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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
wow dear...luv it...taani loves rey...update soon...thanks 4 pm me n do pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: dh19

Loved Tayam bond...
and what about Rey and Taani ... as per precap something wrong happened...
seems that both loved eachother.. but ...
interesting precap.
thanks for the pm and do cont. soon.

yupe u got it rght..dey both have a past...in wch taani had brkn rey's heart...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: raddhi

it was nice hehehe

funny also poor rey yaar
hope swayam is fine n taarey llhh
n per-cape taani luv rey but
thr fight nahiii thanks for PM
n do put nxt prt soon n yeah do PM me

thanks...& don't wry swayam will be f9...and ya i'll pm u wen i update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Tahira-2013

wow amazing update really awesome

and the precape cant wait for it plzzz update soon

thank u ...i'll post it today...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: vibhaaa

wow dear...luv it...taani loves rey...update soon...

thanks 4 pm me n do pm me.

thank u ...yupe rey luvs tanni &taani luvs rey...i'll pm u ..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Amazing chapter, aww Taani went to get Rey and love Taarey llhh moment. Its soo nice that all four of them bond so well. Plz continue soon

thank u ..😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: kady_taarey

awesome start dear... :) loved ur update.. :-) precap is interesting.. do continue soon.. :-)

thank u ...😊.i'll update it in few mins...

Edited by 123renudrlng - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

chapter 2:The hurting past

taarey were still in de same postn...still lost in each othr..but got distrub by de sund made by de kids...both came into sense..but r still in de same postn...

rey :taanu ..i mean taani ur okay?
taani:ya am fne...
he help her 2 get strghtnd..jst den sharon came ...
sharon:bro tu ghar jara hena?taani ko bi leja...tekey?
rey :okay ..i'll..chalo taani lets go...
taani :ya okay..bye shar ..gud n8 drlng...
sharon :gud n8 dear ..take care of ur bhai &urself...
taani:i'll dear...(both of dem hug...&rey aslo hug sharon)
sharon:bye bro ..bye taanu ..
taarey:bye...
*************
taarey were out side de huse..cng swayam's cndtn taani culdn't cntrl herslf ..but strtd cryng ..rey culdn't c her cryng ..went near her &hugd her..she aslo hugd him back..

rey(still hugng her):hey come on tumari bhai ko kuchi nahi huva..he is okay na..don't cry taanu...i can't c u lyk dis...
taani(brkng de hug& cryng):i was thnk ki wat wuld happn if i didn't get any cal 4rm de party...he nvr lstn 2 me i said him 1000 tme 2 not be so implusv...but he nvr lstn wat 2 do wid dis guy...usey esi halthi me nahi dheki sakitha hu ...
rey :hey chill ..don't worry..luk at me ..meri cnditn dheko kasi hey?am i cryng ..no rght ?am lukng lyk jkr rght?
taani(gvng a smle):no ..u don't..evn in dis cndtn u luk cute...
rey: really? (befre she culd ans he cut her off)any ways...its too late lets go home...
taani:yupe k..
taareyam went 2 der aprmnt..rey help taani in takng swayam 2 dere flat...& plcd him on de bed in swyam's room...
rey(checkng his pockts): oh shit...i left my flat key at chachi's huse...oh god wat 2 do now?
taani:hey rey its k ..don't worry..shar wahi hey na she will get de key wen she is cmng 2rwm...
rey :ya but till den wer shld i be??withouth flat keys i can't go into flat rght?
taani:hey rey u can be in my flat ..as mom &dady r out of statn u can be in our flat till shar cmes...
rey :r u sure?
taani:yupe ..ya..u can be in de geust room...
rey :okay...
taani:wat r u gng do now?
rey : i jst want 2 take a shwr...culd pls tell me wer is de wash room?
taani:ya sure...cme i'll show u ..
(taani take rey 2 geust room &shows him de wash room and levs...rey took shwr ...as he doesn't have an xtra shrt ..he thught 2 ask taani 2 gve him swayam's shrt...at prsnt he is shrtless)
rey:hey taani ..suld u pls gve me one of de swayam's shrt?
taani( who was wid swayam takng his shoes off..hears rey ):ya sure rey one min am cmng...
taani took one of swayam's shrt and was abt 2 go de room wer rey was...&rey was cmng out 2 take de shrt..dey both bang into each othr..both fall 2 de grund..taani on de grund&rey on de top of her and shared a LLHH momnt...aftr sum tme both cme into der sense...
rey got up & helpd taani to get up..taani eyes widend by cng rey as he was shrtless...rey took one 4rwrd..taani moved backwrd...dis prcss cntnd till she hit de wall..
rey :oh 4r god sake will u pls stop movng back?
taani :hmmm.ya...wo actvlly...thanks rey.. thanks 4r evry thng u have done 2day...u have helpd me alot..
rey:no thanks taani...
taani:u r same as u wer in de past...
rey :oh pls...i don't want 2 talk abt de past..it jst gvs me pain wen i rembr it...😡
taani's eye wer wet by dis...
rey:u have hurt me a lot taani ..a lot..(took de shrt 4rm her hand&left into de room bangng de door in angry)..
taani 2 herslf:i nevr want 2 hurt u rey...but wat cld i do i have no optn left...sry rey ...i luv rey & i will be luvng u always...if posbl pls 4rgve me rey...
so here de chaptr ends...
precap:
swayam:BTW pehele meney kabi kaha hey kya ki u luk dam hot?
sharon(blushng):oh really?☺️
swayam:yupe..u r really hot..
sharon:thanks...
**********
rey:hey taani gve my crckt bat back 2 me...if not i don't knw wat i'll do..gve my bat back 2 me...(taani noded in no..and strtd rung..rey ran back of her..both wer runs around de room..rey fnlly caught her &strtd ticklng her)
silnt readr aleast hit lyk ..& aftr readng pls do cmmnt...need all ur feedback...pls ignr spllng aur gmmr mistkes...😊
luv,
renu
Edited by 123renudrlng - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
wow renu di! loved the update...rey is so sweet... and luvd d LLHH moments...😳
and im wondering ki suspense kya hai *thinking*🤔

but well, loved the update...cant wait 4 the next one... 🤗


Edited by Mohit_monaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
wow nice yaar
rey at taayam place
n taarey hug each other
n were taarey couple before ?
i mean taani luv rey but y she is away
from him y per-cape is nice n i think taarey
prt is flash back of taarey thanks for PM n do put
nxt prt soon n yeah do PM me kkk

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