Ariya SS- Just Married upt part 9 (pg 67) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
really nice plzz do update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
nice start..
Arjun nd Riya married..
Ring as a gift..how sweet..
Lookin forward to it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Haye Ariya just married wow
prava
yeh kaisi sr the kuch kia he nai...
Kya kya idea atain hain dear
lykd it so much dear
plz continue soon
sry for cmnting late
Edited by samiya.059 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Di open ur fingers lol
such a sweet start of ss..
riya oops kitna bolti h udi baba hehe..
arjun nyc ring gift kr di.,
di com ki beti h
rathod to arjun acp skills rofling di..
loved it
ria n job waiting to knw..!!
chalo di
claps ho jaye hehe..
urs naughty
pari..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
um...outstandingly awesome.
I love every bit of it that I wanna read
next part soon.

Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
awesome dear...
amazing concept...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Dear Prava,

I am glad I am able to read one of your stories from the beginning. In general, I am by now quite tired of Ariya romances, most of them quite forced, but here you have attempted something novel and fresh, and I find it really promising. There will none of the endless sniping at each other in the office, none of Riya's casting longing glances at a surly Arjun, no secret tears, in short none of the very fatiguing stuff that has made me allergic to all thing Ariya.

You now have a professional Riya, but one who is in another work area, who is open and easygoing and who treats Arjun as a friend-in-the-making, and an Arjun who is more tentative and unsure of himself than one could have imagined. The touch about Arjun almost ending up as a substitute teddy bear is delightful, and their interactions so far are also very well done.

All in all, as I said, most promising. I hope, no, I am sure that you will be able to maintain this touch.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Hi Friends I am back with a new SS..

I Hope you will like this story..It's a fresh story with no flashback of Roshni in Arjun's life.

This will mainly have friendship of Ariya and their cute mast and romance...😳😳

Not much the cases...😆

Here i present you a small prologue..


Edited by sashashyam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
good start..dear..😊
interesting to see a new arjun and cute riya..
looking forward 4 ur next updates..ab jaldi se continue karo yaar👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
oh my god valli😲...dats ..err...well🤔...i dint expect dis kind of ss on arjun nd riya...😛
its...unexpected story...yea..i loved it.😳.bt i dnt knw hw to express dat hw bowled i am.
good going valli👏 yea...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
awesome start :)
so they are married :) nice
love how shree told is sister's secret to arjun :) he is so adorable
awww he gifted her a ring on their wedding night :)
arjun is so sweet in this SS :) love him
oh god riya is too frank and open-minded
riya have to join in 2 days :( wonder what arjun is going to do...
love the concept...looking forward to read it :)
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon

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