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Roshni

@rashika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

This is an amazing start. I love the prologue. Looking forward to the story.

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Will wait for thr chapters :)

Loved the prologue .. Didnt give away anything about the story but established the concept nicely :)

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I didnt notice chapter 1 is up already! Very intriguing! Have no idea what is happening till now. Great start, Preet! :)

Edited by Omoraboti - 12 years ago

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Pavin

@..Sugar_ArHi..

Inactive

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Res

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sorry for late reply
but its confusing 😕
in prologue u said one of them lose their memory
but who is it?
Is khushi?
Im just guessing 😉
and that three children is payal's children or one of it is her's?
Oh my God 😲
i have a lot of question to ask 😆
its okey.. Answer it in ur pretty sweet time 😃
by the way.. Its a nice update 👏
waiting for next 😛

Edited by ..Sugar_ArHi.. - 12 years ago