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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
amazing, beautiful and fantastic update... loved each and every moment...
thanks for the PM as well...and do update soon =) eagerly waiting :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
chapter 4:
guys 1 thing actually i always write about taarey but this tym i m writting about the gang also...i m srry if i don't do justice with their characters...

{next morning everyone of the gang had to come early so ryte there in the college it was only rey's gang present in the college but for god's sake sharon and swayam had yet not come ...they were all finding taani and rey beacause sawayam had already realized his mistake and had told the other friends that taani and rey were struck out in the college bcoz of his silly mistake and that taani and rey...every1 was searching for taarey}
VICKEY- rey...rey...kahan hai tu yaar...
NIL- dude!! where r u??
AMAR- yaal yeh done tahan tale daye...
NIL- dude...kahin pe toh ek saath hi honge...m sure u remember chemistry...
BHARAT- sahi hai bhai... mistake kisi ki maze kisi ke...
{all the boyz start laughing their mischievous laugh}
SIMMI- guyz i think humein canteen mein check out karna chahiye...
RINI- ya u r ryte simmi...
NEHA- neha thinking ki yeh dono ko call we must doing..
VICKEY- arey waah gagu tum toh bht intelligent ho...
NIL- dude stop it!! yahan sab ki phati padi hai pta nai yeh dono kahan hai kahin late na ho jaaye... n secondly swayam ne humein bataya toh tha ki dono ke cell switched off aa rhe hain...
BHARAT- ek saath hain toh off toh aayega hi na...
AMAR- do not distulb wala sign {again the boyz start laughing}
NEHA- stopping u all they r not lyk this...
AASHI- i think ki woh dono terrace pe honge...
{every1 questions her that y would dey be on terrace}
AASHI- bcoz taani ko andhere se bht dr types lagta hai ...and raat ko toh lights bhi off types ho gyi hongi na...
{every1 praises her ...they finally decide to go to the terrace ...There when they reach the staircases they get to see a very unexpected but a very sweet scene...taani and rey so close to each other...all of them had their mouth wide open ...the gals had a questioning face while the boys wid a mischievous smile and they all heartily prayed for swaron not to encounter this scene...taarey were still sleeping but they got disturbed when suddenly vickey's phone rang with a name of swayam...taani and rey were yet sleeping and with a closed eye without noticing any1 she puts one of her hand on rey's face which was all this while resting on her head }
T- rey dekhiye na aapka phone baj rha hai..shayad kisi ki call hai
R- nai mere phone ki toh battery hi khtm ho gyi hai toh phir mera phone ...no its not that(and then rey asked taani to sleep again)
{once again every1 started enjoying their lovely chemistry but aashi did not lyk it because she knew it that swayam would hate to know about all this..meanwhile swayam entered the college and started calling rey and taani's name .he finally reached the terrace's staircases where evry1 was standing around taarey ..}
SWAYAM- guys tum log yahan pe kya kr rhe ho and rey aur taani kahan hai...??{realizing the situation nil shook up rey and simmi made taani wake up ..they both slowly opened their eyes and were shocked to see the whole gang in front of them and all the more shocked to see swyam in front of them...they settled themselves apart but naturally as they were the true lovers so by mistake had an eyelock... all the boys forgot about swayam and again raised their hands to tease them(guys remeber "chemistry" lol)
VICKEY- wow!! rey kal toh bht maza aai hogi na ...akele..haan
NIL- yes dude of course... maza toh ai hogi na
{and then all the boys start singing the song...raat akeli hai bujhe gaye diye...aake mere pass kaanon mein mer...but suddenly they saw swayam and in the tone of the song only they sang... ab chup ho jaiye...aur yahan se bhagiye(swayam saw all of them in frosty nosed look)}
SWAYAM- guys kuch chemistry ...vemistry nai hai..its all my fault meri hi wjh se inhein raat ko yahan rukna pda...bdw rey
R- (still lost in taani)
S- rey sun na... kahan khoya hai??
(boys sing bahon ki darmiyan...but again stand quiet after seeing swayam)
R- haan...haan kya main toh yhi hun... bol na
S- maine hari kaka(rey's servant) se tera bag mangwa liya tha aur taani main tumhara bag bhi lekr aaya hun...so u both go ...mmm tum log sharon ke ghr chale jaao maine use bta diya hai... uska ghr paas mein bhi hai so u guys will not require much tym... tum logon ke bags car mein hain aur ye le keys...
