Brilliant. Loved his reaction to the outfit, was expecting it and you did complete justice and more to it...loved his possessive, protectiveness and jealousy of anyone else who was going to get to see his Khushi, his baby Gupta in it! Loved how he tries to finds corrective measures against it!
Love how Khushi teases him and tells him off about it...that was just such a well written conversation so natural ...
Love how he wants to be next to her in the photograph and how he makes it happen rather manupilates the situation to favour him in a nice way...I liked it!
Love how Anjali is surprised at his eagerness to be in that photograph.
Loves how he wants it up in her room !
He wants a permanent place in here life but I feel he is still trying to come to terms with that himself...with the ring too!
Love how he realises that he has wasted so much time in his childhood trying to get away from that one person who know lights him up!
I feel bad for Khushi who is more upfront about her feelings so feels insulted with a secretive present and that too a ring which to her in any other circumstances could mean so much more...I don't think though Arnav even thought about it like that...he just bought something that he saw and thought of her seeing...he wants her in his life and in his subconscious the ring proabably symbolises much more than he is able to express and come to terms with!
I just hope he realises after her reactions based on the precap...cannot wait to read that ...
Outstanding! Thanks for your pm!
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
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