Taarey ff-tera mujhse hai pehle ka naata koi.. - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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superbbb start dear...
liking ur story
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc start dear...thnx 4 d pm...waitin 4 d update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
amazing update dear! loved it dear! waiting for taani and rey's meet!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Kya concept tha yar..its vry intrstng...nice start..next part b jaldi updte karna
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey, dnt say sorry I no hw much stress it is to shift hme, hav gone through this process 😊 . Cumin to ur FF u started awesomely, cnt wait 2 read nxt chapater, hopefully tani will meet Rey for 1st time. Update nxt part wen u or Tahira can...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! Bags amazing! It seriously WASN'T boring!! Taani-Rey meet coming near!! Waiting for next update and yeah! Sorry for this late comment!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi evryone as you all know maine and bags ne milke yeh story start ki thi but bags is actually now busy so she wont be able to update so maine and bags ne yeh decide kiya hai ke next chapter main write karonghi so here is the next chapter and yah thanks evryone for the appreciation
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recape

Next morning the girl is browsing net when she comes across the news..which says..

Choreographer reyaansh singhania is in search of new assistant ..his old assistant... ' 'And she reads the whole news(she is unable to contain her excitement)..and searches the date n venue for auditions..and starts jumping n dancing' saying..yes yes yes..at last mai aap se milungi!!!!
That girl is none other than our beautiful princess taani..
Taani(has his pic in her hand):mai itni achi dancer to nhi fir bhi mai auditions dungi sirf aur sirf aap k liye..ap se milne k liye ..chaiye jo bhi hojaye..
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chapter 2
taani- wow mere prince charming main arrahi hoon mere 2 years ka wait ab
khatam hoga pata nahi achi dancer hoon to nahi lekin aap ko milna hai
jahe dance kaisa bhi kyon na ho ( in happy tone)
suddenly her mom calls her
taani's mom - taani kahan ho niche ao jaldi breakfast nahi karna kiya
taani - maa im comming
then taani comes running to her mom
taani - ma im so happy today
taani's mom - acha kyon beta koi milgaya kiya
taani - mila toh nahi lekin jaldi miljaegha
raani's mom - really kaun
taani - mom aap kitana questions poochthi ho its a surprise kal tak ka wait karo
rigth now im hungry mujhe khaana do
taani's mom - oke beta kal tak wait karlenghe abhi yeh aloo ke parathe kha lo
taani - wow aloo ke parathe its my favorite thank you aap ko pata hai US mein
main aap ke haat ka khaana kitana yaad karti thi
taani's father came there
taani's father - taani beta aloo ke parathe yaad karti thi ma ko yad karthi thi and
mujhe
taani - papa plzzz you know how much i missed you (and tani hugs her father)
taani's father - i know beta even i missed you jalo ab khana ka lo
after eating the breakfast
taani - i have to go now
taani's parents - kahan beta
taani - kahi nahi bas socha itana year ke baad waapas aai hoon na isi liye socha
ke apne old friends ke saath aaj hangout karoon and mumbai bhi ghumna
ho jayegha
taani's parents - oke beta aghar man hai toh jao lekin ghar jaldi aa jana
taani - oke bye
and taani leaves from there
taani's parents are in living-room
taani's mom - aaj main bohat khush hoon taani wapas agayi hai
taani's - father haan main bhi aur taani itana khush hai mujhe toh laga
tha ke us khadse ke baad taani khabi smile nahi kareinghi
lekin humari beti ne khud ko sambhaal liya
taani's mom - plzzz ab aap uske khadse ke bhare mein mat socho
is sirf taani ko nahi hume bhi takleef ( in crying tone )
taani's father - theek hai bas ab rona mat shuru karo mujhe bhi rona aayegha
