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Posted: 12 years ago
Karan deserves this and much more...
Loved the precap...

OP
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update!! finally arnav has beaten karan up! he finally got what he deserves and maybe a few more punches would have done the job even better!! the pre-cap was also good..the litle scene between arnav and khushi and how she was looking for the ring! thanks for the pm and plz updae soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
SUPER SUPER SUPER AWESOME UPDATE... SPECIALLY PRECAP... BUT KARAN ARGHHH DIRTY MAN... ARNAV SERVED HIM RIGHT..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update..

I loved Aman here...he is the person who knows ASR better than everyone..he knows what he is thinking and when he is doing what! He even knew that Arnav was talking to his Red in the conference...

I hate Kunal...just because he didn't marry Payal and didn't get Khushi,he is now talking about her character in such a low manner...well then he needed what he got from ASR..

Today we read a different side of ASR and it was so well written...The entire fight thing was written brilliantly...I could easily visualize his each and every move..you did an amazing job on that⭐️

And I loved the precap...'It needed a little breaking Red, Pata to chala kuch tha waha par'
I loved this sentence...ASR has a heart and he now admits it...

I don't wanna go on hazardous part yet ;) I will wait for the next update!

update soon...
Edited by --Amy-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thi was an action packed update...typical bollywood style 😆 😆 Loved it...precap i am totallly excited about and looking forward to 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazin as alwz..:)50 n 51..:)Khushi imaginin evrythin..:)her Arnav..:Dn den her family's care..:)
den Khsuhi's col..
n his reactions..lol
dt was juz fab..:)
den Shyamji?whr did he came 4m?okiee..dn Karan ..nw y has he cum 4?Gosh!!!he's ol gone..thinkin abt Khushi stil..'n talkin bad behind her n Arnav's back wud make him...uhmmm die..almost died..
loved Arnav's part der..:)
Arnav cnt take ne1's word agnst Khsuhi nw..:)n m lovin dis syd of his..KAran z realllyyy paagal..y cnt he mind his own busines?if PAyal z marryin Aakash wts his prob?n if Arshi's 2gthr..y cnt he find sum1 4 himslf?stupid..:/thnx..4 d special mntion..:)i lov readin dis stry.:)so yu dnt need 2 add me lyk dt..lol...:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.. Mr.KK u messed with the wrong persons love...
Loved the way Aman was trying to control Arnav to not go to the club reminding him of Anji and Khushi... u hav got guts buddy...
And Mr.Asr thinks he knows when to stop but once he starts no one can stop him:-)) godo for Kapoor tht Aman is thr to save his life.

loved the precap, but will comment after reading the next update:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
aman s simply wonderful!!! arnav had his stunts and punches! karan deserved it😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Farah, dear what an amazing update dear. It was simply FANTASTIC!!!

But first, let me thank you for once again mentioning me in your update. I am so touched, thanks so much!! 🤗

But it is actually the other way round dear, it is I, who should be thanking you for writing such a beautiful story to elicit such detailed responses from me. Sometimes I wonder, if I have gone overboard with it, but reading you mentioning me again, makes me feel a lot better that at least, I am not boring you with them :)

Coming to the update... What a well thought out & meaningful chapter... I just loved the way you built up the chapter... From the very hesitant way Arnan started informing ASR about what that sleaze ball Karan has been up to behind his back simply because of his knowledge that how much Khushi means to his boss now, to the very intense rise in Arnav's temper to the actual pummeling of Karan in the night club. I just loved how you built up the tension.

Okay, so now as Arnav sat brooding in his office looking at the ill-fated ring, Aman chose that very moment to update Arnav about the mud-slinging that Karan has been doing behind his & Khushi's back... Timing could not have been more right or wrong... Of course, Aman was triggered into disclosing about Karan's comments about Khushi at that moment because he saw how much she had come to mean to his boss in this short while, locking himself up for hours for personally altering Khushi's blouses, skipping a very important business event at the cost of some disadvantage to his company, & the fact that Arnav had stopped to take a call from her in the middle of a very important meeting had proved to Aman, he needed to inform his boss right away... Aman's astuteness & loyalty is unquestionable. Love this guy for being on the lookout for his boss & his girl ❤️ Admired him for trying to stop Arnav from going after that sleaze ball that day because he knew Arnav had other more pressing priorities...

Although, hearing about the way Karan had been maligning his Khushi just the morning after their tumultuous fight the night before, was enough to catapult ASR into an all consuming rage. Khushi calling herself a wh**e had already caused a lot of heartache for him on top of that hearing that sleaze ball malign Khushi was really the limit. Loved the way he sat determinedly all day in his office to take that creep to task was just so telling... No other work took priority, not even his Di's or his cousin's weddings... Taking care of Khushi's reputation was TOP priority for Arnav.

When it comes to Khushi, Arnav has no control, he loses all his senses...which he lost while pummeling Karan to a pulp. It was only when Aman dragged him off murmuring Anjali's & Khushi's names in his ear, did he become aware of his actions... Such is his love for Khushi...

But will Karan & his friends now cause trouble for Arnav & Khushi??? Will their names be dragged in public?? Did Arnav do more damage than good because of his hot headedness?? It remains to be seen...

About the precap, I am a little worried, maybe I am reading a bit too much into it, but I was not so happy reading this line in the past tense... Why "tha" and not "hai"???

"Maybe it needed a bit breaking, Red.. Pata toh chala kuchh tha waha par!"

But even if it is in the past tense, it signifies ASR acknowledging something very significant to himself that his feelings had something to do with an overlooked organ of his body...

Phew!, sorry Farah, I think I might have gotten carried away today again in writing this comment, what to do :( you write so well... 🤔
Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Farah great update
OMG arnav wasn't stopping
Stupid karan

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