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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

What an amazing story you have written. I just found it & read the whole thing in one go. The emotions you have expressed through your words were mind blowing.

Can not wait for the next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: musicfan5

Awesome and emotional update thanks for the PM...

U have penned Arnav's thoughts, feelings, emotions beautifully...
Thank u Arnav for making that promise to Khushi...She truely needs ur support...
Sneha is such a good friend...
Some of khushi's past is revealed...Feel so bad for her...what a horrid childhood she must have had...
Glad that Arnav's knows abt some of khushi's past...he understands her at some level...Hope Arnav helps her get closure...
Waiting for the next chapter...Plz update soon...



Thank you so much dear. I am glad you liked it. :) I will try and update ASAP! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: ukuk4

Emotional. Finally Arnav knows about her painful past. Hopefully he will heal her and provide her with comfort.



Hopefully, yes! :)
Thanks! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: ASR6262

Congratulation on new thread
Awesome update continue soon please
and thank u for pm me



Thank you so much dear! :)) I will update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: _disha_

Very good update indeed !!!


A lot of things come our in front of Arnav and he will see Khushi in a new light!
It was very thoughtful of Arnav to realise that khushi needs closure to resume having a normal life leaving behind her past.

Looking forward to the next update eagerly!



Thank you Disha! It means a lot to me. :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: ak_maggi

u know in d story i think i relate myself to Sneha d most... coz i ve been in similar situations... sometimes u know instinctively wats right n who s right for ur closed ones but u just cant tel it at tht point coz tht wudnt be rt! Sneha trusts Khushi wid Arnav... his genuinity for Khushi n their care n concern for Khushi binds them... They automatically trust each other coz of tht...N arnav stands upto Sneha s trust... He can feel d pain for Khushi wid utmost sincerity n love...when tht happens u just feel like u cud do somethin..just anything to make ur loved ones loose tht pain somehow..i feel tht eagerness in him... a resolve to stand by his promise at any cost.. though may be Khushi wudnt even remember it.. may be...but he does!!! he doesnt know y n wat is pushin him to do al of it... but he knows oly one thing.. he has to fulfill this promise!

i loved d way u ve written both these characters... His feelings borderin on concern attraction pain...superbly written👍🏼 N Sneha too...(also coz i identify too much wid her😛)

I trust u tremendously as a writer... u handle al charcters wid utmost love n cautiousness... there s a respect each one commands... even Shrey is justified in a way... He has his reasons of insecurity to be so wid her...n ofcourse ur intricate style of writing... detailed without loosing d grip of d story... wel these r some of d things which make me love u... he he...

Thanks again...🤗



I cant thank you enough for this Maggi, I hope you know that. This is by far the best that reader has done for me. Thank you so much! :)

You got it absolutely right about Sneha's and Arnav's relationship. What binds them together is Khushi and they automatically become each other's friends because of that.

And about Arnav, *sigh* Oh how I love him! 😳

You I never really think that much about the characters, as you put it, It just flows and fortunately for me, it fits too. :D

There are so many things that make me love you as well, let's forget the enlisting. 😃

Love you re! :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: laksh65

great chapter, loved the bonding developing between sneha and arnav both have only one thing in common, they cant let anything bad happen to khushi and will be always there for her.

waiting for khushi's past in shimla to unfold.



Ekdum correct! :)
Thank you! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: bluetaj

So Arnav gets an idea what is bothering her...good going,



Thank you! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: ASRandKKGSRFan

Hey hun!

Hope you are doing well ... 😊
As for the dedication to me and some of your other readers, I for my part would like to say thankyou. You deserve to be acknowledged and I try my best to give relevant feedback for what its worth ... I just love the depth that goes into reading your stories. Beautiful. Dedicated. Intense. What else can I say ...
Onto the update!
Oh yes, I nearly forgot to say ... congrats on the new thread!!!
👏👏👏
Now REALLY onto the update's feedback ... 😳😆😆
I admire Arnav. He wants to live upto the promise that he has made Khushi and rightly so. I mean why make a promise if you do not intend to keep it. Yes there are situations and circumstances that arrive in ones life that sometimes hinder those promises, or don't allow for them to be fulfilled at that moment in time ... but you've got to try your best. Do not make a promise if you do not have the intention of keeping it. It takes strength to do what Arnav here is trying to. He' being ever so gentle with her. Caring. Tender even. Not like the usual ASR enterior that he gives off to the world. Nice change. I respect Arnav even more for the fact that he didn't rise to his anger after seeing Shrey's name pop up on Khushi's phone. He put aside his feelings and attended to Khushi. Bless him. I truely feel like giving him a massive 🤗
As for Sneha, well she is being a true friend. She's trying to get in contact with Khushi. She's clearly acknowledged that Khushi is in the state she is because she's gone to the place that has given her nothing but pure sadness. I'm glad that Arnav in some way eased out Sneha's worry by letting her know that Khushi was safe.
Wow! I mean this was really heartfelt. I'm feeling emotional having read this, what Khushi went through in terms of her mother dying, her father committing suicide and then being treated horribly in the orphanage. Khushi. Happiness. That is what she deserves. She's extremely brave. Honest. Ambitious. Respectful. Considerate. What an amazing woman she is.
⭐️



Thank you so much for such a lamba comment, it really made my day dear! I cant thank you enough, maybe kisses will do the trick? 😆 😳 I always wait for you to comment on the updates and there's no surprise why. :) Thank you darling! :)

Arnav is kinda a changed man. And all it takes is a small promise to change his attitude towards Khushi. Had it not been there, I am very sure he would have done one of the two things he really wanted to do. Of course, but that was in my own hands. 😆 I wanna hug him alongside you. 😳 Not once, but A LOT of times. Hehehe. 😆

There's no greater priase for me when you say that it made you emotional. Thank you so much dear! The words you used for her fit her the best. :)

Thanks thanks thanks! :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: kotha15

oho..poor khushi..dnt worry nw ur prince charming arnav wl always b dere for u...whn wl shrey get out of deir lyf????i dnt lyk him



Shrey getting out? Guess away all you want! 😆
Thanks for the comment darling :)

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