taani's mom - shukar hai taani ghar mein nahi hai warna aap ka kitana mazaak
udhati 😆
and taan's mom go to the kitchen
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reyaansh in his room
maid - reyaansh sir yeh lijiye milk
reyaansh - kitana bhaar kaha hai mujhe milk nahi pasand lekin tum bhaar bhaar
milk le aati ho
maid - lekin aghar aap ki friends ko pata chala toh woh mujhese naraaz hogi
reyaansh - i dont care
suddenly he heard a voice of a girl
girl - kisi meri care nahi hai
reyaansh - sharon tum
sharon - haan main
reyaansh - tum kab aayi ( he is going to hug sharon but sharon stops him)
sharon - mujhe hug mat karo tum mere hug ke layek nahi ho ( angry tone)
reyaansh - kyon maine kya kiya ( confused)
sharon - what do mean tumne with kya kiya tum milke drink karne se mana
kyon kar rahe the
reyaansh - tume pata hai na mujhe milk pasand nahi
sharon - so what mujhe pasand hai toh tume milk drink karna hoga aur
waise bhi docter ne kaha tha ke tum din bhar din weak hote jaa rahe ho
jab dekho dance dance khabi rest bhi kar liya karo
reyaansh - come on sharon tum meri friend ho maa nahi aur waise bhi mujhe sirf
thode se chakker aaye the agar itana ghusa dikhana hai na to
apne pati dev ko dikhao
sharon - shut-up rey and drink the milk and swayam ko beech mein mat lana
woh mera pati zaroor hai lekin mere liye koi devta nahi
reyaansh - yah right sorry i forget woh devta kaise ho sakta hai jaansi ki rani
joh uski biwi
sharon - shup-up and drink the milk
reyaansh - oke oke mere paas aur koi joice hai kiya
sharon - no
and both start laughing
sharon - waise rey tumne assistent ke bhare mein kuch socha dekhi mujhe
3 days mein thumare liye ek assistent chahiye
reyaansh - haan meri maa maine news and internet par advertisement
diya hai tumne jaise kaha maine waise kiya
sharon - oke fine acha hai kyonki agar dance assistent hogi toh tume
saara kaam sirf akele nahi karoghe aur waise bhi tum
india ke one of the most rich eligible bachelor ho toh tumare
assistent ki line lag jaeyghi acha hai joh bohat pehle hona chahiya tha
woh ab hoga tum kisi ko toh apna assistent benaoghe
reyaansh - oke fine meri fikar karna ab chor bhi do and wait main clothes change
kar ke aata hoon
sharon - oke ab jaldi jao and jaldi wapas aana
reyaansh - oke madam
and reyaansh leaves from there
sharon to her self - kaise thumare fikar karna chor doon jab ke main jaanthi hoon
ke thumare andar kitana dard hai sab ke saamne toh khush
rehto hai lekin akele main tume toh raat ko theek se neend bhi
nahi aati hogi agar thumare koi is duniya mein hai toh sirf main
hi toh hoon mera best friends kab rey se reyaansh bangaya
mujhe pata nahi chala i wish ke koi ho is duniya mein joh
tume thumare is dard se azaad karsake
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precape = taarey meeting
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hey guys kaisa laga i know bohat long tha lekin mujhe
yeh bhi toh betana tha ke akhir taarey ki zindagi mein chal kiya raha hai
and yah i dont know bags phir kab online aayeghi so wait karna agar zaida
days lage toh main khud chapter 3 write kardoonghi
and yaeh bags ke liye pray karna ke jis kaam mein woh busy hai woh kaam ache se hojaye
and do comment hume jaana hai ke kaisa tha




Edited by Tahira-2013 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Good cocept
do update the next part soon and add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Hey Tahira, awosome update, wat happened wiv tani nd wat is it dat Rey is still in painful nd hurt. Hav I miss sumthin or u goin to disclose later, i confused myself. It mst b sumthin to do wiv kriya. Hope watever bags is busy wiv, she will do vry well nd hopefully she is able 2 shift 2 new house wivout any difficulties. Will luk forward to nxt update. Tc both of u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
jaldi next update karna...gr8 update dear...
thanks 4 d pm...
pm me 4 d next to...

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