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Posted: 12 years ago
Hhahhahahah! Hilarious! 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
wwaao wht a funny update..!
i loved sharon's dialouge to rey: tum lo ek dusre ko kaatte kioo rehte hoo🤣
keep updating ..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOL.. Sharon leg pullibg me maahi hain.. Loved it.. Precap.. Swayam faints? Kya hoga?
Update soon...
Pm me!! 😃
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Hey guys...!
I hope u all liked my last update..
Now its time for next..
Enjoy reading..

Taarey ff:After goa Part 13-(its party tym)page 39

Gals r busy in the preparation...
Taani gets a msg from rey..
Rey:busy ho kya?
Taani: ha,kitchen mein cake bake kar raha hoon...?
Rey:accha ek second keliye mere kamre mein chalo.
Taani:aap to nahin ho na yahan,phir mein kyun chaloon?
Rey:tum kitani sawal pocchthe ho?
ab tum chalkar mujhe msg karna..!
Taani:k

Taani gets into rey's room..
Taani msges him..
Taani:i reached ur room..
Rey:ab mere cupbpard kholo..
Taani:khol diya..
Rey:ek box dekhliya hoga tum,usme ek gift hain,tumhare liye,tum use pehnlena..
Taani: d dress s so pretty,i loved it..thanks sweetheart..
Rey:k den ,u go on with ur work,mei tumhare bhai paani mein phekne waala hoon...
Taani: jo chaho kariye ,lekin mere bhai ko 12 baje leke aana...
Rey:kk..bye..

At night..
Sharon:tum kahan thi..?
Taani:woh mein ...
Sharon:sab ready hogaya na...
Neha:lighting sab hogaya..!
Simmi:music bhi..
Rinni:mujhe job hi kaha,woh bhi ready hai...
Sharon:simmi...
Simmi:main dektha hoon Sharon..
Taani:food bhi ready hai..

Sharon:toh mein rey ko phne kartha hoon aur usse bholtha hoon,woh swayam ko lekar aaye yahan par..tab tak hum ready hote hain...

Taani gets ready n comes out...


Sharon:wow taani,someone s luking hot..



(picture courtesy:raddhi)


Taani:woh rey ne diya..
Sharon:perfect choice hai mera best frnd ka..
Taani:smiles..

Boys enter..
Swayam:itna sannata kyun hai bhai..?
Rey:sab so gaye honge..
Vicky:gagu ko gud ni8 bhi nahi bhola..
Bharat:ape chup..

Suddenly lights cme on..
Everyone started singing HAPPY BIRTHDAY..
Swayam was shocked n hapy at same tym..
Rey was trying to see taani among all ...
Suddennly he sees taani..
He was mesmarised by her..
how beautiful she luked...

Taani: (showed action to rey on how she luked..)
Rey: u r luking beautiful...
Taani comes near to swayam..
Taani:happy birthday bhai...
Swayam:thanks taani..
Swayam:toh isliye tum sab mujhe pura din ghar se bahar rakha,i was wondering yeh log paani se kyu nahi bahar rahe hai..pehli baar paani dekha ho aise behave kar rahe the..
Rey:ab toh dance bantha hai boss...

Everyone on d dance floor...

Rey catches taani's hand n takes her to dance...
Music starts palying...

Suno na kahe kya suno na
Dil mera suno na, suno zara
Teri baahon me mujhe rehna hai raat bhar
Teri baahon me hogi subah


Rey:bahut pretty lag rahi ho tum...
Taani:thank u...
Rey:ek baat poochu , maan jaogi meri baat...
Taani:ap meri zindagi bhi poocha tho bhi de doonga mein.poochkar tho dekhiye..
Rey:woh to mein hoona,toh mein apne apko kyun poochoonga...
Taani:matlab..?
Rey:tumhari zindagi,main hoon na,toh phir..
Taani:smiles,n kisses on rey's cheeks...

Boys : chemistry..

Be intehaan (be-inteha)
Be intehaan... hmmm
Yun pyaar kar (yun pyaar kar) Be intehaan
Dekha karun saari umar (saari umar)
Tere nishaan be-intehaan
Koi kasar naa rahe, meri khabar naa rahe
Chhu le mujhe is kadar be-intehaan


Taani:jo poochna hain,poochiye...
Rey:to tum manoge..

