ARHI OS I LOVE YOU TOO MUCH pt 2(9)

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muskaansobti

@muskaansobti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

wow...yaar wonderful os...😊

i juz luv al ur ff😊😊

nice part😊

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

woww that was so good chapter... loved it

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Vanhi

@vanhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: awroneema

ohhoo ho ho...i think dats called...pyaar ka dard hai mitha mitha pyara pyara...😆but fikar not...utilize this opportunity...date miss hua so wat.!!..difrnt valentine manaw...i mean i can imagine ur Bangalore wasi inplace of this SS's super luvable hubby arnav...nd u as this khushi..😆 the difference is u r not preggy..but yet he can continue all the pampering activities...u knw..feeding..carrying...ahm..ahm..u r the writer knows better thn me...☺️...so enjoying...being around...😳..!!..i thought i m the clumsiest girl after khushi in this world...nd yello ab to app bhi hazir hogaye...jaha mai waha panoti category mai...🤣 competition...among u me n khushi..😃

Lock those lips of yours tightly, okay...!!! Uffo.. lack of privacy, girl...!!!!😉

Kash... you read the OS again... I did mention that it is uncomfortable to have audience even for a simple gesture for Khushi, didn't I..??? Then...

Just kidding, yaar😆😉... Aur haan, this is indeed unique style to celebrate one's first ever valentine day in a true sense, isn't it...??? On one side, he was busy arranging things, and on other side, I was busy choosing bikes for the accident...😳😳😳

And mind, I don't need to prove my clumsiness, dear...! I will fall and get at least a small scratch on a daily basis... Whether I fell from bed, or slip a step and the whole way, or mostly... trip on my own foot and break my nose...

So, you and Khushi will loss the competition for sure, Honey...!!!

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AbdulloveIPKKND

@AbdulloveIPKKND

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Aww this was such a cute update

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Vanhi

@vanhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: _disha_
Can this couple get any more cuter !!
You really write beautifully ... all the emotions were flowing so effortlessly!!!
Especially the bits from Arnav's POV were bang on... coming from a female author the way you handled Arnav's emotions(like a man's pov) was awesome...⭐️

Ps:Take care and wish you a speedy recovery !!

Thank you soo much, Disha...

I realized that this is the first time that I replied to your comment..

May be, as I have my Arnav... that's the reason to understand this possessive, irrevocably in love male character so well...

Thank you..

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Anu

@anushri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Hi vanhi, I hope your fracture is not that bad. Please do take care of yourself and take enough bed rest, myself being the victim of accident few months back where I had fractured my leg and was bed ridden for almost 3 months can understand the pain and position you are in. Everything else can wait for now, so please rest yourself and let your loved ones take care of you(I can very well understand when you say it suffocates😉).

Coming to the os, I just loved both the parts.I loved your new style of writing. Though the story is simple but the way you pen it makes it more beautiful and enjoyable.

Take care of your leg and be careful when you cross the road next time. Wish you a speedy recovery😊