ArHi OS:Expectation and Conjecture

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crazyyfan

@crazyyfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Interesting ! Until the end i had assumed it was Arnav talking to Lavanya like u had intended 😉
Off to read part 2 😊

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Part 1:

I just loved the way you developed the OS..keeping us guessing. And had you not mentioned in the note to not come to conclusions, I would surely have😆

Typical of Shyam Manohar Jha to lust after Khushi...even though she's married😡

I doubt how come Lavanya's not even suspicious of his intentions😕...I might be having extra expectations from her probably because I've already read WAUFMAIO.

Off to the next one!😊

Part 2:

One of the lovable things of IPK was the portrayal of Shyam. That Abhaas enacted him well made us hate the character to the ore; through this OS you've delineated him so well by using a superb narrative.

Captain Raizada...I read this and the faint tinge of red automatically encroaches upon my cheeks☺️

Lovely description of the husband and wife as well.😊

Part 3:

Shyam's introspection is here again. And his loathsome plan was shudder-inducing.

But Arnav so brilliantly turned the tables on him...that he would act on the lines of tit for tat was somehow expected but when I read 'it wasn't even a woman', I couldn't help but give out a whistle in delight!👏

How did Arnav figure out Shyam's plan? Is he telepathic?😕 If he's plain shrewd then I guess he could work as a spy😆...needless to say, I just loved this one!

Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

beautiful...up until the end i thought it arnav who is thinking not shyam

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amv63

@amv63

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Semanti, I got the link to your Index from Expel and am so glad to have done so. To think there's been all this good work floating about and I knew nothing of it. 😛

I just finished the first three parts of this series and am now going to start on your version of 'When Khushi met Arnav".

Your take on Shyam and his obsession for Khushi was absolutely superb. Scary, though, when you think about the lengths he was willing to go to just to get her. Men.. some of them just don't know when to stop do they? They keep tripping over their oversized egos and inflated sense of their own attraction for the opposite sex.😉

Looking forward to more.

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toblerone

@toblerone

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

wow, i liked how you wrote this from shyam's perspective!! well done 👍🏼

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Latest res eva!

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mrignayani

@mrignayani

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

This was such a wonderful sweet story...you are such a fantastic writer...waiting to read more of your writings!

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

ha ha...the last part rocked...I never thought shyam will be played in his own game! that was brilliant! off to read more!

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Hey! Just caught this through your ss!

My my I seriously didn't even think of shyam in the first part until you mentioned it! I thought it was Arnav all the while but when lavanya mentioned she's married and is mrs Arnav Singh Raizadha I was like who the hell is this guy??

Perfection n doubt was superb they way you showed the love these two shared and the chemistry that oozed out which made shyam actually have second thoughts about possessing his obsession!!

Nd the third part omg, counter attack already? This speaks a lot about the characters!!

In no time it backfired! Hehe!

Off to read the prewuel!

Cheers