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Posted: 12 years ago
awww it was a cute part luved it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dr.tani chasing swa wit crickt bats,swa seeking sha hlp & thn cms rey who alters d situation fr smtm & LLHH ws awsm.wt hpnd b/w TR?y hv tani brkn rey's hrt?suspense is kilng me dr.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

Chap 2:

Please reveal karo past ko.. M waiting eagerly.. Aisa kya hua TR ki life mein?!

have sum patience..dear am gng 2 reveal it in 6 or 7 chaptr...

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Posted: 12 years ago
ch4: we are lost...
nxt de in de clg...

(swaron wer in der botany class...dey both r science studnts..& taarey wer arts stutnds..)
botany techr:so stutnd ..am gng 2 gve a prjct 2day ..dats is to collct diffrnt typs of flwr..wch r vry rare...4r dis u people r gng to wrk in team...
so am gng tell who is de parntr of whom..so ..riya(swaron's classmate)wid rahul(swaron's class mate)..niha wid vicky..simmi wid nilesh..&sharon wid swayam...
aftr lstn 2 de teachr ..
sharon 2 herslf:oh god..wat de hell ..swayam and my pantr?i don't knw how ma gng 2 cmplt my prct ..i don't knw any thng abt him...hope dat its gng 2 be f9 ...
swayam2 himslf:oh so sharon is my prjct patnr..hm i thnk i will njy wrkng wid her as sis alway say abt her dat she is a gud grl ..swet grl..etc etc..will c how it will be wrkng wid her..
botny techr gve dem maps as wer 2 fnd dat flwrs..2 evr one&left de class ..
swayam:so sharon lets us strt de resh 4rm today? okay?
sharon:yupe okay..will strt in de evng okay...
swayam:yupe f9..
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in de evng..swaron in de car gng 2 get de flwr..4r der prjct..
swayam:so wat is de flwrs wch we have 2 find?
sharon:Rafflesia arnoldii,Silene tomentosa,Blue Bell Tunicate, Lotus berthelotii,Purple Foxglove..dats it..
swayam:okay wer do we fnd dis flwrs?culd u pls read de map?
sharon:ya sure...
swyam:okay wer shld we go now?
sharon:de maps says we have 2 go 2 de rght..
swayam:rght? ..i don't thnk so..it left 2 out of de twn..
sharon(in angry):hey do as i say..it is lyk dat only in de map...u say as if am wrng.. now take de rght
swayam:chil ..chill ...okay okay..
soon dey wer in a plce wer der was no one der ..dey wer in jungle...
swayam:wer shld we go?
sharon:hmm am cnfusd..de map says take left but der is no left trun here...(she gets 2 knw dat she was holdng de map up side dwn..)oh shit ..
swayam:wat ?wat happnd?any thng wrng..
sharon:sry swayam..i have done a mistke...
swayam: wat?
sharon:i was holdng de map upside dwn...
swayam:WTH sharon? oh god wat to do now? i don't wer we r now...
sharon(checkng her bag):oh shit...
swayam:now wat happnd?
sharon :i 4rgot my phn at home...
swayam:oh god..we r lost here and ur worried abt phn?
sharon :arey idt i was thnk ki if i had phn i wuld call my bro..&tell our prbml..
swayam:not a bad idea...u can call 4rm my phn..take it (gvng her his phn)
sharon:oh god not now...
swayam: wat happnd?
sharon:no sgnls..we can't make a call..
swayam:don't worried we r safe untill we r in de car...
but dey de car tire was punctrd...both got dwn 4rm de car and strtd walkng in jungle...
whle walkng ...
sharon(angry):dis is all becos of u?😡
swayam:oye..hello wat do u mean becos me?😕(cnfusd)
sharon:ya ..y did u hear 2 my wrd..if u didn't hear 2 me ..jst did wat u knw..we wuld not suffr here...😡
swayam:hey wats wrng wid u ..i don't undrstnd? 1st u only say 2 follw u ..thn u only ask y did u follow...wat ur prblm miss.signhania?..
sharon: mr.shekawath.. now i have 2 spend a whole n8 in dis jungle wid u..dats my prblm ..
swayam:don't worry ...am not a man eatr or an wild animl..dat i'll eat u...y do u hate me so much miss.signhania...?
sharon(gves him angry luk):wat evr..i jst don't want 2 cme wid u.. i'll take my way ..u take ur way..😡
swayam:as u wish ..
both lev in diffrnt dirctns..sharon hears sum one shoutng...
swayam:ahhh .. sharonnn
sharon:oh god ...is dat swayam? ..oh god..he shld not get hurtd..
(she strtd rung in de drctn in wch swayam went..)
***********************
here in de clg ..rey was tryng 2 do his work...but unable 2 do dat ...he was jst cng de taani's face in his eyes...all de mermies flashd in his mind...de 1st tme dey danced 2gthr...der 1st date..
der 1st fall ..and de mnt wen he propsd her...at de momnt wen he got de propse thng in his mind..he spokd to himslf:y tani y ?y did do dis 2 me?i luv u so much but u didn't luv me back y?
i hate u taani i hate 4r dis...de wrd u said r still ringng in my ears...(he brk dwn in to tears...)
here taani in RH..she is thnkng abt rey...der 1st meetng...der 1st date ...der 1st camp...& der 1 st kiss(she was blushng thnkabt it ) but soon her were filld wid tears..wen rembrd how she had brkn his heart...
taani 2 herslf:sry rey ...am sry..i want u back in my lyf but i can't get u back...but rey ..wat wuld u do if ur in my plce?if u wer askd 2 choose 1 thng b/w frndshp &luv wat wuld u choose?
i knw i have brkn ur heart...but i don't have othr optns rey...i knw ur still angry on me.. rey can't we atleast be frnds?(now she was sobng badly)


