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Taarey ff: AFTER GOA -PART 16-(EK MAIN AUR EK TU)page 52
Swayam n everyone at door for leaving..
Swayam:idar aaja..
Rey:ha bolna..
Swayam:tumhara agar phne ka battery khatam hogaya na,to tum landline use karna...
tum charge mat karna, mera dusra phne waham pada hai,woh use karna...
Rey:kya bole jaa rahe ho...sharon ise lekar chalo..
Vicky:landline bhi zara dheere keech lena...
Nil:kahin swayam battery na phek de..
Taani enters..
Taani:kahan jaa rahe aap bhai..
Swayam:sharon ke ghar mein koi nahin hain..
main subah aa jaonga..
Taani:toh main akele yahan..
Rey puts his arms around her..
Rey:main hoona,tumhe, khabrane koi zaroorat nahin..
Vicky:woh sab se bada dar hain..
Rey:kya bhola..
Swayam:chalo nikalthe hain sab...
Rey closes d door..
Taani goes to kitchen..
Rey leans on d kitchen door folding his hands...
Taani:kya dekh rahe ho aap..
kuch chahiye..
Rey:koyee nahee hai kamre me, kya hasin mila hai pal
aaj shararat karne do, kam bakee karenge kal...
n moves towards taani..
Taani:jao baba jao, aise naa behkao
hosh me aa jao, pagal naa bano tum
places one hand distance on rey...
Rey:ab yeh kisliye...
Rey pulls her by her waist..
Rey:hone walee mrs.singhania..
ab yeh karna chod do..
Taani:nahi mr.singhania..
ap apne kamre main jaayiye...aur mein apni..
Taani turns n tries to move..
Rey puls her more closer..
Rey locks her hands on her tightly...
Rey picks her up...
Takes her to hall n keeps her down on d sofa..
Rey lays on her..
Rey:ab kya karoge..
Taani raises her head to kiss on rey..
rey closes his eyes..
Taani pushes him n gets up...
Taani:ab kya..
Rey:accha..
Rey switches off d lights..
Taani:rey
Rey:hmm..
Taani:mujhe dar lagthi hai andere se..
Rey:pata hai..
Taani:toh lights on karona...
Suddenly taani feels warm hands around her..
She could feel her heart pouding fast..
Her breathing increased...
Rey switches on d lights..
Rey:chehra dekho..
Taani hugs him closely..
but gets angry..
Taani:chod do mujhe..
Rey:sorry baba(makes a puppy face)
Rey catches her hand n picks her up..
Rey lays her down on d sofa..
Rey kisses on her forehead...
Taani closes her eyes...
Pulls him closer...
Rey being grantd permission,didnt wait longer..
he kissed on her lips..
They kissed for while..
taani's arms round him...
Rey kisses on her shoulder n slids d strap...
Taani shyes her head away..
Rey keeps wet kisses on her neck..
Tanni tighly places her hand on rey...
Rey moves her top...
Kisses on her belly..
Taani clutches on d sofa tightly...
Rey removes his tshirt n lays on her..
Rey holds taani hands..
But he tries to roll..
BUt being d sofa..
It slides n dey fell..
Taani on d floor vd rey on top n sofa on rey..
Rey:hey bagwaan,ab yeh sofe ko bech diya kabab main haadi ki tarah..
Mera back..
Taani:rey aap teek hain..(controlling hard nt to laugh)(but burst out laughing)
Rey:aahh!!! haso...
Taani:ab kaise udoke..
yeh poora mujhe par,aap,sofa..
kisiko bhulavoon kya..
Rey:iss condition..
tumhare bhai ke haath se tumhare kanyadaan to nahin,main mar zaroor jaungi..
Taani:ab kya kare..
sharon ko bhulaye..
Rey:kisliye..ab jo mazak chal raha hai ,woh kaafi nahi hai,
Rey:mera back..ahhh!!!
Taani:bahut dard ho raha hai..
rey:tumhe bahut hassi aa rahi hai na..
