TaaRey & Shivam SS- The Truth Hurts *DISCONTINUED*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sneak Peak:

(Starts after Shivam's truth is revealed.)
Shivam: so I'm leaving now
Shivam turns around and see someone and gets shocked.

???:HOW COULD YOU SHIVAM?
Shivam: Please I wasn't thinking

Rey-I hate to say this, but we have to help him
Taani-it would be the right thing.
Rey-why do you have to be so nice?
Taani-one of us has to be *smiles*

Swayam: Sharon I know you're not okay with this but for'
Sharon: I don't care who it's for

Shivam: thanks guys for your help, but I don't think it'll help.
Taani: Come on Shivam have some faith in us. You haven't seen us at work yet.

Rey: why don't you just go hang out with Shivam?
Taani-Rey?
Rey: JUST GO!

Rey: I love you Taani!
Taani: I love you too Rey!

This is my new SS. What do you guys think? It is mostly going to be Shivam and OC, but there will be quite a bit of TaaRey and a little SwaRon.

PART 1 POSTED. SCROLL DOWN!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This seems interesting!! update soon n please pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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seems exciting...update soon and please PM me =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Character Sketch- page 1 BELOW
Part 1- page 1 (BELOW)

CHARACTERS:

Rey, Taani, Swayam, Sharon, Vicky, Rinni, Simmi, Neha, Amar, Bharat and Shivam are all the same. Except in this Shivam is actually really nice, he just became mean because he wanted revenge.

Myra Singhania- Rey's sister. Loves to dance. Grew up in Mumbai with Rey. Hasn't been going St. Louis. Moves around colleges a lot. Finally decided to come to St. Louis. Went to King's College for a year before moving again. Shivam's girlfriend of two years. Didn't know that Shivam was here this whole time.

Part 1

Shivam- okay so I'm just going to leave now.
The gang watched him turn around and freeze. They all looked to where he was looking and Rey exclaimed.
Rey- Myra tum yahan!
But Myra couldn't say anything, she had tears down her face. After hearing everything that Shivam had done behind her back.
Shivam- Myra!
Myra- shut up! Stay away from me Shivam. I never want to talk to you again!
Rey-wait you guys know each other!
Myra-not anymore!
Myra ran away in tears. Shivam went after her, and so did Rey. The gang followed Rey confused. Myra ran away, but Shivam was too fast for her. He caught her hand, but she just pushed him away.
Myra-don't touch me!
Shivam-just listen, please!
Myra-I don't want to listen! How could you do this?
Shivam- Please just let me explain!
Myra-HOW COULD YOU SHIVAM! LEAVE ME ALONE!
She pushed him away and ran straight into Rey's chest.
Rey-shh, stop crying! How do you know Shivam?
Myra-wo mera ex-boyfriend hai
Shivam/Rey-WHAT?
Shivam-Myra please don't do this!
Rey-stay away from her Shivam
Myra-bhai, I want to go home
Shivam-ek minute. Rey tumara bhai hoon?
Rey-haan, and as her brother I'm telling you to stay away from her
Shivam- Rey let me just explain to her
Swayam-I think he said to leave her alone
Shivam-I need once chance please Myra
Rey-what? You wanna explain why you were dating the girl I love behind my sister's back
Myra&TaaYam-WHAT?
Rey realized what he said and became red. Taani was shocked, but super happy. Swayam was shocked and didn't know how to react. Myra was hurt, shocked, happy that her brother had moved on past Kria, but mostly hurt.
Taani-you love me?
Rey-uhh Taani.
Taani-answer the question Rey
Rey-yes I do. I'm sorry I rejected you, but I was confused and I didn't know what to do. But seeing you with Shivam, it killed me inside.
Taani-I love you too Rey
Rey hugged her tight and she did the same back to him. They were interrupted by a cough.
Rey-wo Swayam….
Swayam-it's okay, just don't tell your best friend that you love his sister. That's fine.
Rey-Swayam
Swayam-just be happy that I'm glad for the both of you
Taani-thank you bhai
Myra-well I'm glad you guys are happy. Rey you really deserve happiness. And from what's you've told me about Taani she is the perfect catch.
Taani-you talk about me to your sister
Rey-uh…
Myra-more like he never stops talking about you. It's sweet, but sometimes I just want to sleep
TaaYam start laughing and Rey blushes.
Rey-shut up Myra!
Myra-well I'm going to be going now.
Shivam-par Myra
Myra-stay away from me Shivam. I don't ever want to see your face ever again.
Shivam-please Myra let me just explain.
Rey-she told you to stay away from her
Shivam-would you shut up, I'm trying to talk to my girlfriend
Rey cringed. He could not believe that his lovely, sweet, angel of a sister was dating Cheevam.
Rey-how can my lovely, sweet, angel of a sister date you?
Shivam-because she is my lovely sweet, angel and no matter what she says she loves me.
Myra-I did, but I don't know what to say to you right now. 2 years we've been together.
Rey-TWO YEARS????
Myra-haan
Rey-par tum Sharon ki saath
Myra-KYA?
Shivam-NEHI!
Myra-2 girls, in that time on two years. You were with two other girls! Unbelievable.
Shivam-I was never with Taani, we were just pretending!
ReYam + Gang- WHAT?
Taani looked down.
Shivam-yes. We were never together, she was just saying it to protect Rey. And I went along with it so that I could get revenge on you guys. But as soon as I realized that Taani loved Rey, I was going to leave. And Sharon, we never actually went out. We just hung out. I was never serious about either of them.
Myra-ek minute. You used Taani to get revenge on my brother and his friends.
Shivam-but Myra
Myra-Shivam! You are not what I thought you were! All of this behind my back. I don't even know who to cry to. All this time I was head over heels in love with you. But now, I don't even know what to say. I feel like my heart has been ripped out and torn to shreds. And that is all in one day!
Myra ran out crying. Shivam made to follow her, but Rey stopped him.
Rey-stay away from her. I swear Shivam if you thought what Swayam did to you was bad, you haven't seen what I can do yet.
Shivam-But Rey, I really do love your sister
Rey-ya, going behind her back for a year with 2 girls
Shivam-I wasn't serious about either of them. I just used them as revenge.
Swayam-dude you are so not helping yourself right now!
Shivam-listen guys, I didn't know Myra was Rey's sister. If I did I would have never done any of this. I didn't know she was coming here. I love Myra, more than anything. She's the only reason I agreed to leave. Because I knew that the exact same feelings that Rey and Taani have for each other, Myra and I have. When I am with Myra I am a completely different guy. I buy her gifts, I take her out. I love her, I really do.
The gang just watched in shock. Could Shivam really be this nice? Did he really love her? Shivam just sighed and walked away. He knew he had to get Myra back, but now he just had to figure out how.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice diii...plZzz...continue n update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awwwe that was so cute
plzzz continue soon!
i m eagerly waiting
very cute concept!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh wow i loved it rey has a sister who is shivam's gf
this is going to be fun
do update soon n if possible pm me
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow its intresting pls update soon😊 nd pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey awesum update...keep updating and please PM me =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THIS STORY HAS BEEN DISCONTINUED. SORRY TO ALL THE FANS OUT THERE.
I DON'T HAVE MUCH TIME ANYMORE SO I HAVE TO GET RID OF 2 OF MY 5 STORIES AND I CHOSE THIS AND 1 OTHER.

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