Kalarikkal House [5]: new thread link posted p.152

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rhearuhi

@rhearuhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

honestly it was the best proposal ever and the chapter was too hot to read the kiss , kashi laying her head on his shoulder and arnav hugging her,,,,just too good...congrats on the new thread..

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Every emotional outburst from these two needs to be routed through this mandatory anger, no? Something that makes them put down their guards and give in...

Pretty awesome

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spongebobchick

@spongebobchick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Congratulations on the new thread!

I love reading this FF!!!

I loved this update! It was good to see both of them let their guards down a little and acknowledge that there is more to their relationship. I'm looking forward to hearing Kashis response...

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Omg!

I never noticed that you put a link for thread five and now I'm an entire day late, an entire day of living my ordinary life, not knowing that chapter 56 is up! Ha okay...I'm dramatic, I know!

But better late than never 😊

And how I loved this chapter! It took me back again...to Kalarikkal house yet again, more deeply than the last chapter did. This chapter was perfect in so many ways! Loved it...like love all your chapters. But this...think one takes the cake for now!

It had everything! Feisty Kashi, slap, passion, the ever-so-hot-and-passionate kiss, and finally... the proposal! Perfection!

And I can't believe he proposed! And what a proposal it was! So simple, yet so passionate and sweet!

Now...I wonder how she'd respond. Knowing her...I think she'd refuse at first 😃

Cheers!

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

goodness gracious! Your brilliance, devi, is beyond comprehension.

However odd this nay sound, I had a feeling since the second he kissed her against he door, that the talk of marriage was going to make an entry in this chapter. And it DID.

I know I can never guess khushi's answer so I won't even try, I'll go with the flow.

But I hold utmost respect for this story and of course for you, i just want you to know how honoured I feel to be able to read this beauty, to know a piece like this exists.

love
sonia

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Congrats on the new thread.

Great update pleased that Kashi has given in a little. The whole deja vu was brilliant and the proposal was beautiful hope she says yes

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Saving the best for last ;) [Just kidding...]

Genesis seems to be a re-occurring theme for me this week. The reference seems so apt, for Kashi, it was Eden.

Forget the proposal, this update brought back memories. The whole slamming against the door scene was so Shiv and Gauri. The when I read drew blood, I could only think of Meera and Pawan [If my memory is right].

Kashi and Arnav had never left, but I did miss this anger between the two. It made me happy to see them back in form.

Congrats on Thread 5, D. May we have many more! :)

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12345abcdefg

@12345abcdefg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Congrats in new thread. n great update :)

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prpk525

@prpk525

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Congrats dear. Loved it. He proposed! :)

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Wow... He Proposed to her , and what a proposal it was , no cheesy romantic lines... just a simple " Marry me " , his proposal was so true to his character 👏 ... I had this huge goofy grin on my face while reading this chapter😃 ... It was a meltdown indeed ... But only thing I am concerned about now is her response to his proposal ... Can't wait to read the next chapter ...

BTW CONGRATS 🥳 Devi ... For the 5th thread of the story ...

Edited by sini1234 - 12 years ago