Taarey FF: Learning to Breathe ~Complete~ - Page 14

Oh wow sanju awesome part dear
Aww taarey friendship is wonderful
although feeling bad for tani
hope she vl feel better soon
waiting for taarey romance

omg...

ur works r always a treat to read...

Superb fantastic very well written.update soon.

Sanju omg u made me cry soo much, all the pain and hurt that Taani is going through is so damn heartbreaking. I just love the way u write her feelings and emotions Miss novelist. The gang and their eavesdropping lol. Rey calming and comforting Taani was super sweet. Love the song choice it fit perfectly with the whole scenario. Taani singing and Rey dancing is just a magical combination. Taani shocked face seeing Rey take off his shirt aww poor girl lol. I loveee this part alot and no words is enough to describe your writing skills.

loved it... luv the song...and d whole scene... it was really good... actually awesome ;)

Wow!!
Just read all the parts and I have to say that you are an amaaazing writer
I wish I could write half as good as u
Pls pm me!!

loved it dear.
very well described taani's emotion.
loved taarey , taayam convo.
taani is hurt due to her father as her father give more importance to his step daughter ...
can feel her pain.
rey can feel her pain and jis tarah usne taani ko sambhala and usko sadness se bahar nikala aur uska pain ooze out karne me help ki is just awesome.
thanks for the pm and do cont. soon.

i hate taani dad