An ArHi SS: Secrets #2 *COMPLETED*

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#1001

A beautiful ending to this amazing SS.

I always loved your suspense elements in your stories.

One of the best !

Yes, the blue rose. And i loved how you added in the valentine's day part.

It was really nice to sum up everyone's lives here. NK, Lavanya's part.

Looking forward to read more SS! Do write more. 😃

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barbiebala

@barbiebala

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1002

awesome ending
wow arnav is so addicted to khushi
both are perfect for each other

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Aishwarya

@EmpressSarayu

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1003

Brilliant. They've grown in the relationship, they're mature adults even though Arnav begs to differ most times! Him not able to live even for a few hours with out her, if it was anyone else I would say creepy!

NK and Preeto and Lav. Hmm. Did you originally plan to put it in the epilogue or was that new?

Is it really over? The epilogue tied it up really well! :) <3

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#1004

That was a perfect epilogue.

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1005

that was a truly lovely valentine's day gift from you, especially as it came as a surprise! it was all about love but more than that about trust... trusting your soulmate to be there for you, trusting him or her enough to share your innermost thoughts with him / her and to surrender oneself to the other without fear... arnav's gesture of making khushi an equal partner in his companies and hers in gifting him that rare blue rose shows how far they've come... the whole beginning dealing with arnav's excuses not to be separated from khushi was adorable as was the fight over the significance of the day... such fights help keep the adrenaline in a relationship flowing! khushi in red getting drenched in the rain, arnav's teasing assertion that he doesn't like sharing his things and that she would take back her claim that he was unromantic, before the night was through were just scorching in the intensity of their love and desire for each other

the nk-lavanya interlude was an equally important one because it is about needing another human being... trust isn't fully there but need denotes the fact that you are willing to give yourself over to someone who will support and love you, warts and all... lavanya is right: she shouldn't be punished for someone else's mistake... trust is essential in love and nk has taken the first step along this path by admitting that he can't do without her, thus making himself vulnerable but not caring about it... and he wasn't wrong in laying bare his heart as lavanya kept it safe

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Anjali

@acklesmanic

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1006

whoa such a beautiful ending...!! You are not only the queen of suspense, but also the queen of romance and endings. Lovely.
Happy valentine's day di, hope u had a lovely time with your loved ones and continue to do so. 😃😉. As of waiting, frankly speaking I don't believe in a soulmate, I don't know why, but i think its just being practical and mature... 😳
Love,
Anjali...!!!❤️

Edited by acklesmanic - 12 years ago

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mrignayani

@mrignayani

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1007

perfect dose of arshi for us...loved the fact that is was short yet sweet!!!!! well written!

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1008

a beautiful valentine gift for us...thanks

It was beautiful and rightly said that one does not need any special day to express and enjoy with your loved one 😊

Trust is another factor which is extremely important, loved the ending and Arnav's secret was sooo sweet...and ofcourse khusi knows it afterall they are soulmates 😃

thanks for the pm . look forward to reading anything new whhich you decide to pendown

poonam

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allegro

@allegro

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1009

Epic epilogue for an epic story.

Truly enjoyed this roller-coaster ride.

From their meet in Lucknow, Khushi's revenge, Arnav forgiving her

And now they live happily ever after.😃

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1010

Wow that was an amazing and fantastic Epilogue, a perfect end to this mind blowing and outstanding story. Awww i loved Arnav's secret how he can not live without Khushi and does not let her go anywhere alone. The blue Rose khushi got Arnav was so beautiful and Arnav is willing to sign half his company into khushi's name was amazing as he has finally started to trust khushi fully. Poor NK is so insecure and paranoid and does not trust any women, no wonder he had a private investigator checking out Khushi and Lavanya, I'm loving Lavanya because she willing to give him another chance. Khushi decided to challenge Arnav by saying he is not romantic, that was a bad move, i'm sure Arnav will prove her wrong. Wow this whole story was amazing from start to finish and i loved every update which was written exceptionally. Hope you beautiful mind has got a new story for us in the near future, thanks for the PM xx