though i was supposed to dicontinue but i thought of giving a last chance the response on the update will decide whether i ll cont or not . i wont be giving any notice i ll end it abrubtly if i dont get good respone this update is especially especially for my 6 sweet hearts n on their insistence
virika 11(haju) i love you n ur dhamki now cancel ur suicide plan ok
kashy(juju) ur sabar ka phal it was on fri but just for u i hope its meetha
amrita for ur lovely comments
little angels(alia)my sweety pie dont be angry
virika luv (ash ) all the best for exams n here ur update
sara : i didnt included u ca u ll be always the first prior sorry dond me sad i love u myy sweet heart
love u all
part 6
jeevika got scared n landed on viren laps n hugged him tightly .viren didnt knew what to do n hugged her tightly n placed a kiss on her hair.he didnt knew what he was doing but he was liking it.soon they broked the hug n came into their senses.jeevika was shy n quitely resume watching the film
viren with a smirk:dar lagta hai toh dekhti kyun hoo darpook
jeevika:very funny mr towel
viren :darpook
jeevika:towel wale uncle
they both continued teasing each other ..they started a pillow fight and were running behindeachother inside the whole house while they were running jeevika got slipped n was about to fall that viren saved her n ultimately they both landed on the sofa.. jeevika on top of viren .viren kept staring her n remove the strip of hair from her face to have a better view .
they both were having a eyelock .jeevika was the first one to realize their poition n tried to free herself but mr kharoos was not letting her to go
jeevika:viren
no reply
jeevika:viren
no reply
jeevika;towel wale uncle
viren;yes mrs towel
jeevika:whatt
viren:kuch nahi
jeevika:Lsee even u like towel wale uncle cz wen i said viren u didnt reply but to towel wale uncle u immidiately replied to me
they both came out oif the position n continue watching the movie ,while watching the movie viren heard a buzz sound .he moved to look at jeevika .she was fast asleep n was shiveringbecause it was too cold .viren moved towards her n held her in his strong arms n took her to the guest room .he softly placed her on the bed .he kept on staring her n kissed her forehead .he placed blanket on top of her .
while he was leaving jeevika hold his finger n mummered in sleep
jeevika:dont goo plzzz
viren smile n slept beside her on her hand . after years viren hada apece while sleping and a big smile on his face.jeevika was the first one to wake up .she saw viren besie her an smile on his sweetness n innocence .she carecassed his hair n gently kissed him on his cheeck
jeevika to herself:i know for the workld he is kharoos but yeh toh boht swet hai no one can hate him .why i alaways get attraceted to him i think i m in llloo
before she could complete viren woke up n sawe her talking to herself
viren:movie ka kuch zyaada asar ho gaya hai
jeevika:whatever btw i m taking a shower but what i ll wear
jviren:clothes
jeevika:acha mujhe toh laga leaves pehne hai :P pagal i know but i dont vespare clothes
viren:idea u can wera my shirt n jeans
jeevika :what
viren:ek din ki baat hai i ll drop u in the evening cz its still raining
viren went to his room n brought a shirt n pant for her .hegave it to her .in the meantime he also took a shower n came to jeevika room to check if she need anything.he saw jeevika in his shirt n pant .jeevika above button was opened .jeevika was struggling to close it .her hairs were wet n drop were falling on herface . viren went close to het n touched the button.jeevika closed her eys viren unbuttoned it n was just staring her . he wiped away the water from her face n moved more close n sclose n close
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final warning
Edited by mariarauf48 - 12 years ago
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