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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

**Unreserved**

It is a completely different story from your previous. I'm quite intrigued with the plot. Arnav seems to be battling some issues as the new kid on the block. Seems like he will portray the same intensiveness which I gathered by his anger when he collided with her, and simply leaving her with a bloody knee. I like that as a happy go lucky Arnav just doesn't settle with me.

The liked the ending and it seemed as if it will be the start of a friendship.

Your storytelling ways are great by giving us readers a great insight to their background!

Good luck with your transition. Being on leave is awesome although we really deserve more leave in the US for maternity. At least that was my opinion after I had my kids 😊

I will look forward to weekends for your story.

Edited by ssyahoo - 12 years ago

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angelrosey

@angelrosey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

continue soon!!!!!!
waitin for story to unfold!!!! :P

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priya goyal

@cutesforum_02

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

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this is a nice story... i m liking it... waiting for more..

continue sooonnn 😊

Edited by cutesforum_02 - 12 years ago

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

I me myself!

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Gosh Jenny this is superb! From that super sweet love story to this one! What difference man! Hats off! I already love this plot and the way your proceeding with it is mindblowing!!

So the prologue is the present and now part one flashback!! Superb man! And your description of the theme background situation and surroundings just too good man! It gives me a feel of Indian background with western touch!! :)

And then their first meet lol! When he cursed I understood it had to be Arnav!! And those caramel eyes! Die for it!!

And they are in the same class! And aww no wonder he's arrogant down right rude and all doesn't like any one pitying him! So the hard shell which khushi will def break and get through!

And I hope Grannys fine, I havr this strange feeling your going to orphan khushi too! Pls dont!!

And at the store lol a very good start so lets see how each other pull out their hair and she already voiced her dislike bout him fagging and he understood ainch ainch! Chemistry man!

Cheers

Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 12 years ago