ArHi SS: Bucket List (NOTE PG 94) 12.08.15 - Page 53

Just came across your story's and my god can't stop laughing the way you are writing this loving Khushi in this one can't wait till your next update

Urgh, so this my 3^rd time I believe I'm typing this out. 2 times, this stupid laptop gave up on me. Damn you laptop !

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Nonetheless,

Tabassum- you are the WOMAN ! super-woman infact ! I Love you for posting this, creating this magical creation- characterization, dialogues and plot - truly epic. Not to be creepy, but you've become my shining-star,' my mood up-lifter.

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I'm abs. SPEECHLESS ! period. Yet, I will still go on. I hold the love for this Fic. Deep down within me now and it's only it's power and love, that I'm typing this again for the 3^rd time. I won't weep. I was typing such a super long, totally impressive message and bam, some key presses and the page disappears. Anyhoot, you are a genius, my friend ! And if you haven't considered writing, WHAT ARE YOU DOING ?! okay, seriously .. you are WAY too awesome, too good and I'm super- awed ... if only there was a Fic. Writing for Oscars /Emmy would be going to you for this. I haven't come across anything as good as this.. it's one of the best !

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Getting to the story, it's going to be on my top list now. Truly and honestly. If this was on a blog site, newspaper or whatever, I would rate this beyond magical and ten- stars- so, you could get Emmy's or Oscar's for this. Still serious. I don't know, this story has touched me, made me laugh so hard I couldn't breathe at times, had tears coming out my eyes, I would shocked and awed one second and start laughing the next. It has truly become a great friend in a day.

I came across this yesterday and I'm so thrilled to let you know that I did. I'm looking for great fic's and it's rare I come across such like these, and when I do - I do the bhangra !!* bahaha, I can't do the bhangra and would Khush's chicken dance work ? like she did in those swami episodes ? ha ! I stayed up the whole night reading this and the rest today. I had been in splits ... amused, amazed, thrilled, kinda emotional, yet laughing whenever you gave me the chance. A totally different and hatke Fic which I wish I could hug and treasure. Treasure I can.

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Favourites::
#1) Khushi- period. I wish I could be her. Or should I wish so? At time, no like in the fic. But man, she's abs. great ! melo-dramatic, hilarious, sappy, over-the-top emotional, bollywood/TV freakishly insane, insane otherwise, crazy though process, way too fantasized, stupid, etc. Love reading her.
#1.5) Love Arniee boy - great pairing with Khush - the most misunderstanding couple.'

#2) Daaadi- Do I even need to go on? Period. Love her, wish I had one like her... so I could half internally, be entertained... she's way too awesome. Love and adore her pairing with Khush. Back to back stupid, nonsensical remarks and questions- lbof. *hitting her with whatever possible (kitchen cutlery), reaction after *bringing in a gora- damaad*, what are you wearing?'
#3) NK- naandu buoaay. Gotta love NK not just in the show, but more so, he's SO fun to read in your Fic's. his dialogue, arguments, witty/stupid/exaggerated remarks, pester and annoying techniques- haha. Best w/ Arniee boy + rest of characters.

#4) the rest of the cast- Payaloo (haha, great nick !) , Anjii/Abhi, Akash, La ...

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Production/written direction/execution= extraordinary

Character analysis/dialogue delivery, Imagery, Plot = impressive.

Each update better than the other= absolutely. Thumbs up.

Catchy, attention-seeking, attractive, writing style = 1o stars.

Author wrapping thing up= don't.even.think.about.it. (Pretty Please ?! this is one of the best mood-lifters, bestest written entertainment. Strech it for a while, thanks !)

Love you, thaaanks ! <333 :D
PS; way too long of a critique; but, I know you'll love it ! ha.

sorry for the late comment!

Freaking awesome!! A riot of a chapter yet again... Hats off to you girl for making laugh like no other SS or FF, simply splendid... Nobody does a quirky Khushi as well as you do, take a bow girl, you deserve it... 👏

Good lord, such lovely comments. Thanks, folks, new readers and old readers alike.

So I have been attempting to write the next chapter and have written all of two words, both of which made me throw up.
What I am saying is, unlikely that I will have an update before end of next week, unless sudden bout of inspiration happens. Just thought I will let you guys know in case anyone is waiting for an update. Thanks for being patient. Like always 😆

Haha that was hilarious ...

Originally posted by: TabassumR

Good lord, such lovely comments. Thanks, folks, new readers and old readers alike.

So I have been attempting to write the next chapter and have written all of two words, both of which made me throw up.
What I am saying is, unlikely that I will have an update before end of next week, unless sudden bout of inspiration happens. Just thought I will let you guys know in case anyone is waiting for an update. Thanks for being patient. Like always 😆

Bumped into this ff and must ur writing is different and enjoyful..6
Loved every bit of it..plzz keep writing

Originally posted by: TabassumR

Good lord, such lovely comments. Thanks, folks, new readers and old readers alike.

So I have been attempting to write the next chapter and have written all of two words, both of which made me throw up.
What I am saying is, unlikely that I will have an update before end of next week, unless sudden bout of inspiration happens. Just thought I will let you guys know in case anyone is waiting for an update. Thanks for being patient. Like always 😆

You pre-empted us!! Sigh.. next weekend then!