. .pakka bst frnd hoga ya cousin. . . . . . .
Party time hai. . . .
Lets see humare kr party mai kounsa dhamaaka kerte hai. . .
Woww. . .pura update mere liye. . .thank u. . . thank u. . . . . . .
Hmm. . .as tune aaj hi update ker diya hai toh maaf kiya. .no jhootas ,chappals etc <my weapons> on u. . .
Bt,nxt time jaldi update kerna and
i want bada wala update,
yeh chotte update se mera kuch nai hoga. .
Update d nxt part super soon. . , .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Yeah my dear Madhu..
Next time pakka bada wala update...

Shukar hai maffi mil gai😆

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