Swaron OS: Raging Desires

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow! Seriously i am in love the way you write. :)

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

awesome os 😊

loved the way u presented the story from strangers to best friends to couple back to best friends again

Swayam confused about Sharon but also didn't want to leave her

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Sanjana

@sweet_sanju

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome
Just gr8 writing
Loved d way u expressed them
Amazing
Enjoyed reading d OS

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swapna

@shan16

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

woww owow wow ...i love dis OS...i thoroughly enjoyed it...

what a flow in ur writin...

thnks for PM

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Wow wow,
what a os..
Loved it to d core..
Longest os ever read..
Thank u for d awsm gift..
U r flawless writer

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome os

In the beginning i was in the dreamland imagining swayam proposing sharon

But in next moment i got a heart attack sharon is not that girl😲 and

swayam & sharon are best friend😕 only

In the flashback it was clear that from sharon's side it was love but she just accepted the truth wisely & become good friend.

But in the beach party everything changed, their equation changed & both of them were confused. swayam was super duper confused and acted like a complete jerk.

After one month i thought now swayam realizes sharon's importance that's why he asked her for date & relationship(laga shayad ab lalten jalli)

But the truth was something different, he asked her for date just becoz her current diva status swayam😡 was acted really selfish that time.

I really liked the character sketch of Sharon in this os, the way she handled everything was excellent & their confrontation in the class room after knowing the truth was beautifully penned down👏

And then swayam ki dimag ki lalten jalao mission to make him realize her importance she started to make him jealous(purana unchook tarika😆)

So finally swayam realizes that it was always love & only love between them & apologized for his behavior and confess his true feeling in front of her then their First kiss after confession was just magical

P.S.-this is the most longest os I've ever read. and thank you very much for writting this plz keep writing more. you are an awesome writer.

Edited by arch2012 - 12 years ago