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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

lovely bit of writing

just one thought though cant think of anjali-arnav as anything but siblings

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SARA

@saara76

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Hahahaha ASR and makeover ????

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allegro

@allegro

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Awesome update.

Loved the different concept.

Continue soon.

Thanks for the PM. 😃

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

ohhh myyy gosshhh...

such a dark character..anyways you wrote very well..liked it a lot and waiting for next 😊

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awroneema

@awroneema

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

now wat was dat!!! 🤢

i was gssing her as khushi...!! nd cursing these both...kamina no. 1...😡😡...

but u gave me the jhatka of the millennium...Anjili!!!!!!!!!😲😲😲

i m off to ICU just after reading her name...!! now dats really a new anji!! in the whole ff world i gss!!...it was such a shock fo me to digest the whole thing now...as whn evr i heard arnav and anjili these two together--the frst thng cum to my mind is the beautiful sibling jodi...ofcrz barun nd daljit...mai toh hill gaye pura ka pura...i was having my lunch while reading...nd started chocking...

ermmm...i knw gonna tough fo me...but have to accpt thm not as sibling!! dat to in a dark way...so for my ease i m defo not gona imagine dalgit here at any cost...may be i will imagine suhasisini...i mean ANJILI gupta from dill mill gayye...wud be easier for me...

i m taking my words bk..abt.mirage...just the plot nd mission is kinda same...but ur characters seems the worst shade of dark...unlike mirage...though dat arnav was a gangstar but good at heart...nd ofcrs he wsnt a womanizer...unlike urs...nd innocent orphn khushi...i luv dat arnav and khushi...but here i will luv to hate ur arnav..no doubts on dat 😆😆😆😈 now i m scared ...wat surprize/ shock u gona give us on khushi...

but u r really a versatile writer...👍🏼
continue it wanna know more abt this dark knights nd nights...😉😉

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Anjali now this is a turning point

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Nostalgic_count

@Nostalgic_count

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

DARK yep serious dark man
love it and true it totally different
vanhi di love :)
Waiting for khushi entry

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aeyshaalim

@aeyshaalim

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Wow interesting
Anjali huh !

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simran

@Laters_Baby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

intrstng cncpt
i xcpectd it to be anji wn she said shyam
o gud new char of anji
wl lv to read mr
nk dude dat miracle iz khushi wh wl chnge hm
nd happy dat khushi iz rich here
thnx 4 pn

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arshi_snia

@arshi_snia

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

nice update. its really very different from your other stories.

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