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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#941

Found this FF and read all of it in one go and to say I loved it will be an understatement, it's just out of with world, the words I would like to use for your work are amazingly wonderful, brilliant beautifully emotional, scenes created in such way that it's almost visual, great insight into relationships, lovely characters, great story telling.
Thank you for writing such wonderful FFs. It's a great pleasure to read everything you have written so far. Please do carry on writing.

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#942

hmm...love their together on the mission...and khushi is very strong...good for arnav...

suraj seems to have changed...but lavanya is kinda worried...i feel sorry for her...all this while she needed his attention and wanted him to forget khushi...but when he does that she is totally confused...hope all goes well as per their plan...loved the update..

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shr3291

@shr3291

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#943

👍🏼

The revelations have indeed caused a shift in the dynamics,attitude...very nicely portrayed...

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foesb

@foesb

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#944

When Avni glared at Arnav for his suggestion of resting only thing that came to my mind was she is following her uncle, trying to glare and get her way when it's against her wish, sweet! Arnav and Khushi's scenes were written so beautifully, right from their intimacy to the point where Arnav understood Khushi's hunger,everything was flawless. Khushi is planning on including Lavanaya too seems like she has something big cooking in her head. Eager to see how everything will unravel in future. Great update!

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rajvta

@rajvta

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#945

A great thing that I like about this story is how you have shown the growth in Khushi - from the first update to this one. She has truly matured into a worthy and equal partner to her husband.

And the level of communiction between them - wow. He brings her food just by reading her body language and expressions.

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simran

@crazymg.04

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#946

the update was superb...very sagacious of you ...how do you plan all this ...hats off to u.

Arnav -Khushi shower scene was😳😳...loved it.

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#947

Table pe naa sahi, shower toh hai naa... its quite literally steamy! :D :D Grapefruit body wash.. next time I see it at the supermarket, this is the first thing that will come to my head :P

Enjoyed the conversation between Lavanya & Khushi, they said more in what they didn't say. I loved Khushi's sarcastic comeback. Love does bring out the best in you... Khushi is in full form these days, and I think it has a lot to do with the fact that she is emotionally secure and at peace.

Lavanya is also in this game now - whether she is a player or a pawn I will wait to find out.

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#948

u rock the update as usual! it was simply mind blowing and very explicit in everything! loved the way u included a bit of everyone in this update!

loving arnav, he is a total cutie pie! n their chemistry is just out of this world. am sure even after 10 years of marriage, the intensity of their love making and feelings will remain the same if not increase!

lavanya sounds like a kind heated person and she deserves the best! wondering if souraj will ever realise her worth and give her, her share of happiness and love!

looks like the stalker souraj has been reconsidering his relationship to KBV and khushi and thank god he has finally admitted that khushi is someone's else wife and could never be his! im sure this is the impact of knowing that khushi is the closet thing he may have as a sister, after all she is cousin, they share the same bloodline!

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#949

hey Kalyaani,

was reading the update again, and kinda wondering, is there a reason for Arnav being so different in their intimate scene today... this is the first time that he himself gave her a tee to wear, where as earlier he wanted her to sleep like that...

is this some kinda game he will play to lure sheetal in the trap...hope not, though...