Arhi: The Proposal ?? Part 9 page 97 NOTE pg 109

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aveeshakiran

@aveeshakiran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

amazing story, read all the 5 parts today. loved it👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Oh I was expecting Khushi will do goof-ups in front of Darshanna but here Arnav ruined it or rather Darshanna. Glad he realized that came back to her. Poor Khushi, she did her best but how can poor soul tolerate. It was a fantastic update which took their relationship into next level in terms of understanding (hopefully all will be well in next one). Well done!

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Ashavi

@Ashavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Arnav should learn 2 keep things secret...Felt bad for Khushi...wanna see he Arnav patch up with Khushi...

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Amrita

@Amti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

I am hating this Darshuuu... [:X]... Poor khuhsiii... Please do update soon

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Priya

@rajalekshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

awesome update..luvd it..waitin 4 next part..😊

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pari_goyal

@pari_goyal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Loved d update

HATE Darshana

Arnav shares all information with her

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Arnav seems to lack in common sense.

How can you tell another girl everything you share with your girlfriend?

Khushi is cute in this story.

Love the idea of a plump, curly haired , milk drinking Khushi.

She doesn't have to be perfect in every story.

Hope Arnav makes up to her now.

Darshana can shut her big mouth and leave them alone.

Disha recommended this story to me. I loved it.

Hope you will PM me when you update next.

I'll read your other work too next.

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daisydee425

@daisydee425

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

angry with arnav
amazing update
plzzz update next part soon

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Monasha

@monasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Awesome Update..
Just Hate Darshana to Poke her nose in the couples talk n clinging to Arnav every now and then...
Just felt bad for Khushi..
How can Arnav share everything between them to his Friends??
N how the hell does that Darshana tell Khushi everything what Arnav told them...
I just want Khushi to punish Arnav for this...
N please don't include that Darshana between them again... Hate her to the core

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Long one and emotional update...
while reading this part I wonder who is actually Jahlli/a type?
as par my opinion Arnav is jahalla type not Khushi..he made a big mistake by telling each name he addresses Khushi..and to the top he took it very lightly even when he realized that Khushi is not happy with all
these conversations he didn't try to stop it for once.
I hate Darshna who is the reason behind this all and my poor bublly Khushi cried more n more all because of so called TEAMY...

when reality hits Arnav got some guts and went to her house and said sorry to her...but the best part was Buaji's I liked it very much she scolded
and caught hold of his ear...

feeling bad that she made so many plans for him and because of darshana and Arnav didn't work out properly .Thanks to Arnav's mom who called him at the right time.

continue soon dear.