ArHi OS:Expectation and Conjecture

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Aysha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

hahahha what payback for shyaam

arnav was a quick in his actions

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sakthi25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Such a nice one. Read it all in one go...

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

asr seriously shyman thought he had a chance with her loved how arnav knew everything and played his moves awesome update will be following you stories

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Homeslice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Beautiful story. :)

Keep up the work!

Thanks Rasu for the PM.

Edited by -NishaSobti- - 12 years ago

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Brilliantly written and truly awe inspiring, if this is your first in writing. That first chapter truly stumped me, i assumed it was Arnav. Only later, to be found that it was Shyam. The way you introduced Arnav is worthy of an applause. He had his eyes shuttered, but the same eyes brimmed with tenderness and love when he just looked at her. The inane possessiveness and protectiveness Arnav has for Kushi is mind-blowing, he read Shyam intentions too accurately!! And forced Shyam to taste his own plan!! The photo Arnav send to Shyam had me lol.

Looking forward to the sequel. Adding you to my buddy list, please accept it.

Thanks to Rasgulla for her recommendation.

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

read all three parts yesternight but couldn't comment... nice to be introduced to another talented writer of your calibre... the language and expression are very apt in adding to the humor... shyam's obsession with khushi was quite creepy and clearly palpable... it was adorable seeing arnav and khushi so deeply in love and having eyes for only each other... at the same time, arnav is alert enough to notice shyam's machinations against khushi and to cleverly turn the tables on him his husky threat must have sent shivers down shyam's spine! the line about shyam being photographed in bed 'Forget Khushi, it wasn't even a woman.' really made my day... great writing!

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Woaaa that was one amazing TS
So well written and ummm plotted
Gosh arnav is a smart n intimidating person
Loved reading it to bit thanks to rasgulla sp for recommending it and you fr writing it!!
Now m on my way to read the prequel as well.
Plz add me to your PM LIST for it!!

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Amazing ! Read all in one go .You are great !

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

dese 1 shots wer fab..:)gotto no abt it thru Rasgulla_sploved Shyam's cndtn in d end..:Dwen d stry strtd i thot its Arnav's who's thinkin abt Khushi n ol..later La cleared abt Khushi bein married 2 Arnavji..:DlolMrs.Khushi Singh Raizada..n it was Shyam..hahastill he wanted Khushi..planned 2 get her..n Arnav played d game back..Shyam in d room wid some man..:OOMG!!his repo was at stake..so he had 2 back out.lolloved it..:)gonna read d prequel nw..:)

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goguma

@goguma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

first of all, tks to rasgulla for bringing me here.

when i read the first part. and realized that it is all abt shyam and his lusty thoughts on kushi,
i wanted to stop. 😳

with FAITH, i read on, and got to the last part where arnav called, warned and threatened shyam
and i was like "YES! go arnav!"

to see shyam conceited defeat and backed off, really makes my day!
glad to know this man still knows what is good for him! huh! lol

okay, will read the prequel now, and i am sure i'll enjoy it too... 😃

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