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Posted: 12 years ago
Lachu, i read all parts of this story now what to say i am almost dead, all parts were hot n romantic , i think this is the most romantic ff on tr my God if any1 reads it in 1go like i did,they will b dead its so so so superb , hats off to ur ideas , these many tr scenes .. Superb dear. Thanks for pming else i would have lost a chance to read this
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: disismeenu4u

Lachu, i read all parts of this story now what to say i am almost dead, all parts were hot n romantic , i think this is the most romantic ff on tr my God if any1 reads it in 1go like i did,they will b dead its so so so superb , hats off to ur ideas , these many tr scenes .. Superb dear. Thanks for pming else i would have lost a chance to read this



Thank u so much for ur comment..
it wonderful to hear from an amazing writer like u n
I am so happy u liked my work..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update yr wow just wow
continue soon
thanks 4 pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wt a dare lol buh tht wz a hot update☺️lovd it👍🏼
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was jst awsum...when r u planning 2 update...plz. Update fast...jst luvd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
update kyu nehi kiya??? plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys...
Thanks so much 4 d comments...
I hope u all loved my surprise in d last update...
Now, here i go with d next..
Enjoy Reading...😊


Taarey ff:After Goa-Part 12 (fun,masti,romance)page 35


In d morning..
Rey still sleeping...
Boys in d rey n swayam's room...

Vicky:mujhe lag raha hai,yeh koi infection hai?
Swayam:kaisa infection?
Nil:dekho na,pehle iske back par tha chot,ap kaan mein bhi hogaya?
Bharat:ape woh to..
Vicky:(catches bharat hand)
Nil:dude muje lag raha hai,
Rey wakes up..
Rey:tum sab log humare kamre mein itni subah ,kya karne aye ho?
sona do,itna shor mat machaona!
Swayam:ek baat poochon tumse?
Rey:poochana..
Swayam:tumhare kaan mein kya hua?yeh itna lal kyun hai?
Rey:(gets shocked , n swiflty gets out of d bed) ,rushes to see in d mirror..)
Vicky,amar,swayam,bharat n amar:(shocked 2 see rey's behaviour)
Rey:woh toh,
Vicky:kahin gir gaya tha iss baar baar ya,charge ho gaya tha..?
Swayam:yeh kya bhole jaa rahe ho..?
Rey:woh kuch kaata hoga..
Vicky:kya kaata hoga rey?
Nil:ha dude,humein lagtha hain,tumko.
Rey:cheeti ya machchar kaata hoga,ha!
Swayam:dekho to iske kaan,jo bhi kaata bahut zor se kaata hai..
Vicky:bahut pyaar se haina rey?
Bharat:ape pyaar se kun kaatega kuch..
Nil:iss cheeti bahut pyaar se kaatatha hai bharat..
Swayam:tum log din par din pagal hote jaa raha hai..

Rey:ha swayam,(Stares at them)
ab sone do mujje,tum log jao..
Vicky:kitna soega tu?
Nil:ha dude,tum kal raat chori kar raha tha kya ya...
(vicky,nil,bharat,amar) raisees deir hand..
Swayam:(understuds by boy's rasing hand)
Rey:kya ?
Rey:kuch bhi ha...
Swayam:usse bhi aur mujhe bhi sone do..



Taani's room..
Taani hiding under s bedsheet...
All gals in the room..
Neha:y tanni hiding in bedsheet?
Sharon:tumhe fever hai kya,swayam ko bhulaavo..
Taani:nahi,mujhe kuch nahi hua...bhai ko to bhilkul nahi bhulana..
simmi:to bedsheeet se bahar aao..
Rinni:mujhe latha hai, taani ko pimples hua hoga..
Sharon,simmi,neha,aashi:rinni chup..
Sharon:dekho taani,jo bhi hai,humein bataona...hum kissise kuch nahi kahega...
Taani:sharon tum log bahar jao,plse , mein fresh hokar aati hoon..

Gals k..
sharon n gals makes fake noises vd foot oof going out...
But stands near taani's bed..

Taani gets out d bedsheet n steps out of d bed..
Taani get shocked seeing gals near her..n suddenly jumps back into d bed n bedsheet...
Sharon:tumhare neck pe kuch hai...
Neha:neck biting kaun?
Rinni:muje lagatha hai vampire hoga,oh simmmi muje dar lag raha hai..?
Simmi:chup raho,kya hua taani..

taani:macchar kaata hoga..mujhe allergie haina macchar se..
all gals confuses expression
Sharon understuds n tells gals..
Sharon:mere legs mein bhi hai..mein abhi change kiya hai jeans mein,so cant see it..
I was wearing shorts ,so i got mosquito bites, may b taani myt hve too ,(luking at taani)
u knw got mosquito bites

Taani:ha..so will u gals leave so, i can dress up..
Gals leave..
Taani gets freshen up,but wears a turtle neck black tshirt vd full sleeves n blue jeans...

