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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: navamanks

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">Congratulations for your second thread!!👍🏼</font>



thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: navamanks

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#990000">Coming to the update it was very emotional...!!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#990000">Precap again is very touching!</font>


thank u dear , i am happy that u liked it n next time when u comment can u please add ur name if u dnt mind , i wanted to know , u r a regular reader n i wud lyk to know u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

Dii! Pehle toh.. CONGO FOR THE SECOND THREAD!!!! U TRUELU DESERVE IT!!! LOVE YOU!!!

Gosh! U made me cry dii!! The way those people were taunting them.. the way the three of them were geeting hurt.. made me cry!! N upadr se Chahat saying That she hates Rey.. Gosh! Mai apne tears control nahi kar paa rahi dii.. N the precap.. Gosh! Finally Swayam's entry.. Jaldi upadte karo na dii.. Please!! N mujhe pm karnma mat bhoolna!!



thanks shivangi, n u think u need to tell me to pm huhh? I always do na? .. How are ur studies going ur boards r nearing na?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tiyasingh

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Wow..Wow..Wow..Indu..😊😊</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">again a masterpiece..👏👏</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Brilliantly written..⭐️⭐️</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Awesume dear..</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Just Mindblowing..👏👏👏</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">N congratulations for the second thread</font><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">...</font><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff"></font><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">🥳🥳</font><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff"></font>


hi tiya
thank u dear.. I was missing ur smiley wala comments on chaahat, ur xams r over??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roxxyg

Superb update n da precap is just awesome plz update soon or else da suspense will kill me 😊 😉

thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vibhaaa


firstly congratulation 4 ur 2 thred indu.👏. u deserv this⭐️.

ur writing skill are out of the wolrd.
awesome update. u always make me speechless indu. there are no words to describe how much i love chahat. thanking u billion times would be less 4 giving us our chahat. it was so emotional u made me cry.😭.
pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls update ASAP.
cant wait 4 it.
thanks billion times 4 pmimg me.



vibhaa next time if u say thanks i will not talk to u r pm u ha pakka , we r friends n i dnt like this thanks giving for a pm , its my pleasure to pm my loving readers, so next time dnt say thanks k?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rosalilly12

how were your exams? nice update. Chahat is really adorable. She crying is just not tolerable. She came to know the truth. Wat ll happen further. Even swayam entry in next part. Seems more and more interesting. Update soon.


my exams went well dear😊..
i am gonna update it , keep following😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

sorry my beauties for being late .. i was to update this yesterday but my net got cut, thats y ... please dont be angry at me


Chapter-22

" aap mujhe princess mat bulayiyae …[the little doll screamed from inside ] chaahat aapko nahi dekhna chahte … I HATE YOU, DAD….. CHAAHAT HATES YOU….. mujhe nahi dekhna …. Aur mammah chaahat aapse bhi naraz hu…. Aapne chaahat ko kyu nahi bataya…. Kyu hum is aadmi k saath reh rahe ho??[he shut his eyes hard] mujhe yahan nahi rehna … mammah promise karo mujhe ki that we will not stay here …. Chaahat ko yahan nahi rehna ….." she screamed from inside…..

he could not bear it any more without uttering a word he walked slowly away from the scene … she stood completely helpless… she didn't know what to do she sat on her knees in front of the door sobbing badly….

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Delhi

He stopped the car and got out. he was so tried after full day of work… he pressed the calling bell . the servant came and open the door "kaka…Sharon kahan hai "

"wo bitiya chote baba k saath khel rahe hai" the old man smiled and left.. he loosened his tie and walked towards the room and opened the door. "sshhh" she kept her fingers on her lips and signaled him to be quiet hearing the shrieking sound of the door… he turned to look at what was happening and saw his baby sleeping by her side …. He went near them "so my champ slept before giving paapa his daily kiss huhh" he sat by his babys side and was about to caress his face when Sharon held his hand " no!!! see how dirty your hands are!![he frowned and looked at his palm …] Go and get fresh and don't touch my baby before that" he smirked at his angry wife and went to the washroom … " come down after this , I will get our food ready" she said in a slow voice

They had their dinner and some sweet talks and after that swayam went to switch on the tv for watching the news. Before he could take the remote she grabbed it .

