My life! My way!- VirMan SS- 10th chap Updated! - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
this part was fun again ...
They both know eachother soo well annoying eachother still caring for eachother thts the speciality of their relation...:-)
Soo virat was at fault haan for the breakup and is all set to win her bke ...wow that's gonna be fun again ...
Wanna know the reason for the breakup thing sooo am all excited for the next update .:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago

superbb update!! n virat's pov is amasing.i like it more.u know its always facinating to read from da guy's pov😉so mr.vandera wants het back so bad!!!eekks can't wait to read da next!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ITrustMyHeart


GayathriKKB, so you're gs rocks right? Lol I got confused while I was sending pm, I was just tallying wheter I should send it or not! I guessed it through your dp, they're after all useful sometimes 😆!

Yeah I like independent people, one should stand on their own feet 😉, dogs do have infatuation really, my cousin who studies psycology told me 😆
Wil do !

Yep! i am gsrocks! :P
Ahh i am girl who beleives in being independent! :D i love that free nature and stading on ourselfs! 😉
Ok now let me read the new update!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!! I read the whole thing and at the end you just drop a bomb and name it precap!! 😛
I am just too curious that i literally cant even think of anything else! LOL :P
Ok let me come to the rest of the update!
Virat chose maanvi and now they are going on a business trip! TOGETHER!!! oopss my mind is just running wild at the moment! 😆
I loved the part where you wrote about maanvi's heels! her legs crying!!!
i love the way you make simple things into such hilarious lines!
Continue soon i am an excited soul right now! :P
And thnx for the pm!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wooofffhhh...at last read all the updates in one go!!
I had just read first two parts back then & now when i sat back to read the next, i found out that i had just forgotten the whole story & what was it all about😛😆...you wanna kill me for that?? Well sweetheart please spare me this time & trust me i was reading the first two updates with full enthusiasm which i had initially!!!!😃😉

Seriously gal you are that good that you can make me read your stories for lets say a 100 times also! And i won't mind to read them all together again, even a bit!!!!😊😉
Trust me without even blinking my eyes i have read all of yours 7 updates together & all of them were a treat to read!!!!!😃
I can't even read three pages of my course book without yawning for around 20 times!😆😆

But seriously man! What have you written man??? I must say you are so talented & yes, how good your sense of humor is , it can be easily seen in the story!!! Hats off man!!!!👏
I just love the way you write, the phrases which you use, the comments, everything is just placed perfectly in the places!!!!!😃😃

Uff!!!! I just can't stop praising you & moreover I just can't stop reading this story!!!!😃😃

Okay now talking about all the updates in a summary😛, I would say i love the character of Manvi over here & of course also of virat's! The way manvi snap back the answers to tanya & even to virat is so great & again like a treat...she leaves me astonished by her great harsh, straight comments!!!😉

This Rohit project will of course bring virman closer & help to sort out differences!!!!!
Next update will be about the reason of their break-up...wow...was waiting like hell for this!!!!
I would say all the best to virat to win back manvi!!👍🏼

And you gal, please do update soon, will be waiting for your update, for this story specially!!!!😃
And I would just like to conclude it in two words...HATS OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi,
It was lovely. Now they are going to work together and would also stay together for some time. Brilliant. Manvi's reaction was perfect in the light of their conflicts.
You added Virat's point of view. It kind of balanced the story and now we can see and understand things more clearly. He wanted her back and is going to fight for it, cool. He definitely knows her inside out and enjoys teasing her. This SS is getting more interesting day by day.
You are going to update regularly, awesome.
Thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh he still loves her he wants her bck yayee
So viraat is responsiable for their break up
Cn't wait for nxt part
Plz cnt sn
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG OMG...This is amazing...the most awaited Update for me...Maanvi's name for him 'lady love'...this is great...n this update n doubled my excitment to know the reason fr their breakup...Virat wants her back...but maanvi being maanvi will take long though she still loves him, After all chaudrain..Awesome..Waiting for the next n Thnks for the PM..~!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsm... loved to read virats pov, was so much waiting fr this... he loves manvi.. 3yehhh... and all set to get his lady love back...yuhuuu!!!... nd their break-up was bcause of his foolishness!!!... Want to know what happened... pls cont soon nd thanks fr th pm...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ITrustMyHeart


You re-read the story huh? Well did you feel it was horrible than your first read of this ss 😆
Virat's intentions would be more clear with the coming update...and I'd update ALOT faster from now on, you wouldn't even be able to grasp the things! 😆

Naah...It was nice reading once again...yes it is...yes m eager for your super fast updates...😃😆~!!!

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