ARHI FF:Strings Of Illusion-T1(PROLOGUE/CHP 1- 5) - Page 18

Originally posted by: Water.

Yippie

New FF.

Hey, I checked the blog, but was not able to comment there. So does that mean, we should comment here and not on the blog?

Let me know.

Cannot wait for the chapter 1

such a brilliant teaser!!!!!
i must say u r an awesomazing writter!!!!!
looking forward to read more...so, update the chap soon...
thnx 4 the PM 😊

Superb n awesome.. I can't wait for you to start it in full flow... 🤗

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Great prologue. concept is very interesting

Its very rare that I get to be on the first few pages!

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Omg I'm actually on the same page as the update!! This is the first tym since I started following u from When I Met you!! Def my day!! :) new start n this feat! Yay me! :D

Now to the prologue!! What eh start! This gave me the jist of what the mills means to thapa's life!! Its very rare that one gets to end his her life at the place of worship!! Here def work is worship for him!

The way you stressed out on how it started and how after getting the mill to this heights oso he doesn't give up what he started! Checking the raw material himself daily even at this age! Shows his hard work n devotion!!

N I'm assuming this is Gupta side of the story n that grand daughter might be Khushi!! I don't know but I have a feeling so!! Or a loyal worker for the Gupta clans! Either of the two!

Amazing start Aar! Loving it already this is truly different n unique something more than just romance!!

Cheers :)

Ps: its not on d blog yet? I didn't find it there!!

Amazing update. Who is dis thapa n why he is important. Vry nce. D way thapa took us 2 his memory land n his wife. Who ll cum 2 abt him being poisoned. His granddaughter witness but its just a heart attack

Interesting start!!!
Cant wait to reas more.
Waiting for the romantic updates eagerly!!!!