A terrific, touchy and emotional update, you have portrayed their feelings beyond expectations..and the thought of Khushi wishing to celebrate her bday, did occur in my mind for a sec..but brushed it off thinking why would she...hmm..but nice twist you brought here.. You have beautifully depicted Khushi's emotions and about her memories related to her mother whom she hadn't seen, but got to know from her father...
The other part which I liked most, was how she felt when people were talking about their bday's and the events which happened during Payal's bday.. It was such an intense one.. I wonder why everyone left her to be alone on her bday, probably if they had persuaded her to celebrate her bday, she would have done.. but its natural that people prefer to lie low on such days when both events co-inside..and we can't blame others. Too bad, that her birthday makes her feel that she was responsible for her parents death...
She was missing Arnav and was hoping that he would surprise her on her birthday... what a telepathy.. if it hadn't been for news from Di, Arnav would have been beside her now and started on her surprise birthday celebrations and she wouldn't have been writing these things to her mysterious person...It would have made Arnav happy because without knowing her dreams, he would have full-filled it and that would be the most memorable gift for her to cherish through out her life.. since celebrating her birthday is one of her dreams which she thought would never come true.
Arnav was jealous of the mysterious friend ( himself)..just wondering what he would do so that Khushi would start trusting him and share each and everything that she is sharing with the mysterious person.. I think, once he confesses to her things will fall in place automatically.
As I anticipated in my last comment, Arnav is with her on her bday.. Wow, he is going to make her dream come true...I'm damn sure that he will make so special, which she will never forget. Loved the way Arnav lifted her and carried her in his arms and told ther that he is here not to discuss but kidnap her for a day.. wow. so they both are going to spend the whole day together ONLY TWO OF THEM. I'm sure he will probably take her on the yatch trip..Khushi agreed to get herself kidnapped that too getting herself freshened...ha ha.. It so nice that both of them haven't confessed their feelings, but still they are accepting each other and want to be together...can't imagine what will be the state when they confess...But nice that they are providing chance to eachother.
I hope that Arnav comes out clean with the mysterious friend and confesses his love to her on her birthday.. I'm sure that this wouldn't create any mis-understandings between them. I feel Khushi deserves knowing this... Curiously waiting to see how you are going to unravel the magical moments they are going to share to make her birthday a memorable one.. Please update soon... can't wait for long time..
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