The Onstage Lovers (Arsha os) - Page 3

superb os

all moments r soo beautifully n sweet.
loved arsha's bond n trust on each other

dance sequence was just awesome
last scene r fab... mast tha.

im speechless arsha r magical alwys luv them.
loved it n really want this turns into real

Awesome os
This is one of the best arsha os I have ever read

awesome
loved it
it does not look like its ur firsst os
it was magical
the way u described krs dance
there feelings
feeling bad for charlie but
still onlye people who love each other should b togethr
loved the whole
itactually made me a bit emotional
u potrayed it very very well
applause for u
i did not realise when there dance finishd and when the os finidhd
u should write more often
i no its an os but plaese do contniue with it

Originally posted by: jas112

awesome
loved it
it does not look like its ur firsst os
it was magical
the way u described krs dance
there feelings
feeling bad for charlie but
still onlye people who love each other should b togethr
loved the whole
itactually made me a bit emotional
u potrayed it very very well
applause for u
i did not realise when there dance finishd and when the os finidhd
u should write more often
i no its an os but plaese do contniue with it

amazing os...

i wish ki ye ho jaye real mein...

Reserved for now..Will unress soon..Was this the one that Aditi gave me a slight clue..
Amazing Update dear
Its superb one..
The start was beautifull
I just loved each and every moment.
The insights of Charlie to All.
The blind flod dance was awesome..
I just feel only Arsha can do justice to this..
The way he felt her here..
The way Terrance told about Shaks and Arsha to each other is just so awesome...
And the realization of feelings by them aww I was just perfect..

thanks for the pm..

And yup yes I was grinning while reading this...

Amazing...arsha arsha arsha!!!
charlie plz aise kuch karona...hum arsha fans tumhe devtha mannenge 😉
Beautifuly written.."

OMG !!!!

srry for late comment...

but for os i m nt getting wrds how grt it was...

jst suprbbb...

u made me speechless aftr this os...

loved d chemistry...

they r adorable nd truely said made 4 each other...//

jst loved it...

it was a fantastic os...

u wrote it very well...

u really did a suprbb job...

loved it dear...

nd truely said ONSTAGE LOVERS...

thanxxx 4 pm