Farah, dear what an amazing update dear. It was simply FANTASTIC!!!
But first, let me thank you for once again mentioning me in your update. I am so touched, thanks so much!! 🤗
But it is actually the other way round dear, it is I, who should be thanking you for writing such a beautiful story to elicit such detailed responses from me. Sometimes I wonder, if I have gone overboard with it, but reading you mentioning me again, makes me feel a lot better that at least, I am not boring you with them :)
Coming to the update... What a well thought out & meaningful chapter... I just loved the way you built up the chapter... From the very hesitant way Arnan started informing ASR about what that sleaze ball Karan has been up to behind his back simply because of his knowledge that how much Khushi means to his boss now, to the very intense rise in Arnav's temper to the actual pummeling of Karan in the night club. I just loved how you built up the tension.
Okay, so now as Arnav sat brooding in his office looking at the ill-fated ring, Aman chose that very moment to update Arnav about the mud-slinging that Karan has been doing behind his & Khushi's back... Timing could not have been more right or wrong... Of course, Aman was triggered into disclosing about Karan's comments about Khushi at that moment because he saw how much she had come to mean to his boss in this short while, locking himself up for hours for personally altering Khushi's blouses, skipping a very important business event at the cost of some disadvantage to his company, & the fact that Arnav had stopped to take a call from her in the middle of a very important meeting had proved to Aman, he needed to inform his boss right away... Aman's astuteness & loyalty is unquestionable. Love this guy for being on the lookout for his boss & his girl ❤️ Admired him for trying to stop Arnav from going after that sleaze ball that day because he knew Arnav had other more pressing priorities...
Although, hearing about the way Karan had been maligning his Khushi just the morning after their tumultuous fight the night before, was enough to catapult ASR into an all consuming rage. Khushi calling herself a wh**e had already caused a lot of heartache for him on top of that hearing that sleaze ball malign Khushi was really the limit. Loved the way he sat determinedly all day in his office to take that creep to task was just so telling... No other work took priority, not even his Di's or his cousin's weddings... Taking care of Khushi's reputation was TOP priority for Arnav.
When it comes to Khushi, Arnav has no control, he loses all his senses...which he lost while pummeling Karan to a pulp. It was only when Aman dragged him off murmuring Anjali's & Khushi's names in his ear, did he become aware of his actions... Such is his love for Khushi...
But will Karan & his friends now cause trouble for Arnav & Khushi??? Will their names be dragged in public?? Did Arnav do more damage than good because of his hot headedness?? It remains to be seen...
About the precap, I am a little worried, maybe I am reading a bit too much into it, but I was not so happy reading this line in the past tense... Why "tha" and not "hai"???
"Maybe it needed a bit breaking, Red.. Pata toh chala kuchh tha waha par!"
But even if it is in the past tense, it signifies ASR acknowledging something very significant to himself that his feelings had something to do with an overlooked organ of his body...
Phew!, sorry Farah, I think I might have gotten carried away today again in writing this comment, what to do :( you write so well... 🤔
Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago
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