FF: Pehli baar Mohobbat ki hai (Arshi & Taarey)❤️ - Page 76

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: paruls

Thanks for the welcome .😳

Rey is such a sweetheart in ur FF. He seems to want to give every happiness to tanni.😳
And the scene where khushi finally stops talking due to arnav coming close to her was amazing.😳

Thank u soo much dear...
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Chapter 24

Arnav: Maine select kiya hai isse. How dare you talk to her this way?(Comes and stands between Khushi and Photographer) Bohot chilane ka shokh hai tume ha?? Apne profession ko aise handle karte ho tum?? Yea?? Tell me?? (khushi keeps staring at Arnav)who hired you??? Mr.khurana, dusra photographer ka intezam karo'now!!!!

Mr.Khurana: Par Mr.Raizada hum har saal isi photographer ko hire karte hai.

Arnv: I don't care. Muje dusra photographer chaiye(yells)Quick!!!

Photographer: Sorry sir, galti hogi, wapus se nahi hoga.

Arnv: ye khushi pe chilana se pehle sochna chaiye tha. Now you may leave.

Khu: (sobbing)Nahi Arnavji. Inki koi galti nahi hai, Humse ye sab nahi hoga, Alisha ji thik kehti thi, ye humare buss ki baat nahi.

Arnv: what? Alisha?? And who the hell is she to tell you what your capable of and what ur not? Aur Isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai you get that? Tumhe maine choose kiya hai!! (holds her shoulders)I believe You!! Tum ye kar sakti ho Khushi and tumse acha ye koi nahi kar sakta. Get that?

Khushi smiles between her sobs and nodes her head saying ok.

By then the new photographer comes and Khushi starts her photoshoot, This time much more confident cause Arnav was around. After every click Khushi would look at Arnav and smile. Arnav would smile back.Arnav keeps staring at her and made sure every1 was good to her, everyone gave her refreshments. Finally the shoot was over.khushi walks to Arnav.

Khu: kaisa tha??

Arnv: Perfect. (rabba ve, small LLHH)

Khu: dhanyawad, jab bhi hum musibat me the, apne humara saath diya. Hume Naukri di, office mein humara saath diya, aur aaj bhi.. Agar aaj aap yaha nahi hote toh hum ye kabhi nai kar pate!

Arnv: Ur welcome. And you can count on me. Jab bhi koi bhi problem aye, I'l always be there for you.

Khu: (smiles) waise apko us photographer ko aise naukri se nikalna nahi chaiye tha, wo

Arnv: (annoyed)Please khushi, usne tumhare saath batimizi se baat ki.. (changes his expression) Aur ab tum muje bataogi muje kya karna hai aur kya nahi?? Ye photoshoot khatam hua, tum ghar jao. (turns and leaves)

Khu: (confused) Ye Arnvaji bhi ajeeb hai, ek pal mein itna acha aur achanak se itna itna gussa!(then smiles) Par jaise bhi hai, dil ke bure nahi hai. Lad jagadke hi sahi, aakhir me mere saare mushkil yahi toh tal te hai. (smiles remembering all the time that he stood up for her)

Scene Shifts:

St.Thresa's School:

Rey looking out for Taani everywhere in the school but cant find her, Finally finds her in the messed up school hall, shez removing all cob web on the ceiling with the broom.All cob web be's on her head. She keeps sneezing cause of the dust.Rey looks at her and smile.

Rey: Mother Thresa wali Taani ab Ramu kaka ban gayi, aur kitne saare shades hai tumhare ha?

Taa: (looks at Rey and smiles and again starts sneezing) aaachooo'. Wo exhibition ke liye yahi ek hall mila, toh saaf kar rahi thi. aur.. (again starts sneezing)

Rey: (starts laughing) look at you..!! (again starts laughing) Halat toh dekho, chikh chikh k tumhari cute si naak lal ho gayi!! (pulls her nose)aur ye tumare sur pe, ache khase baalo ka satynash kar diya( comes closer to her and starts cleanin her hair)

Taani keeps staring at Rey as Rey is busy cleaning her hair(taarey bg music)

Rey: (as his cleaning her hair) waise tum ye sab akeli kyu kar rahi ho?? Muje bulati, main Vicky aur sab aa jate help karne.

