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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aparabosecarmel

so hot 🤗
di u write superb
plz continue soon
precap some surprises are on the way yay
boys cooked for the girls


thanks dear..
vl continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 2189mansi

that was jus so cute...choti si tanni...update soon...


thanks 4 d comment..
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Plzz updt d nxt prt soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! Simply wow! I don't have any words to explain. It was so beautiful and I loved how you included the gang. It was very very very romantic and cute. I'm just in awe right now. Please pm me when you update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for the late reply...but amazing updatee...loved it... it was really cutee..esp taani helpin dem out...hehe =P

and romantic scene ke liye kuch kehne ko baaki nahi hai... 😳 😆

update soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

sorry for the late reply...but amazing updatee...loved it... it was really cutee..esp taani helpin dem out...hehe =P


and romantic scene ke liye kuch kehne ko baaki nahi hai... 😳 😆

update soon =)



its k dear..
thanks 4 d comment..
vl update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonu...Taarey

Plzz updt d nxt prt soon ...



vl update soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sdas1027

Wow! Simply wow! I don't have any words to explain. It was so beautiful and I loved how you included the gang. It was very very very romantic and cute. I'm just in awe right now. Please pm me when you update!



thanks 4 d comment..
vl pm u for sure..
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Posted: 12 years ago

hayee kitna romance soo cute ☺️

update nxt prt soon nd

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys,
thanks for all d comments guys..
Enjoy reading this...

I know that everyone is so closed to this ff like me,
I am sorry to say guys,i will be ending this ff by this chapter,but dont worry iam starting a new ff along with towards love ff,
so u will always get my updates..
So i hope u all will like thelast post of this ff...

Taarey ff:after goa:part 30-COMPLETED

Morning Taarey house..
Rey was looking at taani..
Sunlight seems to make her face more clearer to him..
Rey:hayee main mar jawaan
Taani:chup rhaiye aur sone dijeeye...
Rey lays on top of taani..
Rey:aaj kal itni sothi ho,mere liye time nahi tumhare paaas..
Taani:accha(Catching his nose)
Rey leans to kiss her..
But taani covers her mouth n pushes rey out of the way n goes to d washroom...
Rey:ab kya hua

Taani closes d washroom door...
Rey stands outside d door..
Knocks on d door..
Rey:kya hua...
darwaaaza kholo...

Taani comes out smelling soap..
Rey has an amused expression...
Taani:yeh sab aapki kal ki paasta ki wajas se hai..
Rey:kya
Taani:ha
Rey goes behind her n hugs her..
Taani gets irritated..
Taani:chodiye
n pushes rey's arms..
Rey:shubah subah irriated kyun ho..

Taani opens d cupboard n takes out a an anrkali n goes 2 d washroom to get ready..
Rey was left amazed..
Taani was feeling weird..

College-
Rey's cabhin
Boys knock on the door...
Rey:come in
Rey was resting his head on the table
Vicky:kya hua taani ne phir se wrath le kya?
Rey lifts his head up n grins..
Swayam:kya hua
Rey:pata nahi taani kuch dinon se subah bahut irriated ho jaathi hai mujhse aur bhina breakfast gaye a
Vicky winks at nil..
Vicky:yeh sirf subah hi hota hai
Rey:ha abhi toh bataya tha na..
Vicky:accha (winks at d boys)
Nil:swayam sharon bhulaa rahi hai
Swayam:tujhe kaise pata hai..
Vicky:hum sab ne suna
Swayam:acha ,rey tune suna
Vicky:woh kya sunega woh humse baat kar raha tha na
Swayam:kya
Nil:tu chal,warna taani ki tarah woh bhi wrath shuru karegi aur tera band bajega..
Swayam:nahi yaar main chaltha hoon,rey vl talk 2 u later..

Rey:sharon sach main bhulaya tha kya
Vicky:hume kaise pata
Rey:mujhe pata tha
Vicky:to
Rey:toh
Nil:to to kya kag rakha hai
Vicky:taani tujhe narraz kyun hai
Rey:mujhe kaise pata
Vicky:tujhe nahi pata to humein pata hoga kya?
Rey:woh hi to mujhe pata nahi na..
Vicky:tune bahut gharab kartha hoga
Rey:kya khana
Vicky:khana
Nil:ha khana
Rey:ha woh taani aaj subah mujhse iss baat pe ladi ki kal jo paasta banya tha bahut falthu nikla aur uski wajas se uski tabyat bhikgdi..
Boys:ohhh
Rey:tum log kya samjha
Vicky:kuch nahi ,chal hum log chalthe hai,tum khana bhana teek se..
Nil:kuch kaam ka nahi,naalyak
Amar:laayalak
Bharat:tu ,hat..
n leaves..
Rey:in logonko bhi kya hua..

Rey sees Taani paaasing thru d corridor...
Rey goes out n follows her n calls out..
Rey:taani
Taani was walking thru d stairs ,she hears Rey voice n turn..
But sudeenly everything went blank...

She falls...

Rey catches...

In the hospital...
Taani opens her eyes seeing Rey beside her holding hands...
Taani gets up..
Swayam:dheere
Everyone is standing staring at her..
Taani:kya hua

Everyone seems quiet..
Rey had tears in his eyes...
Taani lifts rey's face up..
Taani cups his face..
Taani:kya hua,main hospital main kya kar rahi hoon..

Sharon:sory rey jaldi bhlo,exitment se main rukh nahi paa rahi hoo

Taani was getting worried..
Taani:koi kuch bhol,bhaai aap..
Swayam turns back n luks at sharon..

Rey:woh main,(tears started coming from Rey's eyes)
Taani wipes his tears..
Rey hugs her..
Taani:kya hua
Rey:main papa bananne waala hooon...
Swayam:aur main mamu
Sharon:main mami,dats so uncool but mamz chalega huh
D3 gang:hum bhi
n veryone goes hug rey n taani
Swayam:humari group ki new nanha sa member...

Sharon: i think we should leave both alone..

Everyone leaves..

Taani keeps her hands on her stomach..
Rey keeps his hand o her hands..
Taani:humara baacha..
Rey still crying..
Taani smiles...
Taani:i love you(started crying)
Rey:rona bandh karo aur main rona kyun bandh nahi kar raha hoon n i love you...
Taani smiles..

After 9 months they have a cute sa baby named Tara...
Like all fairy tale...They lived happily ever after...
Because ever after is just a beginning...

Some Love Stories Never End...

So guys,
i know many of u will be angry that i ended this ff...
Even i am sad myself,
Main iss story ko aage nahi keechna chahithi thi n then making it boring,i want this story to always be my best work..
I have made u guys laugh,cry,clap n angry ,blush ,love...
So these emotion live forever n this story tooo...
I will keep u guys entertaining through my other ffs..
So u guys wont miss my works...
So thanks for all the comments n appreciations, criticisms..
This story had my entry into if,gave me a new friends..
So this story s close to my heart n always will remain..
Signing off yours-
Lachu
Keep smiling...
Edited by Lachu_taarey - 12 years ago

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