"Sharon remote mujhe de do …." He tried to grab the remote from her

"no swayam I want to see this program " Sharon said playfully as she moved back and switched the tv to her fav show

"no I want to see the news … tum program baad mein dekh lena now give me the remote.." he leaned over her .. but she hid the remote at her back..

Swayam pulled her towards him in a swift movement and she came crashing on his chest…she was lost in his eyes while he snaked his arm over hers to her back and slowly removed the remote from her grip still looking into her eyes …she was lost in him … he changed the channel still looking into her eyes

Aaj k sabse taaza khabar….dance master and choreographer Reyaansh singhania k NAAJAYAZ BETI… CHAAHAT….

The voice of the news reader pulled them away from their trance…. Both turned to the tv….

A girl of 5 crying badly standing in the middle of the crowd ….

Swayam walked towards the TV Sharon rubbed her palm in fear seeing chaahat in that condition … her breath was turning erratic…. "chaahat aisi haalath mein" she said to herself , moving closer to the TV.. Soon the scene changed and Rey was shown roaring at the crowd " YESSS ITS TRUEE !!! CHAAHAT MERI BETI HAI … I AM HER BIOLOGICAL FATHER….. "rey advanced forwards with taani sobbing badly

Swayam dropped the remote from his hand as he stood frozen in front of the tv … the scene flashed again showing taani sobbing badly holding chaahat close to her…

"TAANI!!!..REY K SAATH !! USKI BETI???!!!!" he stood still at the same position… it was like his blood was freezed all off a sudden…..

" chaahat aur Taani rey k saath , n she didn't tell me…" Sharon said to herself still looking at the tv screen. He turned to her all off a sudden … his eyes burning in fury . she realized what she said a second before … she could not say anything … his looks were burning her " WHAT DID U SAY NOW??" he barked

" swayam voh… voh.." she didn't know what to say she was not getting any words … she turned back not having the strength to face him " I asked you something Sharon…. " he pulled her by her upper arm and made her face him " tum janti thi ??? HUHHH??? TUM JANTI THI????" he roared … she shut her eyes "ha..… " she said in a feeble voice …. THAP came a slap direct on her cheeks … for the first time in all these years… he never used to hurt her , never… neither through his deeds, words nor physically , while the reverse happened many times and every single time he faced them with a smile…but today, today it was not on something that was just about them , it was something beyond that and he simply couldn't subside his hurt within himself ….. today he was out of his patience level and she knew it … he was hurt badly hurt….

"you didn't feel that its important to tell me… huhhh? "

"hasi aa raha hai mujhe mere kismat pe[he brushed his hair in frustration]… I was searching madly for my sister every where mumbai , jodhpur , delhi everywhere … every where …5 years ….it has been 5 years now… I spent day and night searching for my sister…. abi bhi yaad hai mujhe vo din when we found that she was missing… dad, mom ,daadi sab k sab pareshan … I didn't know what to do ….i had lost my baby sis[his eyes welled with tears]… you were there then [he pulled her towards him , gritting his teeth] n you knew where she was but you didn't feel its important to tell me ….[she faced down ]…kyu Sharon why did you do this to me???[he tightened his fist in despair]… a cheat dumped my sister n I didn't knew [his face fumed in anger]my sis had a baby n I didn't knew [his eyes welled with affection , frustration, anguish]…. My sis was struggling for a living, hearing taunts and I didn't knew BUT BUT meri WIFE [he gritted his teeth in anger]janti thi …sab janti thi … he looked at her , his face reflected hatred …. He walked in haste towards the stairs

"swayam … swayam.. listen to me.." she ran behind him, but he gave least noticed and barged into the bed room

"swayam … swayam , I said .. listen to me swayam … ek baar bat toh sunno…" she pulled him to face her

" now what are you trying to …. Ohh apna best friend ka case defend kar rahi ho!!!" he said with a sarcastic smile