Taa: nahi Rey, Aap apne classes mein dance karke thak jate hai aur phir ye sab saaf karna, ye sab main akeli manage kar lungi (sneezes again)

Rey: (starts lauging again) halat dekho apni,. (imitates Taani)Akeli manage kar lungi. (laughs again) Aur main tumhari help karunga samjhi, tum yaha akeli struggle karogi?? No ways!!aur ye sirf tumhara exhibition nahi hai. Tum mere saath ho so jo tera hai wo mera hai (small LLHH,Rey Takes the broom from her hands and starts removing the cob web, Taani keeps smiling at Rey and Rey looks at her winks and smiles back)

Sharon and group enter the hall and see Rey working.

Sharon: What the hell Rey?? Tum saaf safayi kar rahe ho?? Humara rehersal hall ke time pe toh tum saaf nahi kar rahe the!! And now look at you.

Rey (all confused): Aare Sharon, wo, Taani na.. wo exhibition rakhne wali hai aur wo bhi yaha, just look around, akeli saaf kar rahi thi, ab bichari humare hote hue yaha akeli kaam karegi??

Swayam: Haan waise, your right, itna bada hall hai aur wo akeli saaf kar nahi payegi. I guess we should help her. But Rey tum ye sab kar rahe ho, that's surprising ha!! M impressed.

Rey: (looks at Taani and smiles) Wo Taani ka exhibition hai, sab kuch perfect hona chaiye aur Taani ko koi problem bhi nahi hona chaiye,

All shocked hearing what Rey just said.

Taa: (just then an idea struck taani): Ek min.. iss exhibition me aap log perform kyu nahi kar lete? Rey aur Swayam aap dono!! Jo bhi paise milega wo, 75% school ko, aur 25% aap dono k dance academy ko milega. Main dean se baat karlungi, wo muje mana nahi karege.

Sharon: wow!! That is really cool idea Taani.

Rey: no no Taani, ye tumhara exhibition hai and saare paise tumare cause ko milne chaiye.

Taa: (cuts him) Do min pehle ye exhibition hum dono ka tha . remember??

The whole group looking at them confused.

Swayam: guys!! Ye ho kya raha hai? Rey ye ek brilliant idea hai, I mean, hum aise oppurtunities miss nahi kar sakte, Taani ka idea acha hai, isse hum dono ko recognition bhi milega.

Rey: Swayam, I know but,

Taa: Rey. Apka sapna hai Dance academy kholna. Please Rey manjayiye na.. please please please (makes puppy faces)

Rey: (smiles) ok fine!!

Whole group cheers up and start yelling and hugging each other, jumping and dancing, admist off all this, Rey looks at taani who was smiling and hugging simi and other girls. She just realizes Rey was staring at her and looks at him and smiles. (tarey bg music)Rey walks towards her and LLHH. Rey was about to say something when Taani interrupts.

Taa: Thank you kehni ki koi zarurat nahi hai, Aap hi ne kaha ki Jo tera hai wo mera hai na??? bhul gaye??

Rey smiles with faint tears in his eyes and hugs Taani.

Rey: you're the best Taani.. I Lo..(for a moment Taani skips a heartbeat, rey looks around and breaks the hug) wo, (looks at everyone) guys guys, masti bohot hua lets clean now, chalo chalo.

All the girls come near Taani and start distributing their work, but Taani still in that moment where Rey was about to say that he loves her.

They all start cleaning the Hall.(bg music I'll be Alright from Dostana)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QrAOokDK7Q0

Click here for the song

Starting music ( everyone starts cleaning and banging each other while cleaning, Nil and Simi fighting, Rey goes and tries to calm them down and carries Nil and takes him away.Taani looking at everyone tensed )

Tu Hai To Tedhi Medhi Rahein

Ulti Pulti Baatein

Seedhi Lagti Hai (All the guys sweeping and fighting with the brooms)

Tu Hai To Jhoothe Muthe Vaadein(Taani standing on an old chair and Vicky and Nil planning to push the chair)
Dushman Ke Iraade