{rey takes the keys}
S- aur haan rey...
R- ab kya yaar??
S- woh sharon ko bhi lete aana..
R- oh gosh... mujhe bhi pta hai..."idiot lovr boy ..nahin bhulunga teri sharon ko lana.. ab main jaaun ya kuch aur bhi khna hai??
S- no no... bs tum log jaldi ana
{rey and taani moved on to go to sharon's house. they were cming downstairs and taani ws still thinking about last night and the kiss...but what happend suddenly...ooops...she was dis-balanced and was about to fall...but again she was safe...in some1's arms whom she thought that would nvr let her fall...nvr let her experience the hurt...but wait...this tym it was different she could not feel him... y so... wht had happened...she decided to see who had saved her from falling bcoz she knew it couldn't be rey...so who ws it...she opened her eye ...and saw ..SHIVAM... the worst person to whom one would evr want to see in the morning...
T- shivam aap??...aap kab aaye aur rey kahan hai??
SHIVAM- woh so called "tumhara" rey bahar car ke paas khada hai... maine suna ki tum raat bhr akeli thi yahan
T- nai rey they mere paas ...aap chinta mat kro..don't wrry
SHIVAM- usi baat ki toh chinta hai babes..
T- don't call me that ok...n choddo mujhe...let me go... rey mera intzar kar rhe honge..{she sumhow makes her free from him and runs out}
SHIVAM-babes abhi toh maine tumhe jaane diya... but not anymore...khair don't wrry i would enjoy u in goa...
T- rey aap wahan se aise chale kyun aaye..??
R- woh tumhara boyfriend aa toh gya tha na ...toh meri wahan pe kya zaroort thi..
{taani felt bad...dat y can't he understand ..but then made herself understand... to ignore the situation this tym and they finally sit in the car...none of them speak anything but then rey finally spoke out of concern}
R- waise tumhe chot toh nai lagi na??
T- chot...chot toh lagi hai...(stops for a while) but dil pe..
R- wht?? did u say sumthing else also..??
T- nai kuch nai...
R- bdw kahan??
T- no its ok... zyada nai hai...
R- r u sure???..may i help??
T- nono rey its ok..
{they finally reach sharon's house and rey rings the dorrbell and there taani ws bsy taking out her bag}
SHARON- oh rey...its u...welcome
R- hie...(to taani now) arey taani ruko ..let me help u
{he helps her in taking off the bag from the car and meanwhile their heads bang at each other...}
T- ooouuch...
R- ooo... m srry taani...
T- no its ok...
R- taani ek baar aur sar ladao...pls
{they again do the same for dat silly reason...which u know}
T- rey yeh aap kh rhe hain??...i mean thoda ajeeb lga
R- kyun??
T- nai aise hi poocha..
R- tumse hi toh seekha hai...
T- kya?? aapne kuch bola...abhi
R- main...nai toh...maine kya bola...maine kuch nai bola..
{now rey moves 2wards sharon who ws enjoying their lovely chemistry and taani was bsy doing sumthing inside d car}
(S FOR SHARON HERE)
S- ohho!! rey...wht chemistry.. haan
R- shron stop it tum bhi mat shuru ho jaao pls... and there's nothing lyk that ok
S- ok ok ok... don't tell me main koi bachchi nai hun ...i can understand it vry well
R- sharon stop uska 1 bf hai...(he said this vry sadly as though he hated to say this)
S- and u hate that ryte...bdw ab bta bhi do...u love her ryte...??
R- sharon chup rho yaar she'll listen
S- bas ek baar bol do den i'll stop
R- ok ok ok... yaa now fyn...ab mujhe andar aane do n stop it now..
S- wow!! rey...{she jumps lyk anything...meanwhile taani enters with the bag and sees sharon jumping with happiness}
T- kya hua sharon... bha...(puts a break...)
S- kuch nai kuch nai... congrats... taani
T- congrats kis liye..??
(sharon finally comes back to her senses...and stops)
S- yaa congrats kis liye...?? main aisa kyun kr rhi hun...(taani makes a weird face...then sharon sees rey's face who was pleading her to make some bahana)
S- arey woh hum sab india fest jaa rhe hain na... dats y... n isliye bhi dat u r free now from d college
waise bdw tum log jis kaam ke liye yahan aaye they woh kaam kr lo...swayam ka call 10-12 baar aa chuka hai..
R- yeah sure...
{taani enters the bathroom...where as rey is still out..}
{there inside after frshing up taani comes out... wearing a beautiful dress...she looked wonderful in her pink.. short kurti and a black Capri ...she looked wonderful...but to rey she always looked wonderful...rey's mouth ws wide open}
T- rey kya hua...aap aise kya dekh rhe hain...??
R- (after realizing...) nai kuch nai..
