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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved the way you have portrayed both the couples...That look and genuine smile from Arnav gave Khushi so much confidence..I loved that ramp part..
But how come Aman din't have to go to the fashion show?
The fashion show and Aman- Mahek meeting happened at the same time right?or am I missing something?

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Posted: 12 years ago
just now read all the parts in one go...
wow!!!! fab story yaar...
pls add me to your buddy list and pm when you update the next part...
loads of love!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update. The Aman-Mahek equation was so cute. It's adorable how the other girls are looking out for her. Arnav and Khushi's connection is always heart warming. Is the fashion show happening parallel to the Aman and Mahek conversation? If yes, why are they not there at the show?
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was very nice. just read the last 4 chapters. couldn't get to it earlier. thank you for all the pms. looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally we've the fashion show.
What's with Samar?Why was he behaving weirdly?
Loved the way Khushi was a bundle of nerves but as soon as she saw Arnav with a warm smile on his face,encouraging her she had the power to face the world.
Aman and Mehek are taking baby steps in their relationship and are adorable.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi! this is my 100th post!😛 so when are you updating?😉
Edited by farhannish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Dearest Mav, what a talented writer you are!!!

I am a new reader to you're fanastical tale and it was only through your PM that I had stumbled across it. You probably mistaked me for a reader and I am ever so glad you did so!!! 😃 😃

I looved all you're chapters and I read them all in one gooo!! It was sooo addictive and gripping and interesting to read... gosh I'm lost for words! 😊

I really admire people who have a knack for creative writing... it tells a lot about their personality; they are imaginative, creative and can see things in a different light. I loove how you took the story of IPKKND and made it your own with all the new charaters, the plot and the whole "past life" element between Aman and Mahek.

I found it all tooo unique and I really enjoy reading Arshi stories that go off the original track because they are soo much of an inspiration for stories of my own.

I adore the way you have developed the paralell relationships that match ones the show:

Aman and ASR's brotherly conversations (ASR and Akash) 👍🏼

The gap shup between all the girls and Molly 😉

(Khushi, Payal, Buaji, Garima, Nani, Anjaly and Mami)

The sisterly-motherly relationships between the twins, Mahek, Khushi and Molly was sooo sweet and relatable. Kind of the relationship I share with my friends and their mums it was really sweet to sort of live that feeling with your characters.

ARSHI OBVIOUSLY ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Mahek and Aman's cute little pair (Akash and Payal) 😆 😆

Samar and Khushi's "friendship"... (Khushi and NK) 😊

There is soo much care and passion between all your characters that it seems unnatural!!

ArShi's meeting was phenomenal! How Arnav mistook Khushi for someone he thought he knew in the beginning and how even now he still finds her a challenge just goes to show how unpredictable their love actually is and vice versa.

How Arnav has changed throughout the beginning!!! His soft side is becoming more and more evident by each update though I have a weird feeling it is to be short-lived and something is going to go wrong between ArShi... Please tell me I am wrongg..!!! 🤔

Your storyy overall is amazing.. Keep the updates coming dear! Hoping to hear more from you soon!!
Lots of love, Mahnoor
Edited by rockprincess123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey just caught up with the last two chapters .. Sorry for the late comments ... Both the updates were awesome , Loved the way you have slowly developed Mahek and Aman's relationship . That was great of Arnav to boost up Khushi's morale in the fashion show :) Something's up with samar though !!! Oh loved their lunch date :) Poor khushi her mouth gets ahead of her brain 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry, folks. Maverickmartin is hereby considered dead till the 15th of March. Education is harrowing.

(Read: On hiatus. Will update on 15th.Got exams, they suck.) 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maverickmartin

Sorry, folks. Maverickmartin is hereby considered dead till the 15th of March. Education is harrowing.


(Read: On hiatus. Will update on 15th.Got exams, they suck.) 😆

And i thought you loved me!!😭

🤣

by the way good luck

👍🏼
Edited by farhannish - 12 years ago

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