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So, Shailja, Firstly, I really know the origin of this wonderful KriYansh version story of "The Shady Plot". It is a Chapter in my English textbook called the same, written by "Elsie Brown", ain't it? :p But, in any case, I can see a few twists here and there like the beginning... You have a nuanced approach to it, but the flaash back remains the same! :/ I was reallly hoping if you could change Lavinia aka Kria's character a bit. It would be fun to read it that way! And, try to get in the kids in the story as well please, it's a humble request! And now coming to the update, so basically I have read this chapter, so I skipped most of it, and I also know it is an *Ouija Board* that Kria has brought in, and I was really hoping you could change the story from here! :D Well, lovely attempt, What could be better than reading an Engliash chapter on our very on KriYaansh? Heheh.. :D Continue Soon, and Do PPM me! :)
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