ArHi FF:5:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 85

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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear Jammy and Sansu...
Im sorry for sounding a bit harsh about voicing out my thoughts on General Jha's intentions... Its just that we have discussed a lot about his self-centered intentions many times and I think I was sort of prejudiced about that character. Thanks for reminding me to keep my mind open... Anyway, this is an excerpt from chapter 86... Just listen to the General's words about khushi... Hope it helps you in understanding my doubts on his love for Lady Anjali and his supposed need for khushi...
CHAPTER 86

Lightning dug her hoofs into the ground, coming to a sudden standstill. He dismounted from her back and took a few tired steps forward before dropping to sit on the warm sunlit ground, cross-legged.

Lightning's snout nudged his shoulder and he looked at her from the corner of his eye, "I cannot help it, Lightning. I cannot do without her."

The horse leaned down and began to eat the grass beside him, passing her time in feeding herself for the next battle.

Her Master looked across the land before him, pulling the grass near his knee, and spoke as if in a daze, "She is a bewitching young girl, pulling at the fibres of my heart with just those wondrous eyes of hers."

He looked at his horse, who was eating away unconcernedly, "You saw her that day, didn't you? Didn't you feel yourself being awakened by her eyes?"

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Posted: 12 years ago
i was so happy to read the master gupta...is all good and healthy, its alright if he has forgotten a bit of the ball night.but i am sure that would not cast much impact on him. he'll be back to his regular life..

stories remain at it best with tragedy hitting but not leaving its mark on the rest of its journey..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Lin sorry for being late, was a bit stuck up..
Bt its strange dat master gupta doesnt remember any thing from da incident...
Now this was unexpected..
Waiting eagerly for 2morrow's update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I didnt have the chance to bid farewell to our dear friend Lady Lavanya.
Adieu Dear Lady La. I will miss you. We will soon meet if our Lin permits in future.

I got goosebumps when Lord Arnav shouted " SHADOW" to the point he slides his horse in front of the moving carriage. It might sound odd picking that part but truly loved the way he stormed the horse through the hard pour.

"We part as friends" OUCH!!! felt the pain between the two. However Lord Arnav never loved her but the way he looked at her for the last time is so touching. And yes the song. I never knew Kate winslet ever sang. Up until you linked us to that song. But truly loved the song you have chosen.

So do we not get any night update from Arnav's POV.?
Hmm... so General Jha is very much confident that Master Gupta won't die.
But it was a long time before General let sleep overcome him,his mind raging with thoughts of what had happened and what was to happen
( now this is something i'm a bit inquisitive about. Will Master Gupta remember everything ? and warn Anjali ? )

Sigh!!! Its indeed a relief that Master Shashi is perfectly fit and fine. Why does he not remember anything? And Lin Thanks that you didn't incorporate in your tale, the way the show wasted Shashi's talent keeping him helpless on the wheelchair. So, He will never remember what happened with him? even if he meets the General again?
Ahh..so the father and daughter visiting the palace again. I remember Khushi wanted to be away from it.. the further the better.

Update soon Lin dear.

CAC
Jo.
Edited by serialaddict12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
just no words...Awesome...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh, he's alive and well!! Thank goodness!!
But he has forgotten everything...
That's a twist that I had not anticipated, Lin...
And Khushi is coming to the castle, thinking about the First Lord..
Could I have asked for more??

I like how you've covered so much optimism with this line :

The sun was only coming up when the cart rode the two of them towards the Castle, the darkness slowly surrendering to the morning light, as Kushi's mind wandered to the curious embrace she had shared in last night's downpour with a man she was not sure she knew well anymore.

Though I'm not so sure about the latter part of it. . . . .

Thanks for the PM, Hun... :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
ooO read the last five chapters now!!!
AGAIIINNN A SUPERBBB UPDATE YAAARR!!👏
A BIGGG HUG TO YOUU!!🤗

THANXX yaar that you saved master gupta with a short term MEMORY LOSS!!!heheh but seems like he will remember all that when he sees shyaam creepwa again!!!!🤪

AND!!*ahem*ahem* khushi hugging the great lordy arnav!!awww that was something now a twist!!lolzzz😉
hoping that arnav will think about that whole night lolzz!!!🤣

thinking about that coochie coochie LAV!! its really interesting to think of her like those women with hat and umberella! she is sooo cute!!☺️

HEY ...i have a request yaar!!! please can i get a pdf or word document of this FF when you will be completting it(dont worry i will not run away infact will comment on each and envery update till the end lolzz)but i want that pdf so that i can give it to my class mates to read as they dont know how to use computers so fast they always mutter curses to it!!heheh i have tld them about this ff and they were more than eager !lolzzz making faces and bribing me to get this ff to them !hahah 🤣🤣😉

ANDDD FINALLY A DHAMAKA FOR YOU!! (i hope you know hindi) because i and my lol friends have given a nickname to this double sided shyaam!!! and that is
BHAALUU!!(IT MEANS BEAR IN HINDI!!! that animal !!lolzzz 🤪)
wanna see the reaction of shyaam after hearing this name??
http://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash3/c61.0.403.403/p403x403/541198_372181122856338_148557183_n.jpg
HAHAH!!!rofl!
CHALO i will take your leave ...😔 need to learn SCIENCE also for exams heheh!!!🤣..but will read your update!! I CANT WAIT!!!


Edited by aafreen48 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update dear lovely one

Ja im a silent reader lolz bt cant keep myself checking evrytime for update i soo love ot itz a very diff concept in fact i sonwanted tonread an ff abt arshi like this u knw like in old times etc n then infound yours last year dec since them i cant keep myslef from reading

Thanks a lot dear bon courage
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Aquiline!Hope u r good!
Just got free from my exam.Read all the updates.
In a nutshell the ball night was brilliant!
Special appreciation to Akash for standing up for his love,and Arnav running to meet La for 1 last time.
One the whole the ball night was a delight to read.
Thank Goodnes Shashi is ok.which got me thinking if his amnesia was a part of the General's attack or due to medication?
Looking forward for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ready and waiting! Please hurry and update. I'm gorging on chocolate while I wait... and I really, really need to stop! 😆

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