My life! My way!- VirMan SS- 10th chap Updated! - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Wow new story!!!

Interesting start 😃.. Loved the title.. Manvi's attitude is just great.. Loved the way you have portrayed her.. Scuba is too cute.. Even I want a pet like Scuba 😛.. Lucky Manvi 😆.. Manvi-Tanya convo was too good 👏.. Loved the update.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Thanks a lot for the pm.. Take care 😊


Thanks Meera! Me too..I don't have a pet, I had before but I had leave the house so I left it back there, I'll finish my sad tale now lol! Will do now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A special mention to all the girls who have taken out the precious time out of their life to read and comment!

And all those who want a update for winds of desire- Sorry, I couldn't do it soon, as my boards are gonna start soon..so I'll write what I feel is easier to do (the thing I'm doing right now)!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Embarrassment: Around the clock!


Another day at work! Another day with my nutty "boss". I muttered under my breath skipping myself into the lift before it gets shut. Was I born with a wrong timing? Or does that happen to me accidentally, my head hung low as my "boss" entered the lift with the only two of us in the lift. I made some space for his 6 feet tall and a broad body, too much of an intoxicating sexiness I sighed inhaling his perfume. He had his usual grin on his face.

"Late again", he asked viewing his watch and sliding over his coat and then smirking on me.

"I could ask you the same", I answered immediately. Lucky that I had a comeback today.

"Smart excuse", he praised me with his accused eyes that looked more of an insult. As if I care! I had known him and his life story from college days; this isn't new to me now anymore! I silently followed in his tracks trying to act all goody good whilst I remembered that I didn't put the milk in a bowl for Scuba. Ouch! Poor thing. My heart went out to my darling back at home. He stopped abruptly his gaze fixed on my face or wait on my lips? Omg is he going to kiss me!!!!?

I tried to hide my embarrassment away before all the staff as he came near to me just leaving few inches away between us so that my breath does not hit his face. I had a personal grudge on him but still I had an urge to taste those sexy lips of his that I hadn't experienced for the past two years after our breakup!

Yes! You heard it right! BREAKUP, Well I had my personal reasons for it or better to say, he had his. Coming back to the moment, he moved forward raising his hand up and slightly caressing my bottom lip with one of his fingers. Okay, I need to control my impatience now. Is he going to caress my lips first and then get into a steamy kiss? Well whatsoever I couldn't wait to relish those tempting lips!

I closed my eyes slowly. Duh! I shouldn't have wiped away the blush back at home. It would have worked as an excuse as to why my face is turning red now. Why is he taking so longer to kiss? I opened my eyes not waiting anymore to see the reason behind his delay. Surprise was written all over my face as I opened my eyes. He showed me his finger, the very same which was caressing my lips one minute back. I looked over to it, bulging my eyes to find what he was showing!

"Didn't your old habit leave you Manvi"? He smirked sexily showing me the bloody pink lipstick that wasn't properly wiped off back at home. I guess there was still some on the corner of my bottom lip which was now shining brightly on his finger. A pang of disgust hit me as I looked over at him.

All my moments of having some fun flew like a sparrow peeing over me and turning away through the window. My saath rang ke sapne ultimately turning into saath khoon maaf.

"I understand old habits die hard", he nodded as if I was a freaking dumbo standing among the parade of staff members making a fool of myself.

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I know this is very short! I can't be helped..as a compensation I'll update the next part sooner!

And Pls give some long comments, so that I know where should I be improved. One-liners make me sick.

Edited by ITrustMyHeart - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
#24
First one to comment again!!!! Yay!!!! Loved the update a lot. It's awesome!!!! I really loved the Virat and Maanvi moment (I hope he is Virat) I'm in love with his smirk. LOL!!! Anyways I don't think you need any improvement because your writing skills are wonderful. BTW won't be able to comment or even read your story for I guess 1 month or so. Finals and then I'm shifting to a new place.
Edited by Stella_Virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love both the parts
loved the boss[virat] and manvi's part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Stella_Virman

First one to comment again!!!! Yay!!!! Loved the update a lot. It's awesome!!!! I really loved the Virat and Maanvi moment (I hope he is Virat) I'm in love with his smirk. LOL!!! Anyways I don't think you need any improvement because your writing skills are wonderful. BTW won't be able to comment or even read your story for I guess 1 month or so. Finals and then I'm shifting to a new place.


Thanks for the lovely words. Oh and not prob! Yeah even I'd be having my boards, so even I'm not gonna be active anymore! All the best...
Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: ITrustMyHeart


Thanks for the lovely words. Oh and not prob! Yeah even I'd be having my boards, so even I'm not gonna be active anymore! All the best...


Thanks and same to you :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update ⭐️.. So Manvi was in a relationship with her boss 2 years back.. I guess this nutty 'Boss' is none other than Virat.. Isn't it?? I hope it is Virat, because her boss does sound sexy 😉😳.. Loved the part where he wiped off the remaining lipstick from her bottom lip 😳.. Manvi's thoughts are well written 👏👏.. "My saath rang ke sapne ultimately turning into saath khoon maaf." - 😆 superb line.. Manvi forgot to put the milk in Scuba's bowl.. Aww poor Scuba .. Loved the update.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Best of luck for your exams.. Take care 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovey Update...! Surprised Virat and <Maanvi broke up 2 years back...n virat had his reasons...but she still would love him close...i tell u sometimes heart works against brains...loved Maanvi though she was embarassed...and the Virat is her boss...eager for the next...Thanks for the PM~!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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continue soon! 😃 first part was very cute wid sucba!! 😃 as for the 2nd part i would like to ask...from where do u get such amazing ideas from?? 😊!! continue soon plzzz and ty for the pm! 😊

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