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cool_zephyr

@cool_zephyr

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Loved the update
I can never have enough of this FF as it always brings a smile on my face
So this update is about how shyam turns evil.
Didnt expect khushi joining social networking site just for Arnav as if being in contact with him but not through phone as arnav expected, smart khushi 😛
Cant wait for the next update and thanks for the PM

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Nishi

@Ni_singh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

nice update...loved it

thanks for the pm

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shivani_bv

@shivani_bv

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Wow. Shyam is becoming too obsessed with Khushi and I don't like it😡.

I am glad Arnav and Khushi are now in regular touch but they have miles to go before they form a strong bond. They do realize their own feelings to some extent but have to give time to each other to understand other's feelings. I hope they do meet soon outside the virtual world too.

Don't want the villain to spoil their time anytime soon.

Waiting for your next update. I am hooked to your story.

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anabiya1

@anabiya1

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

nyc update

bt ye shyam :@

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

The seeds 0f l0ve, the seeds 0f hate, the seeds 0f g00d and the seeds 0f evil has been s0wn

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Snehal

@madhumi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

👏

what an phenomenal update chaitu...seriously..m blown off..😃

each n every character in this story has a significant mark in here...n more so because now the individuality n their sole purpose to be a part of story is so graciously taken care of..👏

Shyam...girl...i simply felt n imagined all the turmoil he went thru...n prick at his heart..the effect on his teen soul..no doubt ppl say d imprints during such phase last for life time...like u said 'seeds of iniquity were sown into him'' 👏..i simply adored the way u put thru his agitation n suffrin..no doubt this is gona raise an evil in him...poor guy...i simply hav nothing to say more..u really hav left me tongue tied this time..😆..

n about arshi..m glad tht both r in touch n conversing..taking things slow n not rushing them...this phase is atully gona lay a firm foundation for their future relationship...😃😃

P.S : il simply make sure grabbing an oxford dictionary to spare my lil brain of the efforts to absorb d meanings of sme tad HEAVY words u put in here..gal...thts simply piling on my vocabulory..🤣

Cheers...!!!!!!!! <3

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

hmm looks like everyones relation is proceeding in certain way...

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

Another huge step..this update
Tension same time happy because its Khushi and Arnav.
Arnav really don't have clue about her feelings but Khushi had .Khushi didn't call him but now they are connected.Arnav knew Khushi is more than attraction and she is special where Khushi realized he is her love ☺️and special and very special...❤️
Shyam 😕 😔 he is psychic .. seems he is not in same collage as Arnav because its confirmed he related to him only by his Dad's profession only..
What is shyam then? a lawyer?
What is that message made him maniac? panic?
Khushi changed her status?

A Priya and Aman where are you guys... you have to post some photo of reunion ? we are looking forward for that..
Superb update.Thanks for pm

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

While surfing the foram aimlessly found this amazing FF and felt like just hit the jackpot. It is so wonderfully written that I am amazed as I consider myself to be too old to be reading a teenage romance. But the way you have handled the whole story up till now with so much maturity that it left me speechless. I am so impressed with this FF.
The whole story took me back to my own schooldays and brought back so many good, bad and some embarrassing memories. I laughed so much while reading it that my family thought I have finally lost it. I had the silly grin plastered on face all day.
I can now see that Shyam manohar Jha is going to show his true colours very soon, and it's making me bit apprehensive as the story was progressing so positively with out an actual vilen but what ever happens will be really looking forward to reading rest of the story. May be Arnavs trust issues needs to be addressed and that's how it will come to surface with Shyam and Khushi scenario. Enough of me taking gusses, I will advice myself to have patience and wait for the rest of the events in the story to unfold.
I have sent a buddy request to you I hope you will accept me that way I will be able to follow your new FF as well. I will also go and check your index out and comment there as well.