Taani n rey tries to get up anyhow..
But on d process ,sofa had broken..
Both gets dressed..
Both stares at d broken sofa...
Rey vd his arms on his back..
Bursts out laughing..
Rey:aah!!
Taani:aap chaliye..main painkiller deta hoon...
Taani sleeps beside him..
Rey goes to sleep seeing taani sleep...
Morning..
Bell rings..
Its swayam..
Taani:udo rey..
Rey:kya hua..?
Taani:bhai aagyae..
Rey tries to get up...
Taani:abhi bhi dard nahi gaye..
Rey:tum pareshan maat ho..woh teek ho jayega..
Taani:par..
Rey (cups her face)its k sweetheart..
Taani:(remembers smethng) sofa..
Rey:kya sofa..
Taani's phne rings..
Its swayam..
Swayam:udi nahi ab tak,kitni baar bell baja rahoon,darwaaza kholo.
Taani:ha bhai ,abhi khol raha hoon..
Taani keeps d call..
rey:tum kya sofa kah rahi thi?
Taani:jo toot gaya..
woh bhai ko kya bhloenge..
Rey:oh freak..
Rey:tum chalo,main kuch boltha hon..
Rey get up hardly n catches taani n walk 2 door..
Opens d door..
Swayam:tum ud gaye..
Sees rey's arm on his back..
Swaym walk but turns n sees him walking vd pain..
Swayam:kya hua...?
Rey:push ups karte waqt cramp hogaya..
stares at taani..
Swayam:accha..
Swayam turns n sees d sofa ..
Swayam:ab isko kya hua..
Tum donom chup kyun ho..
Taani:woh bhai, kal na, fan par spider tha, to usse dekhar main dar gayi aur maine rey se bhola, use hatane ko,to rey ne sofa main rookakar usse hatane koshih ki aur rey slip hogaya aur sofa bhi tut gaya...(Taani closed her eyes n told it in one breathe...)
Swayam:tum toh push ups kar raha tha na..
Rey:gir the waqth kuch nahi hua..mera camps abhi thodi der pehle hua..
Swayam:tu teek haina rey,doctor ke pass jaate hain..
Taani:main sab ke liye naasta banathi hoon,phir ready hokar chalthe hain..
Everyone gets n ready n leaves...
Everyone at college...
Vicky:tu late kyun aaya..
Kal bahut charge kiya kya..
Swayam:ape hat..
Woh rey ko lekar doctor ke paas gaya tha..
Vicky:kya hua rey..
Rey:woh back par cramps ho gaya..
Neha:wr s taani..
Taani enters..
Swayam:lo woh aagayi..
Woh ghar par sofa toot gaya , usse teek karne keliye koi aaya tha to taani wahan ruk gayi..
Vicky,amar,bharat,nil:luks at each other...
Tum phir se bhol sab..
Swayam naraates evrythng,sharon also hears dis..
Sharon goes near rey.
Sharon:mujhe jo lag rah hai , woh haina..
Rey:tumhe kya lag raha,mujhe pata kaise hoga...
Sharon:tum kafi strong ho na,sofa bhi thod dala..
By the tym swayam finishes telling d story..
Vicky:dude bahut zor se keechi haina...
Rey:kya ?
Nil:landline..
Swayam:humare ghar par landline bhi karaab hua,taani?
Taani:nahi to..
Vicky:kitne push ups maare rey..
tu to usmein champion haina..
Rey:kya karoon,champion bhi kabi kabhi gir jaathi hain..
vicky:kahan se..
Rey:(accidently slips tongue) sofe se..
Tanni:keeps hand on her foreahead..
Swayam didnt hear dat..
Vicky:ab aaya oondh pahaad ke neeche..
Swayam:ab yeh oondh aur pahhaad kaahaan se aaya...?
Sharon:spiders,cheeti,maachar ayyya , ussi tarah...
Rey : main jaa raha hoon..
Taani tum bhi chalo..
Boys raises d hands up:chemistry...
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Edited by lachu123 - 12 years ago
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