Taareyam SS: What will never happen in the show

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Taareyam SS- What will never happen in show.

This SS will contain Taareyam bonding, so please stay away.

"Aa gaye bhai aap?", Taani said smiling sweetly at her bhai, who just came home.
"Oh, hey. Taani. Oh god, meri behen, I am so so so happy to be back", Swayam said, smiling at her, happily stretching his arms.
Taani smiled sweetly. Didn't say a word and just went to the couch engrossed in her file. Swayam looked surprised at her unlikely behavior. She was behaving weird, he felt, at the back of his mind. But maybe it was his excitement, or his happiness, but he didn't give a second thought to it. He sat, stretching himself on the couch besides her, smiling broadly and relaxing.
Taani's phone rang. Taani, looked at the caller name 'PRINCE CHARMING' and mute the tone. Still smiling that smile, she went back to her work. Swayam too, noticed the caller name. He remembered, what Sharon told him about Taani and Prince Charming, and felt amused and also confused.
"Kya hua phone kyun nahi utha rahi?", He asked confused to his sister.
"Huh", with a distracted but still smiling face, Taani replied, "I am busy."
Swayam looked confused at his sis.
"Weird behave kar rahi ho. Everything is okay na, between you and Rey?", Swayam asked confused to her.
Taani continued to smile and just nodded at him.
Now, Swayam felt worried, because he recognized that smile. Taani was very good at keeping her problems to herself, but her eyes were very expressive, and right now they were telling him perfectly, that she was upset, and she was trying to hide her real feelings from getting surfaced by that fake stern smile.
He gave an amused smile to her, "Taani, kya hua?"

Taani took a deep breath. She couldn't do it anymore. Her all the anger, surfaced. She took her files, took a deep breath, and started to go to her room.
Swayam looked at her leaving and immediately knew what happened. It had been three days, since he went to Goa. He should have known that she would be angry. After all, she had every right to be. He went, without telling her, didn't even call her once(Sharon you know. Swayam ki kya galati he), and he couldn't expect her to be normal after that. He knew how sensitive she is.

He hurried towards her, "Taani Taani Taani", he continued reverse walking with her, "Me janata hu, mene bahot badi galati ki he, tumhe bina bataye chala gaya, but Taani..."

Taani had enough. Her anger was unbearable now, and she felt like crying, but she wouldn't. She knew very well how to. She stopped him in between.
She exploded, "Enough bhai"
Swayam stopped, looking guilty with shock at her.
"Bas, bahot ho gaya. Aapko esa abhi koi philosophical talk kar ke esa kuch prove karane ki jarurat nahi ki you are right. Ki aap mere bare me care karate ho, ki aapko meri sentiments ki parwah he. Isase beheter hoga ki aap bas, apne room me jake, Sharon ko ya Rey ko call kijiye unse bat kijiye. Aap bahot ache bhai ho, aur apni behen ke bare me bahot care karate ho, ye to Universal Fact he na. Sab jagah famous ho is bat ke liye, to please, aapki is stupid si apology ki muje koi jarurat nahi", She said all this angrily, and in angry tears, went away from her brother.
Swayam stood there. Guilt finally taking over him. He hurt her damn.He went behind her, to her room, where she was trying to clean the already clean room.

Swayam tried again, "Taani, I am sorry yar. Wo kya hua na..."
"For god's sake, can you just leave me alone bhai? Please, itana karoge na to bahot acha rahega.", Taani said again angrily. Then she took a deep breath, tried to ignore the sorrow she was feeling, because she was not used to talking this way to her brother. "Bhai, please, muje aap se bat karane me ya aapka explanation sunane me koi interest nahi. Aur me abhi kisise bat nahi karana chahti. To please, aap yaha se jayiye. Muje akela chhod dijiye"
Swayam looked feeling bad at her, "Par Taani..."
She ignored him. Knowing that his stubborn sister could not be convinced now, he leaved from there, closing the door behind him.
Taani sighed heavily, and sat on the bed. She won't forgive him. Him and Him. No.
Her phone rang again. "PRINCE CHARMING". She looked in disgust at the name, and in disgust, she switched off the phone and tried to sleep ignoring the "HOW CAN HE..." thoughts.

Precap: Taani shuts the window.

Guys, ye chapter actually mene Tuesday ko likha tha, bahot frustration me, par net connection nahi ho raha tha, so, couldn't post it. And its a little different style then I write. I know, dipu ne aur bahot logo ne iss hi track pe likha he and I am reading every story, and will definitely keep it different. And I am sorry if it hurts someone's sentiments, I really don't mean to do that. You know na, siblings ke bich me fights to hogi hi. But all will end well. I am absolutely ready for criticisms and suggestions always.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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INDEX

Chapter 1: Check out the previous post
Chapter 2:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/75738740


Chapter 3:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/75750465

Edited by ShivTRSS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome dear.
taani ko angry hona chahiye sub pe..
i too thought the same.
ab dekhana hai ke reyam and gang taani ko kaise manate hai..
thanks for the pm
and pls. jaldi se update karna.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice ss n lyk ur concept n title name What will never happen in show n in precap taani shuts the window😕 ohhh bomb blast😆 eagerly waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love it...kash this happens in the show as well... =)
please PM kar dena whenever u update...eagerly waiting :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow amazing
yah many people are writing story on this track
buy it makes all taarey fans happy because we know something like
that is not gonna happen in serial
and your story is different happy to read that taani is angry on swayam
and swayam deserve that

brilliant job👏 update soon

Edited by Tahira-2013 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey aashna i absolutly lyk whr ur stry is headin...bt d only complain i hve is y such a shrt part...reqst hai plz jaldi update karo...n thnx 4 d pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

love it...kash this happens in the show as well... =)

please PM kar dena whenever u update...eagerly waiting :)



Yeah. Sure I will PM you. Please accept my buddy request so that its easy for me to do that😊

And thank you all for appreciation everyone jinhone like and or comment kiya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Update it yaar! its so nice!👏 Swayam and Rey deserve it. How could they go away without telling Taani? This thing frustrates me as well, so I am with you!😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aashna u so right they will never show this in D3, they will never show how hurt and upset Taani is after everything. Anyway I love the concept, u did an amazing job. Taani is so correct to not listen to some lame excuse Swayam is going to tell her. He so deserve whatever Taani told me and more and as for the prince charming hmmm hope Taani don't go easy on him either. Plz continue soon Aashna recap is superb so good that Taani close the window lol.

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