T- aap abhi tak ready nai hua...jaldi jaiyiye .bdw main shron bhabhi ke paas jaa rhi hun aap bhi aa jana toh hum ek saath breakfast kr lenge...
R- yeah sure...
{rey enters the bathroom...there were many bathrooms in Sharron's house but no...he wanted to use this one only which 1 taani had. used ...he was pretty mad for her...meanwhile taani goes to Sharon}
{its about 20 min dat rey had not cm to eat the breakfast so Sharon asked taani to ask rey to cme back}
T- (moves ahead to find him out and call) rey aap kahan ho...
jaldi aao na late ho jayega abhi humare paas bs 1:30 hrs hain...jaldi aaiye(she tries to open the door of the bathroom...but the door ws already open which meant dat he was out)
T- rey aap kahan ho...(she then enters a room where she saw rey shirtless...and once again she was lost in his dreams...she knew the art of swimming in his love...the unconditional love which both shared but nvr spoke about...rey stepped a step forward}
R- taani..main bs aa rha hun??
T- haaan?? kya ... aapne kya kha...m srry maine woh suna nai..
R- main aa rha hun bs ..
T- ok ...
{when rey had stepped forward she was so lost in his love dat she could not understand anything else...she tried to ignore him and move forward but she ws about to fall when her let jst got caught in the towel which was lying down and once again she ws in his perfect arms for one to feel lyk heaven}
{he saw her and she so saw him... once again they were lost in the depth of each others eye... he could overcome himself from the magic which taani had done on him... he loved her to the core and he knew it...but nvr wanted to accept it... he saw her eyes,...they were so beautiful n lovely to look at...so deep for one to drown...his heart always wished to do anything or the else to make her fall in his arms...he knew he was wrong to think this but just as evry1 says./... dat evrything is fyn in love and war...finally they realize that someone is at the door..it was shron...}
{rey saw sharon in disgust as though he wanted her not to come ...bcoz lyk this he could hav enjoyed ...that lovely moment a bit longer with his taani..}
S- (clears her throat ) may i come in...srry to interrupt but i think humein late ho jayega. so rey lets be fast...
(rey smiles.. and blushes ... but saves himself from being seen by taani...)
{finally they have their breakfast and they r here...finally at the college}
SWAYAM- kya yaar rey...maine kitni baar call kiya tha kitni der lga di...
R- yaar woh actually...
SWAYAM- chal chodd...bus aa gyi hai...chal baaki sab baith gye hain...bus hum charon ko hi baithna hai...
{shivam again enters he seen}
SHIVAM- chaar nai paanch...guys remember main bhi hun
guys m ur new ags remember(he was made ags for a short tym...for taani's help)
R- yeah how can i frgt u...('my biggest enemy' he says softly...)
{they enter the bus...and the bus starts,...}



guys i think this is a lot for 2nyte... i will update soon.. hope u hv lyked this creation...the 4rth part...thnxx a lot for ur previous cmmnts...really loved it n silent readers pls at least hit the like button if u really liked it...
love u all
*swasti*









samiha_taarey thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
hey again a very nyc update...waiting 4 the nxt update so plz update soon...
swastikushal thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: samihatabassum

hey again a very nyc update...waiting 4 the nxt update so plz update soon...

thnk u sooo much...for loving and appreciating it thnxx a lot... n surely i will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Lovely luved it . Hope shivam get in a really bad trouble there and taani tells evry1 the truth.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
lovely update.
loved it ke rey finally accept his love for taani.
waitin for revealing shivam's truth...
pls. do cont. soon and do pme me.
swastikushal thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#47
thnxx a lot friends... still waiting for more support from u oll yet i m vry happy dat u r lyking my wrk n i will for sure pm u oll next part 5 will soon be updated :)
love u oll
swasti
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Amazing update!!
Rey blushing 😳
He admits that he is in love!
swastikushal thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#49
thnxx friends... n i will for sure update the next part for sure...
n well thnxx a lot for ur support
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
@swastikushal: Nyc OS!!!!😊

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