Sacche Lagtein Hain(Vicky was about to hold the chair when Rey holds his collar and drags him away)

Jo Dil Mein Taare Vaare De Jaga
Woh Tu Hi Hai,Tu Hi Hai
(Taani standing on the chair and smiling at Rey)
Jo Roote Roote De Hasa
Tu Hi Hai Wohi
(Rey looks at Taani and winks at her.LLHH)

Jaane Kyun Dil Jaanta Hai (Taani keeps staring as Rey picks up all the mess and cleans)
Tu Hai To
I'll Be All Right
(she couldn't stop smiling)

Jaane kyu Dil janta hai,(Taani starts sneezing, Rey sees and starts laughing)

Tu hai toh I'l be alright. (taani smiles seeing Rey so happy)

(Music)Every1 selelcting the paint for the wall. The whole group pointing out to BLue

Rey: NO guys, white acha lagega.

Group: no no, light blue, Rey come on..

Sharon: ok wait..let Taani deciede, (drags her in the center) Blue??(points out to the group) Ya phir White (points out to Rey)

Taani looks at the group., and then looks at Rey, again Looks at Group and then Rey.


Saari Duniya Ek Taraf Hai (points out at Rey)
Ek Taraf Hai Hum
Har Khushi To Door Bhage
(Rey smiles at Taani and looks at the group and raises his eyebrows)
Mil Rahein Hai Gum

But When U Smile For Me (Rey and Taani holding the paint bucket and throw paint on the wall)
World Seems All Right( taani laughs and gives hi5 to Sharon)

Yeh Meri Zindagi
Pal Mein Khil Jaaye
(Taani turns towards Rey and smiles at him LLHH)
Jaane Kyun
Jaane Kyun Dil Jaanta Hai
(everyone placing the Paintings for exhibition)
Tu Hai To
I'll Be All Right
(finally complete and everyone gives eachother a Hi5 and Taani looking around fully satisfied.
Jaane kyu Dil jaanta hai( Rey looks at Taani and smiles)

Tu hai to I'll be alright. (holds her hand and both LLHH)

(Music) Rey and Swayam practicing their Duet and whole group cheering them. Vicky and Nil showing them some steps. Bharat does some BBoying and Amar shows some tutting. Taani smiles looking at Rey giving cute expressions during dancing. The whole team joins them, Rey comes near Taani and both dance looking and smiling at each other.

Scene shifts Arnav office

Chote Chote Kuch Palon Ka
Dostana Yeah (sitting inside his cabin and discussing something with Alisha
Jaane Kyun Abb Lag Raha Hai
Jaana Maana Yeah
(but his eyes would go on Khushi whom he could see from the wall wich is of glass)
Cos When Smile For Me (khushi looks at him staring at her and smiles)
World Seems All Right (he smiles back)
Yeah Saare Pal Yehi(suddenly Arnav couldn't see anyone and whole office gets dark
Yuhi Tham Se Jaaye
Jaane Kyun (spotlight goes on Khushi who was now in the costume she wore for the photoshoot.)


Jaane Kyun Dil Jaanta Hai (she enters Arnav's cabin)
Tu Hai To
I'll Be All Right
(Arnav gets up from his seat )
Jaane Kyun Dil Jaanta Hai (arnav keeps staring at her and smiles)
Tu Hai To
I'll Be All Right(
reaches in front of him and messes his hair, Arnav closes his eyes)

Tu Hai To Tedhi Medhi Rahein
Ulti Pulti Baatein (he opens his eyes)
Seedhi Lagti Hai

Tu Hai To Jhoothe Muthe Vaadein (turns and Khushi be's sitting on his chair)
Dushman Ke Iraade
Sacche Lagtein Hain
(spinning the chair round and smiling)

Jo Dil Mein Taare Vaare De Jaga
Woh Tu Hi Hai,Tu Hi Hai
(she gets up and takes some papers and comes near Arnav)
Jo Roote Roote De Hasa
Tu Hi Hai Wohi
(throws the papers in the air and Arnav looks at the papers and smiles at her)

Jaane Kyun Dil Jaanta Hai (starts spinning around Arnav in slow motion,papers stil falling from above.)
Tu Hai To
I'll Be All Right

Jaane Kyun Dil Jaanta Hai
(Reaches in front of him and LLHH)
Tu Hai to
I'll Be All Right

Jaane kyu Dil janta hai(comes closer and gives him a peck on his cheek)

Tu hai toh I'll be alright(Arnav closes his eyes)


Alisha: Sir???