All at d breakfast table...
Gals r staring at rey's ears n boys at taani 's turtle neck tshirt..
Sharon:tumhare kaan mein kya hua?
Boys:cheeti ne kaata...
Swayam:yeh tum kya pehna hai,itni garmi hai,tumhe fever hai kya...?
doctor ke paas jaana hai..?
Tanai:nahi bhai(Stares at rey)
Gals:isse macchar ne kaata...
Rey luks up n stares..
Sharon was sitting vd rey...
Sharon:tum log ek dusree ko kaatathe kyun rahte ho,?
Rey:chup ho ja meri maa..
Swayam hai..
Sharon:woh to bhudhu hai, muje ek second mein pata chala..
Rey:woh bhudhu to bilkul nahin hai,woh tumhare kamre kal kya karne aaya atha,?
hawa khane..?
Sharon luks away..
Swayam:taani tumhe mosquito replent cream use karna chaiye tha na,?
Taani:kuch nahi hai bhai,ek mosquto bite tho haina..
Sharon:bhahut pyaar se kaat hoga..
Swayam:macchar kaise pyaar se kaattha hai...
Sharon:iss macchar aisa kaattha hoga,haina taani..
Taani:(luks down n stuffs bread into her mouth...)


Taani gets up n goes to d kitchen..
Rey starts 2 get up..
Sharon pulls him closer n tells..
Sharon:iss bhar dyaan se kaatna...nahi toh swayam mosquito replnt lekar aa saktha hain..
Rey:apna room lock karke so jaana kal se, nahi toh koi bhi aa saktha ha, hawa khane u know...
Sharon:tum jao..

Taani was murmurring to herself..
Rey comes n holds to her waist...
Rey:kya hua meri jaan?
Taani:kya hua,(slides her tutle neck)yeh dekho?
Rey:tum bhi toh kam nahi hai,points towards ears..
Taani:(blushes)
Rey:maar dalogi kya...
Rey:itna sharmao mat..mera contol toot jayega..
Rey pulls her by waist n pulls her facing him..


Taani:kya kar rahe ho aap..sab bahar hai,bhai bhi...
Rey:tumhare bhai bhi kam nahi hai..
Taani:kya kam nahi hai..
Rey:woh kal tumhare kamre mein aaya tha...
Taani:mujhe dekhne?
Rey:nahi mujhe?
Taani:kya?
Rey:hayee ,meri princess sharon ko dekhne..
Taani:aww
Rey:kya aww?

Rey leans to kiss her...
Taani closes her eyes...
Rey places a kiss on her cheeks..
Taani opens d eyes n places a kiss on rey's forehead..
Rey:mar jawwaann..
Taani:(smiles..)
Rey:pulls her more closer.deir noses touching each other...
Taani closes her eyes firmly..
Rey places kiss on her lips..
Taani kisses him back..

Sharon:oh shit!..
humseha wrong timing mein meri entry ho jaati hai..


Rey n taani brokes of their kiss..
N Taani embaressd leaves d kitchen..

Rey:tumhe abhi yahan aana tha..
woh swayam ko cold water chahiye tha,woh aane wala tha,tab maine socho tum log yahan,its better ki mein aa jaati hoonn..
meine toh tumhare garden mein girne se cheeti,macchar kaatne tak to..
Rey:ha bas bas...

Everyone in d living room expect swayam..
Vicky:aaj ka kya plan hai..
Sharon:aaj raat ko special baat hai...
Rey:kya..?
Sharon:kal swayam ka b'day hai...
Rey:oh
Rey:toh party defintly hone chaiye..
Sharon:deere rey..

Rey:sry..
Vicky:toh kya karne ka plan hai...
Sharon:tum log ko swayam ko aaj shyam tak bahar rakhna
jab mein call karrongi ,tab tum log aajana usse lekar..
Rey:hum usse le jayenga kaha..?
Sharon:yahan ek lake hai,wahan boating,hoti hai,tum log wahan jaake aana..

Sharon:aur gals hum party ki tyaari karte hai,what say?
Gals:yup...
Sharon:no boys entry hogi yahaan..(luking at rey)
Taani:(smiling)
Rey msges taani:tumhe bahut hassi aa rahi haina..
Taani: kyun nahi aati,aapki chera dekho to?
Rey:accha..

Swayam enter..
Sharon stares at rey...
Rey:swayam,hum boys kahin jaate hain...boys day out..
shyam tak aajayenga..
Swayam:kahna jaana hai?
Vicky:yahan ek lake hai,wahan jaate haina..
Swayam:to gals kya karenge ghar par..
Rey:woh log yahan ka koi spa par jaa rahe hai..
Swayam:poora din spa par..
Sharon:tumhe koi problem..
Swayam:nope..



Precap:
Party time...
swayam faints..😆
Why did swayam faints...
Ready 4 another surprise...?


If u want d next part plse do give comments...
i hope u all loved today's update...
Please tell me if u guys wants d next part...
Please guys,atleast 3-4 pages of comments..😊
If i get enough of comments today..i will definitly post d surprise update..😊

Have a nice day guys...!!

Part 13-age 39


Edited by lachu123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hehehehe
cant stop laughing
gosh...
how i loved it...
Nil:iss cheeti bahut pyaar se kaatatha hai
Sharon:iss macchar aisa kaattha
hoga,haina taani..

sahi resemblance hai
acha laga
padh ke...
pls jaldi
upd karna
ha...
n woh
taarey ka kitchen
romance
aye hay
mein toh marjawn...
so sweet...
pls upd soon

ps: read this post on every page of replies
waise ul get 3-4 pges of
replies...
fir ul upd jaldi...
hehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it.
loved the way sharon teasing taani and boys teasing rey...
thanks for the pm and do cont. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it
Omg
Cheeti n machhar
Lolz

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