Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144

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dvdv

@dvdv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

dont put down your work.. It was as good if not better. Love the idea of falling in the pool and in towels after with guts tightening and dont know what else... waiting for the next update...😊😃👏

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Mariam

@--Amy--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Nice update!

Khushi actually pushed him in the pool..lol I thought she was just saying..then they were sitting across and giggling..I can so imagine them like that..

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sahada

@sahada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Ch 13 - Awweee you did much much better thn jus winging it ;) You progressed the story more thn fairly n impressively n skillfully (= It was a very pleasant read!! Thank You for giving us beautiful update :*

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samarablog

@samarablog

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Whoa! Pool and giggling!
I like!

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annieK

@annieK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Very nicely done and fun too .

Thnx for the pm.

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Shifa Khan

@chulbuli94

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

part 13 & 14~~~~~~really awesome~~~~so entertaining😆

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

just luvd it v u wrote an awesome edition to dis ff

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Awesome update

Anjali's plan is reaping results

Thx for the PM

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Areee! It was such a cute chapter. You should definitely take part in collaborations. Wonderfully written!

Buaji's plait was the highlight for me! Lol! ;-)

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Hahahaha, thank goodness anjali used her brain. the interaction between arnav and khushi was mug needed. besides I loved the giggling. also payals incomplete curses were hilarious

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