Arnav: (comes out of his trance and see's that hez on his seat, looks outside the cabin and see's khushi sitting there and working) Damn' (closes his eyes and takes a deep breath)

Ali: are you alright sir??

Arnv: Alisha you may leave, I'l talk to you later.

Ali: sir, apko kuch chaiye, you look

Arnv: (orders) just leave Alisha!! (Alisha turns and goes)

Arnv: (to himself) Ye tu kya soch raha tha!! (looks at Khushi from the glass wall) Ye Khushi Kumari Gupta tume itna affect karne lag gayi. You were day dreaming about her??? What is wrong with you! Office me baitke tum Khushi ke bare mein.. (realizes that he is breathing fast) Calm down Arnav' itna breathe kyu kar raha hai, relax. Jaise tu soch raha hai waisa.. no ways.. I don't have any feelings for Khushi.(feels weird)Or maybe I do.

Precap

Scene 1

Taa: aare phone dijiye hume!! (Comes near Rey and tries to take the phone but Rey not giving, She keeps making faces and tries taking the phone, Rey doesn't give it.)

Rey: (fake anger)Taani!! Main yaha itna confusion me hu aur tume Sharon se baat karni hai?? Kaisi Girlfriend ho tum. Sharon se baat karni hai na?? Ye lo, (gives her phone) Jao Sharon se baat karo. Meri koun fikar karta hai yaha pe. Sharon hi kyu? Vicky se bhi baat karo, Bharat se bhi baat karo, Aur Neha aur rini simi, unko bura lagega, unse bhi baat karo. Ok bye.

Scene 2

Arnv: You are important Khushi. (Khushi looks at Arnav) Tumari smile bohot important hai, tumare ye bewakoof harkate bohot important hai. Tumhara presence bohot important hai.

Khushi: (keeps staring at Arnav, slowly) kiske liye important hai?(Rabba ve)

Edited by AndyTaarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
firstly, im jus falling more and mroe in love with this FF...its jus so amazing...<3
u r a FAB writer...s*shilpa style* superrr se bhi upaarrr =D

and now for the update...taani was so cutee and rey of course...hehe =)
jus loved the LLHH moment...and the "I LO..." moment...im jus waiting ki when he says those three words to her... =)

and d song, it was a totally perfect fit...esp the color wala scene...it was like a totally perfect match *hats off to u*

the part was hillarious when Rey says, "tum mother teresa say ramu kaka kab ban gayi"...ROFL...culdnt stop laughing at that part...hehe =)

jus loved the update... and the precap... Rey gusse mein bhi kitna cute lagta hai *daydreams*
hehe =P

cant wait for the next update...and thanks for the PM...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
its very nice di i m the first plz pm me bye😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
i mean i m the first to say nice😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow I love how Arnav stand up for his Khushi that was so romantic and the way he look at her omg he is in love. Taarey are the most adorable couple ever aww Rey helping his Taani clean and cleaning her hair. Love the line when he said humare paint exhibition and the way he hug her and about to say ILU wow tooo cute. Love all the llhh moments the share. U did a awesome job love the entire update plz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav dreaming abt khushi... Aaaye haaye
the song seguence and taarey were so so so so cute!
Waiting fr next update.. Thnx fr the pm! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb amezng update..nxt part soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awwwiiee ..tooo cute..nd d song was perfect..loved it wen taani chose d paint..nd d song went like !saari duniya ek taraf he aur ek tarafhe hum...loved it...nd wen taani was standing on d chair nd nil nd vicky'plan.."dusman ki iraade sachi lagti he" awesome dat was..nd d precap cant wait..thnx fr d pm..d song selction is awesome ya!! Loved it ya!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow. This was again good. Taarey bit. Why dint rey say ilu? Well i knw it will come soon. And arnav falling for khushi. Wow. Precap as always great

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