#2 FF:Ten things I hate about you (Chapters13-19)

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@guggu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: anarshi
wow what a beautifull update...loved it

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Awesoe stry

Thanks! :)

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@guggu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: ag0502
Lovely update

Originally posted by: crazyweird
Awesome update

Thanksss! :))

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luvbug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

i see u r online... r u going to update today?? 😃

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@guggu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: Jammy-
Hayee!! She is beautiful, isn't she? By heart and soul!! A thing that I have noticed is that, so is Arnav. He has a beautiful soul.

You ask about pace of the story for which I say it's perfect. Not too fast, which is good. What I want to know is Arnav's side of things. See I know his feelings about khushi. What I don't know is, its about his past. Does he have one? Whats his equation with his family? Now I know it's your story, you can take it as you wish, so far we've established Khushi's past, a little insight about Arnav is what I wish for.

Oh and the romance sucker that I am, a little Rabba ve hasn't hurt anybody, has it? ;)

I so wanted somebody to mention that! I drafted them in such a way and now that you mentioned it, I feel so happy! :) Thank you so much jammy! 😃😃😃

And when you talked about Arnav's side of things, I realised you are right. I always though of things through Khushi's POV because a lot of our stories are women centric. Glad you brought it up and I hope you like the next chapter. :)

And Rabba vey's coming up! 😃😃😃

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@guggu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: amritab
I thought that the pace of the story had slowed down a bit but Chapter 13 was so important - and the time you took to get there was worthwhile. I feel like Chapter 14 is more for the purpose of setting up the new relationship between Arnav and Khushi - and certainly more from his point of view, considering everything that he now knows about her and the change in his feelings toward her. I'm excited to see where you take it from this point forward.

Point noted, captain! 😃😃
I hope you like what I have written next. Thank you! :))

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@guggu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: diyadivya
fab updt

Originally posted by: Viviann
Lovely update...

Continue soon :)

Thanks youu guys! :)

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@guggu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: --BumbleBee--
I loved loved loved this update..
As for the pace of the story, it's going great, but in some parts I feel it's slow.

That scene where he takes care of her was beautiful.

The part where she wears the wedding dress was so sweet and poignant.
Can't but think that it is a something of a prediction for what is to come..

Please update soon.
Waiting!!

Thanks for the PM..

Thank you thank you thank you! 😃😃
I will keep your points in mind. :) Update coming up! :)