taani strtd dancng ..she is dng contemporary dance...on de sng'Mohabbat Aapse' from movie 'Aa Dekhen Zara'.

din chadhe mujhase puchhe najar,
kaun tha sapano mein raat bhar
aap ka hi tha asar,
abb aap hi ho humsafar(she does sum cntmpary steps)

mohabbat aapse aapse aapse,
haqiqat aapse...
sharabati najaron mein aap hai,
makhamali palakon ke paas hai (rey was abt 2 go home.. and he heard sum sund & he goes 2 RH & see taani dance..he was lost in her beauti)

aap toh ehsaas hai
abb khub hai aur khaas hai
mohabbat aapse aapse aapse, haqiqat aapse...
mohabbat aapse aapse aapse, haqiqat aapse...(rey is stll strtng at her...she takes a trun and fallng down tears flowng down her eyes...
rey cludn't c her lyk dat..but he cludn'tgo near her aslo..so he slntly left de place...
taaniwas sobng badly...2 her self:i hate my self 4r rejctng u ..i hate my self ...
so here it ends...sry guys as am a classicl dancr.. muje cntmpry me tuch nahi so i culdn't narrate de steps..
precap:
swaron 1st hug ...
rey claimng dwn taani...taani in rey's arms...

i knw bohat borng chaptr tha ..sry 4r dat...but nxt part will be gud one...slnt readrs atleast hit lyk..& pls do cmmnt aftr readng...😊
luv,
renu
Edited by 123renudrlng - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

hahahahahahah 😆 poor swayam and sharon is tooo much

and taarey 😭 im feeling sooo bad for them plzzz secret jaldi reveal karo
brilliant as always 👏 plzz update soon
Edited by Tahira-2013 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow awesome mindblowing update plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Renu lovely update, Swaron are too funny and Taarey why Taani has to choose between love and friendship. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Renu lovely update, Swaron are too funny and Taarey why Taani has to choose between love and friendship. Plz continue soon

dats becs she doesn't want 2 break sharon's trust on her..&der also anthr resn wch wil be reveald ..wen rey ask dis qustn 2 taani...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tahira-2013

hahahahahahah 😆 poor swayam and sharon is tooo much i too feel de same...but she is sharon yaar..how de hell will she agree her mistke? 😆

and taarey 😭 im feeling sooo bad for them plzzz secret jaldi reveal karo
i will reveal it in 6 or 7 chaptr
brilliant as always 👏 plzz update soon

thank u 😊


Edited by 123renudrlng - 12 years ago

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