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Posted: 12 years ago
arnav had to trust khushi and l cant wait for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear Lord ... Your comment has made me so damn curious ... Plz update ASAP ... I don't think the guessing game is helping my curiosity any more :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update!
It's good that Arnav is now going to trust Khushi on Akash's matter.
Can't wait to read the next update!
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update loved it... akash has plans to propose to her maybe his family aware about her and akash.. that is why this dinner plan... loved the way asr is feeling insecure... all this is because he does not said these musical words "I love you" to khushi, if happened earlier, today she must have refused the dinner date or would have told akash that she would like to come to dinner with her fiance Arnav...
that will be something...wonder what happened in the dinner?
plz continue soon and thx for the pm
Edited by Abyan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
love it poor arnav stuck with his insecurities anyways loved it and plzzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
i think arnav is going to self invite himself to the dinner or maybe arnav will leave her to akash thinking abt her happiness and she will get angry at him and profess her love...whichever way it turns its their character that i have fallen in love with!so doesent matter!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantatstic update...
Ooohhh Arnav Man control urself n have patience...
Khushi is soo understanding n I love her for that...
Waiting for dinner...hhhmmm...whts coming...
Thanxx for pm dear...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you for the PM.. what a lovely chapter... he is so insecure and loved his green-eyed monster coming out.. watch out Khushi.. if you get close to Aakash.. Arnav will def blow a gasktet...

This was wonderful she understood him well and he is at least trying... continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

The update was lovely 😊 & thanks for the PM 🤗


The morning tease 'Raizada tradition of wishing' was an adorable start. Khushi blabbering about porridge on hearing his demand & then easing on knowing that he was just teasing her and Arnav on the other hand enjoying the sight of a surprised Khushi chattering & happy that he's going to spend his life with her were enjoyable 😊


'Because if media gets a wisp of it, they'll make your life a reality show by hounding you all the time. With your exams in two months, I think you can do without all that circus.

You are a pretty easy and available target and not to forget THE surprise bride. You'll attract much more attention than me'

'And your aunties at the temple too. They gossip more than a few harmless students' 😆 😆

Arnav telling Khushi to stay silent about their wedding showed concern about not wanting her to get tired & messed up with the media with her exams around her neck.....that was a sweet thought .....and the talk of not wanting the aunties to know was fun to read


And that's from where the lovely morning of new couple spiraled downhill.

'Oh! Such eagerness to defend the Akash incredibly-close-to-me Roy' Arnav fumed

'Other than Adit-Adya and ME, everyone is an outsider NOW' he chewed out his words, trying to reign in his temper.

Arnav fuming on Akash popping out again between them, fearing that Akash will somehow wait like a hawk to catch his place in Khushi's life, deciding not to give Akash even a glance of his marriage & finally telling Khushi sternly that everyone other than the children & him were outsiders clearly expresses the extent to which fear followed by jealousy has engulfed him


Khushi worried on Arnav's temper taking an upper hand pushing his health down & wondering why he assumed that her priorities lie with her friends when she considers the children & him as her family falling in the most close & important circle of her life was well narrated


Khushi thinking that she has been the chosen one & that she is ready to ease out his temper with her calm attitude & chuckling at the name 'LG' she gave him was sweet


Only respite for him now would be if she reciprocates his feelings. 'Please love me back Khushi, Please' he murmured.

These lines were touching - the way his heart fears on losing his love & wanting to be loved back


Arnav deciding that showing his anger the very next day of their engagement didn't seem a positive step on his side & wanting to have faith on her trust factor & not let doubts cloud his mind was admirable


She was like tailor made for him. Yeah. SHE WAS HIS. ONLY HIS. He is not going to let her go, EVER... He pledged to wait for that day patiently, and not let his insecurities get better of him. He was Arnav Singh Raizada. He does not do insecure-lover-boy...Also he will have to start believing that this time fate will not play foul with him, no Akash Roy will snatch his happiness from him.

Khushi's note bringing a smile on his face & shooting up his appetite, Arnav gladly deciding to wait patiently for her to express her love & win over fate (Akash this time) after pondering over her firm statements which were like a drink of assurance to him was framed beautifully


Arnav's sleep ruined by his disturbed heart which didn't approve of allowing Khushi to go to Akash's dinner invitation sounds like there is another scene of his rising temper coming up on its way...wonder how Khushi will convince him & whether she'll blurt out to Akash about her wedding in case he proposes to her.... 😲


Hope Arnav's insecurity doesn't break Khushi's heart that he does not trust her


Waiting to see if Akash being a lawyer & a smart head will pose a challenge to Arnav, not wanting to lose his love...or Akash will help his friend knowing that she is more attached to the Raizada family & has accepted Arnav's proposal...or the drama after the dinner will help Arnav gather himself to express his hidden love to Khushi?????

As a reader, I would love to be surprised by the twists & turns you give in the story & it is the unexpected details which keep me hooked to the story & make me think a little more harder & differently everytime


Edited by fleurs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful chapter
i loved the opening with the teasing and the blabbering..so cute
extremely jelous arnav, i understand his insecurities but he needs to have some faith
khushis little peace maker was cute, making him food and a note to join him midway in his decision
i think akaash was originally planning to propose to khushi cuz im sure he has made that intention clear but then khushi is engaged now so she will refuse

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