Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#791

Good going , suitably dealt with ...ASR style .😊

Thank you .

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

wow khushi n Payal are really bold characters :D ...Khushi not believing in the rasams was a shocker but im loving it :D

Payash problem solved in a blink on an eye ASR istyle :D

Edited by luvbug - 12 years ago

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#793

Really really nice update.

OMG this daiyaa ho cracks me up every time.

Finally payaash are getting married with all the rasams and I guess now it's Arnav and Khushis turn.

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mssj

@mssj

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#794

Nice update. I loved the way he handled things in the end. And khushi is soo bold

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#795

ohhh he is good aint he
but lets not forget he was manipulated into being ASR here
all by a certain mrs jha
man she is even better
how she manages to make people do what they want to and yet they dont suspect anything of it i shall never know
but she does not only did she get rid of payal suitor for payash to get married but she has got them their SR too all thanx to her chotte
who by the way was in the middle of a very intense interview with the lovely KKG
dammit they interrupted just when she was gonna take their interview and flirting to the next level
but no they had to be interrupted there is see such shame
but oh well some sacrifices have to be made for the time being and its not like arhi are going anywhere right
after this wedding is over arhi can get back to what ever they were doing
waise arnie was right they are adults they have married so no one can stop them from being with each other
i know payal i feel for you girl but kya karen ab bahut late ho chuki hai
you should have done what your sister is doing with arnie test the waters of this relationship before eloping like this
so payash get there SR and arhi get the chance to get back to their interview which is very crucial to them
ahhh so lets wait for what the next one brings us
and sorry nani you are stuck with crazy people as your relatives unfortunately sometimes yuo just cant choose who your family are might as well handle this hai re nanadkishore lady from now
and let ahi get back to their thing

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#796

What the ... You made all to go to farmhouse, there you have pandit also, there you will have phere also, there you have cozy beds also, Harry potter ji you have to do IT, it is now or nevvaa. Bechari Payal so despo for SR.

What happens to the job kushi? Anjali do something, what are you doing? Nani, what you wanted to tell? By the way sheetal thanks for handing the phone, now get the HELL out of this collab. let them DO IT RIGHT.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#797

now thats the way it done put the asr to take the fire loved how he bark out his orders awesome update beautifully done

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#798

What i like most about your writing is the effortless way in which you close loops or complete what is incomplete.

You did absolute justice to Arnav Khushi flirting.

You showed Anjali reconsidering her objections towards the marriage and you also made her manipulate to get others to agree to it.

You didn't show Nani throwing a tantrum either

Who could, except for Arnav, put his foot down and make everybody see the futility of going on about rasams when even a court marriage is enough to give legality. But i liked it that he made arrangements for a simple traditional ceremony for everybody's liking. Another loop closed :)

PS- Their kiss got interrupted and even that by Sheetal?? Grr. The next author better make up for it...