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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweety-reylover

aarree tenu pata hai combine work wich tym lagta hai ...u'll get it by tonite!


jo update kiya wahan toh comment karti hi nahi hai! 😳


maine padhe tak nahi wo!!!

mujhe ye padhna hai 😛
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Originally posted by: abhiyakreya


maine padhe tak nahi wo!!!

mujhe ye padhna hai 😛



toh kar wait! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

kamini ki bacchi update kitthe hai? 😡 😭



updating in some time! 😉
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bakwaas band kar n update kar 😳
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Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

bakwaas band kar n update kar 😳


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tadpane mein mazza aata hai! 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NACH BAALIYE-5

Sorry for d delay...
we thank every one who liked n commented on work...
thanq sooo much...
enough of ma bakwas..
here u go with d update...
happie reading...

Chap one

I was on the stage I knew something was wrong …but I was still blind folded…I could hear people clapping…screaming…going mad for the performance…I wanted to see the crowd…charlie…but uuhh…the cloth….the knot was not getting open!! And I went to all what happened in life….

-----Flashback-----

I was standing in the queue for DID auditions…there were lakhs of people….all I was thinking was to make…make it big…..do something…which will make me popular…. I was so tensed…I pluged in the head-phones…and listened to my all time favourite song…" gulaabi ankhen jo teri dekhi"

She came in running….her run was so gracefulll….i just kept on starring her…

Her eyes showed how happy she was….not forgetting the hat!

She took the hat in her hands…kissed it…and made a great ballet spin…

She hugged her friend or sister… and touched her mom's feet…how sweet…

She was now walking towards the exit….i turned back to have a last look…what I don't get selected ?

What I do!! I don't know why I wanted to met her…talk to her… my friend was standing in the queue …I jumped of the rope…and ran towards…exist….as I was running…I could feel people staring at me…but….guess what..i don't care!

I reached the exit gate…but she disappeared as if…she was a fairy…I don't know where she did….but it was like bouf! And gayab…I soo wanted to go out..and search for her…but I could not select girl over my career….i ran back to queue….there were 5 more people left before…me…

I switched the song….

----Flashback over---

A smile spread over my face as I saw such good memories….the best day of my life!

I was still blindfolded…I don't know what made the audience so happpie….that they were screaming "oncemore" in my whole nach baliye career, with Charlie….people never reacted to our performance this way…I could hear terrance sir…saying something…but it wasn't clear….because the people…were going mad and mad…

This time I tried harder…and the knot opened..but it was not because of my mehant …it was someone's hand who could not see my life in darkness….those hands…I have feel it before…maybe charlie's…or any of the crew member… maybe I am thinking bit too much!

Finaly…I got rid of the cloth..as soon as I opend my eyes…I saw the mad crowd…and they were actually happy with the performance… I saw the judges…terrance sir was so glad….i had seen this reaction when I used to dance with shaks!! My only dance partner… partner…Charlie….she owes me lots of answer…..i truned to my left….and…

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We our done!!

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Edited by nikkreyarshafan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres


confusing !

wo ladki shakti di thi na?

hope so!

update soon :)

@ shibi darls - dekh unlesh vi kiya aur tere waale se bada comment vi! 😛
Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago

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