Jab saanson me teri saansen ghuli toh
Phir sulagne lage
Ehsaas mere mujhse kehne lage
Haa baahon me teri aake jahaan do
Yun simatne lage
Sailaab jaise koi behne lage
Khoya hoon main aagosh mein
Tu bhi kahaan ab hosh mein
Makhmali raat ki ho naa subah
Be intehaan, be-intehaan
Yun pyar kar be-inteha
hmmm..

Everyone was bz in d danceing,

Rey:mere saath upar chalo..
Taani:abhi,sab kya sochenge?
Rey:joo sochna hai,sochne do...
Rey drags her to his room...

Rey n taani in room..
Rey moves closer...
Taani falls on d bed...
Rey lays on top of her..
He moves her locks away from her face..
Rey leans to her.

Gustakhiyan kuch tum karo
Kuch hum kare iss tarah
Sharrma ke do saaye hain jo
Muh pher le hum se yahaan

Haan chhu toh liya hai ye jism tune
Rooh bhi choom le
Alfaaz bhige bhige kyun hai mere
Haan yun choor ho ke majboor ho ke
Qatra qatra kahe
Ehsaas bheege bheege kyun hain mere
Do bekhabar bheege badan
Ho besabar bheege badan
Le rahe raat bhar angdaiyaan


Rey kisses on her forehead...
Taani closes her eyes...
Taani's breathing increased..

Rey kisses on her lips...

Rey broke of d kiss...
Taani opens d eyes..
Taani cupps rey's face...
Taani:kya hua..?
kya baat hai...
Rey:woh chalo,neeche chalthe hain..
Rey gets up...
Taani catches his hand...
She gets up n kisses on his forehead...
Rey hugs her closer..

Be inteha, be inteha
Yun pyar kar, be inteha
Dekha karoon saari umar
Tere nishan, be-intehaan
Koi kasar na rahe, meri khabar na rahe
Chhu le mujhe is kadar be-intehaan

Rey:chalo neeche chalthe hai..

Vicky:lo aagya love birds..
Swayam:kahan thi tum dono?
Boys: (raises d hands)
Swayam was about to say smethng..
Rey falls on his knees..
Swayam : (in a slow voice) rey kya kar raha hai tu?
Sharon:andha ho ? nahi na?
Vicky:woh taani ko..
Neha:shooo,tum toh aise karne se rahi..
Nil:dude
Simmi:shutup
Amar:le lekho
Rinni:dekhne do na,chup..

Taani:rey kya kar rahe aap?
Rey:i knw ki college khatam hone ape kuch mahina baacki hai,college ke baad hi u know,tab tak, u knw,
i know ki practically yeh stupid lagega..
But only thing i know is that i love you.
the only thing i know is i want to be with you,
the only thing i want in my life is you,
So Taani shekawat, will you move marry me...
Taani: (in tears)
Gals:awww
Rey:jaldi bholo,mera knees pain kar raha hai..
Taani: (makes rey get up)
Yes ,i will marry you reyaansh singania

Suddnely,smethng fell down..
Everyone luks n its swayam..
Taani:bhaai
Rey,Sharon,amar,bharat,viki,simmi,nil,neha,rinni,aashi:swayam

Precap:will swayam agree for dis proposal?
rey wants taani to move in with him till marriage,
will swayam agree to dis?

Keep watching dis space for further updates...
Please do tell me if u guys want d next part..
Please gve comments of atleast 4 pages guys...
Silent readers , comments plse...
Have a nice day guys.

PART 14-PAGE 43

Edited by lachu123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
R U SERIOUS? did Swayam really faint bcz Rey proposed to Taani for marriage? LOL. I just can't stop laughing. THAT moment was HILARIOUS. I could literally picture in my head & JUST CANT STOP LAUGHING..
The whole this was so good.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lolll, swayam fainted, that was hilarious, n rey proposeddd, omggg!!! How cute, swayam will probably get a cardiac arrest after the moving in thing loll
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Posted: 12 years ago
Swayam faint cause Rey proposed to Taani well that was a surprise ...I hope Swayam accpets the relationship and wait ... Rey wants Taani to move in to his house till they get married OMG ! Wow that would be some romance ... They dress was really nice and I love song (evemore cause Taarey actually danced to it) PLSSS UPDATE SOON ... and thanks for the update and the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woohooo.. Rey proposed her..!!! and swayam fainted gosh that was so hilarious..
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Posted: 12 years ago
lol swayam fainted 😆 cont soon yaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
Swayam is way too hilarious...
bichara ..
rey proposed taani and swayam faint...
precap ...
agar swayam ye sunaga to uska kya hogaa...
bichare ko attack na aa jaye...
thanks for the pm and do cont. soon.

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