" tumhe kya laga , mein tumare peeche paagal hu toh jo tum kahogi man jayega?? Huhhh?? "He pressed her on her upper arm harshly making her moan in pain "NO!!! baat meri behen ki [he pushed her back and she fell onto the bed… he opened the cupboard in haste and pulled out some clothes and dumped it into a bag "tumhari behen meri bhi kuch lagti hai swayam" she said expecting him to turn and look at her

[ last para dialogue credit: D3]

"ohhh [he made his way towards her]so that's why … that's why you made her suffer these 5 years huhh??"he asked killing her with his looks …. She looked at his deep eyes , her hazel ones were now welled in pain and tears " mein??? You think so swayam … you think ki I left her alone to suffer??? … no swayam , I stood by her whenever she needed ,[she started walking] I did all what I could do... supported her whenever she was in need, I was with her during chaahats birth, in fact it was me who saw chaahat first , even before her [ she smiled remembering chaahats face, in between her sobs ] , I wanted to tell you ,but I didn't tell you only because … because she didn't want that to happen[she turned to face swayam]… she didn't want you to hate rey… she didn't want to destroy your friendship… she didn't want you to hate him coz of what he had done to her [he shut his eyes hard suppressing his grief in himself]….she went and placed her palm on his shoulders … "even I hate him now swayam and don't think that I didn't tell you to help him… no swayam …"

He opened his eyes "ek baar mujhe bata deti Sharon….you knew how worried I was for her…" she cupped his face " I am sorry swayam ..i had promised her " he pulled her hands down from his face " now I wont let that cheat to destroy her life further …[his eyes reflected hatred ]… I wont let my sis or her baby to suffer any more …, I wont let this continue any further…. I… I am going to bring her here … I wont let her spent a day more with that cheat…. Ha " he grabbed the bag.. " swayam , I am also coming.." Sharon said from behind " no you stay here it will be difficult with rehaan "

" no swayam .. taani will need me .. 1 minute please .. "she grabbed a bag and put her and rehaan's things into it and took rehan in her arms and they moved out

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He was standing by the window side looking at the dark sky…She placed her palm on his

" u didn't sleep" he asked

"n u too rey.." she replied

Rey:"how can I sleep taani…"

"now she will never accept me taani… she hates the father figure …"

Taani:"that's because she was deprived of fatherly care... aapko yaad hai us din car mein voh kya keh rahi thi?? mujhe paapa nahi chahye…..voh bura aadmi hai…. Usko chaahat pasand nahi hai na,isliye unohne mamma ko chod diya….. she feels that her father doesn't like her and that's why he left her mom…

"but taani, we cant tell her the truth .. she is too small for that.."

"ha but we can make her understand how much her father loves her…"

"but now she doesn't even like to see me .. then how will we …"

" hum koshish toh kar sakte ho na…rey??" she held his palm in assurance

"you will be with me na taani??"

" ha… hamesha" ... their eyes assured each other that everything will get fine...

Precap:

" taani … chalo mere saath " swayam grabbed taani's wrist

" nahi bhai…"

"no swayam.. you cant do this" rey stood in front of swayam..swayam clutched reys collars " i am her brother n who are you to stop me t ??? huhh??? Tum hote kaun ho uski"

Guys , I was not in a good mood .. so couldnt write further … I know that it was not upto mark and was short … I am sorry and D3 made my mood worser… dont feel anything ...what to say…. See you tomorrow … I am sorry , please adjust with this today.. i will try to update other ff if possible but i am not sure about goa ss the current track has made it difficult to write

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear. as always...
swayam's reaction is justified.

not at all boring ...
pls. pls. pls. do cont. on this as cant wait more how taarey will face swayam...
and ofcourse eagerly waiting for chaahat reaction ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
omg! it was so intense...swayam... =(

but im glad taani is standing wid Rey =)

PRecap... "tum hote kaun ho uski"...wondering reply kya hoga...well he doesnt have one... *oh no* =(


but well...awesum post...well its "chaahat" after all and writer bhi toh awesome hai =) hehe =D

thanks for the PM and update soon =) *big hug*

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