~~Heart Will Go On~~SwaRon OS

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Luved it Anu, simply for the positivity it conveyed...touchwood to SwaRon, they r the definition for luv...for the life of us, we will never be able to actually decide who luvs the other more, in this fairytale...

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TANHA_H

@TANHA_H

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Awosm Os 👏👏😭😭Beautifulln aLL

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

hey!

another brilliant piece of work!

Very good first attempt!

Keep up the gr8 effort!

Loved the story how destiny unites them!

Your would be husband!aww!!

Well written!

Also love the use of graphics!

I am glad that at least few ppl reminisce tanha nd sneha cuz feel she is almost forgotten!

Anyway keep up ur praiseworthy work!

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

OMG!!!
its the most awesome OS i have read this valentines day...
i just luved the way u have carried forward and penned down their thoughts soo well...
emotions must say is ur forte... and i luv u writing style... thanx for the PM and shori for the late comment...!
love
safi

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

That was a really lovely OS !! Loved how Swayam went back to his diary the day he got his heart beat, Sharon back !!

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

WOW...Awesome OS Ani...Loved it ❤️

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sky_fighter

@sky_fighter

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007
Beautiful os!!

i really like ur siggies

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Sorry for late commenting di I was busy with my practise papers..:(
Coming to os
It was indeed one of the best valentine gift..;)
I really liked the way u describe their breakup to patchup through swayam's pov.
Loved it.

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Anindita Dhar

@AninditaSwaRon

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Hey annu this is a beautiful peace of work😃
loved it to the core
your first os soo congratulations
keep writing
n sorry for being sooo late
was busy with studies

ps: u should try a part 2 of this os 😆 please please

Edited by AninditaTanHa - 12 years ago

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Anindita,this time i must say..."what a terrific starting of u'r new innings..in the field of writing OS".. u'r OS was so so awesome... i really like the concept and theme behind u'r story..that was extreamly good..and perfectly suitable for valentine day...So,now as the update..
Initially..i like u'r banner..u'r OS name.."heart will go on"..extreamly suits u'r story theme..and loved the character scatch..as always...SWARON..the unbreakable couple...
Starting of os was mindblowing..u'r texted words,paragraph,lines,colors..was great..and sharon's corner was really awesome,adorable..perfect pic...i just loved the two friends of swayam.."sharon's corner"...and "diary"..."swayam's bestie"...really deep thought..becoz writing a regular diary is tough...
then the flasback scene was well explained..Swaron's fight at the last day of their college...their Break up,dialouges..all was perfect...but sharon's saying words was sad..swayam's heartbroken..great selection of pics..regarding this part..
I loved to see the concern of swayam...how madly he loves her..its just shoking part to see..sharon in a cancer hospital..and she was suffering from cancer..well description of this emotional part..sharon's poor condition,her mother's health,need of wealth..all..this emotional part..was so well explained...swaron at the chamo session..was so interesting..swayam's peck was good to stop sharon's mouth...their convo after chamo session was awesome..that i likes all the lines..but some of the lines of swayam..which i like most..
Miss Sharon Raiprakash I don't even remember when I lost my heart to you. When you became my life and my heart beat. I love you more than anything Sharon and will continue to do till the last day of my life. I lost my life, my heart beat six months back. My heart was dead for these months. But now as my life is back my heart has started beating again. I know it will go on forever and it will love you forever. So I ask you on the day of love will you give me the privilege to marry you Miss Raiprakash?
then,the last ring placement by swayam was out of the world..their intense hug,their pour and lovable first kiss..was explained extreamly good..that.."tanha wala swaron yaad aa gaya"..
i really like sharon's words...which is full of love..
Happy Valentine's Day to you too Swayam. I love you. I am sorry for pushing you away and hurting you so much. But trust me Swayam with you I was also suffering. I came to know about my cancer the day I texted you about not loving you. I was scared Swayam. I knew it how much you loved me and if something happened to me in front of your eyes you would have died. So I thought of making you hate me. But it back fired Swayam. It made us go through hell and it's all because of me. I am so sorry Swayam. I love you. I love you so much.
loved the last part of swayam..I got back my life on the day of love. I know Sharon will be fine. It will be a lie if I say I am not worried for her health and I am not scared about her being fine. I am hell scared. But I know she will be fine.
But I am sure she will be fine and I know our heart will go on beating in unison, forever.
loved this update..u'r os was so so awesome...if possible then,pls think about next part..becoz i think it needed one more part for happy ending
keep updating...thanx for pm
prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago