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Posted: 12 years ago
They take such giant leaps in the physical aspect.. And such baby steps with thier emotions... There are going to be more ups and downs like this until they reach a level playing field!

Loved the way Arnav explained it to her!! Especially the end when he was finally home!!! It was such an awww moment!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
atleast he got to tie the band aid if not the ring!
best part being he knows how khushi feels about them, he knows that more than gestures she needs words, assurance but that doesnt mean she wants commitment!

loved the update, it was so natural and all that took place was difficult for both of them.

hahaha still laughing over "call" i wish khushi chews his head off latter :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
My heart goes out to Arnav everytime he tries to show his love
and appreciation for the people he cares for it blows up in his face

At least he was able to talk to Khushi and she understood
him and he apologised for making her feel cheap it was
not his intention
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!
The last chapter was filled with everything. I mean it was intense, emotional, contained a lot of drame, some teasing, fun, anger and consummable rage!
I see Arnav's point. You won't catch me saying that I like Arnav's behaviour or understand why he did what he did, but here ... I see that he is f**king frustrated and I don't blame him. He himself doesn't know where he supposedly went wrong within the short space of time. I mean one minute they happy teasing one another, then having a slight disagreement to full on rage being thrown from both sides. I also see Khushi's point. It would come across as though she is being paid off, just as she described herself as a wh**e would for the generousity that she has bestowed upon Arnav. She was thinking that she won't be married to him, there won't be that sense of commitment towards one another and ofcourse it broke her to what she did and said. It was shocking that it happened pretty suddenly actually. Arnav has reigned himself in a little considering how wild he used to be. I mean he'd go around having sex with many women and here he was with Khushi, not yet had anything so intimate with her ... but he is fine with that. Ok. I mean kissing and touching one another does have its own special feeling, but having sex to most is taking things to a whole new level. Some may say the same about having an orgasm too. He respects her and wants her not to regret these intimate moment that they share or what could then lead to them having sex. Having said all this, he still needs to learn to control his anger that little bit more, be less bossy towards her ...
Arnav really does care for Khushi. Some may say its a little twisted, but everyone has their own views ... I see that he genuinely feels strongly towards her and to some extent, this strong pull towards her he sees as somewhat a weakness.
I'm feeling a little emotional reading that Arnav is talking about his past. The past that he never talks about ... and I can only iomagine what it must have taken him to open up as he has done now with Khushi. Brave man.
Khushi has finally told him of what was building up inside of her to him and now finally, they've seemed to want to talk about these things because it looks as though its better they speak about them than not. The way Arnav speak of his feelings for Khushi ... the collage, existence etc was so heartfelt that my eyes were constantly looking at the screen. I felt a little teary after having read this part 😭😭
I really like how you've encorporated the Hindi into English into the conversation between Arnav and Khushi. Loved it! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
So they cleared the air but still the true feeling are not revealed! Arnav is insanely in love with Khushi but his past is not allowing him to see his unnamed feelings in that light, but he is quite sure about the fact that she is very important for him and holds the same importance as much much as his family does for him. Looks like its gonna be a pretty long journey but gonna enjoy it for sure through ur fantastic writing! The way Arnav told about his mishaps in past when it comes to buying gifts for his loved people, I think that pretty much said who he is and can be counted as an indirect confession as well. Good Khushi decided to console him rather than holding on to the anger. He told her he feels sad about the fact that he wasn't a part ofher life in past and he wants to change that in future,and about the immense possessiveness he feels towards her, all these things lead to only one thing I hope he realizes it fast before Khushi's family starts looking for grooms for her😊 precap is sooo sweet! Eagerly waiting to read the next part😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aahww arnav deeply in love with her but he didn't said it.. the precap is really Cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh that was amazing!!!

and Arnavo!!! me takes a bow to you!! you were amazing with that How-Special-You-Are-To-Me speach!! Oh Hell!!! That was better than a any damn proposal in the world!!! Farah!!! Gr8 Job here!! Kudos to you gal!!

that was really really sweet patch up!!

and the precap as always!! well not show steal exactly but something to look fwd to!! i am sure its gonna be another one lined up for having to disconnect abruptly!! :)

bring it on!!

Thanks for the update and the PM!! :)

~Leena
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww www www the update was sooo cuuute
my heart broke when arnav was tell his past story to khushi and the way they make up was superb when they both were accusing each other lolz that was funny

superr rrr rrr rrrb job

and precap waw that was really funny rofl
can't wait for the update
Edited by darya20 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome one
finally their misunderstanding ended
n o my my
love the precap
loved arnavs' business talk!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow loved the update, they way you expressed his POV and thoughts, were wonderful, he feels all the thoughts but doe snot want to acknowledge the feeling, he values the relationship and does not want to belittle it.

But Khushi needs words..., come on acknowledge and express it...

Edited by samshylu - 12 years ago

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