taarey FF- kaise mujhe tum milgayi updated pt2 pg9 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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update soon n plz do pm me
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interesting concept .. cont soon n plz pm me !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oke im here with my 1st chapter and thanks to evryone who liked my story and also comment

----------------------------------------------------------------------- plzzz dont forget taaniya and taani are the same persons otherwise you will be cunfused taaniya is her real name and plus for the world and taani is a nick name for family and friends
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i have included some character in this chapter
those characters has nothing to do with the future track they are just for the introduction for the character taaniya/taani
these are few characters
fashion designer
designers assistent
stephanie = model and a friend of taaniya and yah she know about her nickname taani
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chapter 1
designer - where is she
asisstent - she is on the way actually she missed her flight from paris to new york
designer - what !!!!!!! ( shocked ) why does she live in paris
assistent - because in paris is her home
designer - just shut-up !!!! (angry) how can she be late
asisstent - im sorry sir ( sad)
designer - and what now after 1 hour the show will start and she is the showstopper
tonight what will we do now (sad)
a girl enter
girl - dont worry im here
designer and assistent together - taaniya !!!!!!!!!
assistent - thank god you are here (happy)
designer - where the hell was you can't you come what earlier
(shout but not angry)
taaniya - who the hell are you to talk to me like that ( angry )
if i missed my flight its not my fault oke ( shout )
you should be happy that im at-least here i was not even interested
today to come here ( with arrogant attitude )
and yeah dont forget i'm also a student who go to the college
its not an easy task to handle college and modeling career together
if summer holidays where not started i would not come here ( angry )
designer - oke oke we undarstand sorry taaniya calm down and tell me what
happend to you and how missed you your flight
taaniya - nothing special i was late at the airport
assistent - and you say it was not your fault ( confused )
taaniya gives angry glare to him and designer see this and ask assistent to be quiet
designer - taaniya plz get ready we are already late
taaniya - ok give me my dress
after 30 min the show start and now its taniya's turn to walk on the ramp as showstopper everyone is mesmerized by her beauty
look what she wear i hope the link works
after the show taniya goes back to her hotel with her friend stephanie
in the hotelroom

stephanie - evryone just looked only you today
taaniya - afcaurse they are going to look at me because i was the showstopper
stephanie - shall we go tomorrow for shopping ?
taaniya - im sorry but tommorow i will go back to paris
stephanie - what but taani i thought after so many days we will hangout
( she call taaniya by her nickname taani because they are good friends )
taaniya - im sorry stephanie but you know i have many assignments in my hand
and i have to complete that ( sad)
stephanie - its ok taani i understand because even i'm a model ( un-happy)
taani feels bad for her friend and hugs her and say sorry
after that stephani go back to her room and they both sleep
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in mumbai
a boy could not sleep he was depressed and that was none-other than our prince charming Rey
rey was lying on bed he reminds few lines of his ex-girlfriend
kriya- sorry rey lekin main aap se pyaar nahi karti
rey - kriya dekho mujhe aisa mazaak pasand nahi
kriya - i'm serious rey main aap se nahi arjun se pyaar karti hoon i love arjun
suddenly rey gets-up from bed
Rey - kyon kriya kyon mera saath aisa kyon kiya i really loved you
but bina kisi wajha break-up karke chali gayie
it has been almost 5 month and mujhe aaj bhi woh din yaad aata hai
kitna khush tha main uss din lekin tumne mere saath kya kiya
itna pyaar ta tumse aaj utni hi nafrat karta hoon ( crying and angry )
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taaniya ko pyaar par yakeen khabi tha nahi
and rey ab pyaar par yakeen karna nahi jahta
kiya hoga jab ek super model mileghi ek aisa heartrobh se jiska khud ka
dil tootha huwa hai
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precape - taaniya is back to paris and have argument with her father
and rey hangout with his friends both are sad and feel lonely
+ gangs entry in the story
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i dont know kaisa tha maine 1st chapter bohat jaldi jaldi mein write kiya hai so sorry for that and do comment ke story kaise thi
Edited by Tahira-2013 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
awesome update... i love it already =)
update soon and thanks 4 the PM...and ur an awesum writer =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
hey i loved it
i like the character of taani
do continue soon😊😊😊
n thanks 4 pm😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
nice one tahira...
great going...
cont soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Hey tahira...nyc start...gr8 job!! :D
Only complaint...bahot shrt tha! :p Plz nxt update lamba wala ;)
update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tahira it's really very nice... Aww Rey is so heartbroken my poor baby... Thanx dear for pm ... Update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
It was very nice. Surely your hindi needs some sharpness😆
But amazing. I loved the start. The supermodel Taani and Rey's pain is so heart touching
Loved the dress. Wow. Keep giving things like that
Update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
hey ur writing is wonderful..!
loved ur 1st update...!
keep updating..!

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